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元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply

It would be shipped out today.

Lastly, I would like to confirm the model that would be sent this time is （200001.200003）, as the attached photos, there would be metal fixtures.

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Thank you for your reply

Kindly, please make sure to ship It out today.

Lastly, I would like to confirm the model that would be shipped this time （200001.200003）, is provided with a metal part to use it as a standing type as described by the the attached photo.↵
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We look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
もしよければ、私は日本語でしゃべれます。
日本と同じくインドへの配送は同じ料金ですか？

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大丈夫です。私は日本語でも会話できます。
インドへの配送は日本と同じ料金ですか？

元の翻訳
I have not known about it.
Thank you for contacting me.
I am so happy for you. Congratulations!

Lisa who holds a cute baby looks so happy.
Congratulatios again!↵
Thank you for such a nice report.

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I had no idea!
Thank you for contacting me.
I am so happy for you. Congratulations!

Lisa looks so happy holding a cute baby.↵
Congratulations again!↵
You made me proud.
Thank you for sharing me such a great news!

元の翻訳
Thank you for the message.
Your item may be lost or held by customs for inspection as it was sent overseas.
I will refund you the item price.
I am very sorry that this happened.
Please contact me if the item does eventually reach you.
Thank you.

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Thank you for the message.
Your item may be lost or held by customs for inspection as it was sent overseas.(海外発送なので「it was sent overseas」とされたのだと思いますが、この場合、受け手側にたって、...it was shipped from overseasではないでしょうか？)
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I will refund you the price of the item.
I am sincerely sorry for the inconvenience this may have caused you.
Please kindly contact me when you receive the item.→書き手は「もし」と書いていますが、when のつもりだと思います。
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I have a question about the book you have listed.
How many cards are in the book?

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I have a question about the book you are listing.
How many cards are included in the book?

元の翻訳
As for one of the 2 packages that did not arrive, it hasn't arrived yet after all, so
I would like refund the price of that one.

In addition, I would like to buy XXX if there is any in your stock.

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As for one of the 2 packages that did not arrive, it hasn't arrived yet after all, so
I would like you to refund the money I paid for that one.

In addition, I would like to buy some XXX, if there is any in your stock. Do you have any in you stock?

元の翻訳
One of the two packages has not arrived yet. I would like a refund for that one item.

If you have xxx in stock, I would like to purchase a couple of them. Do you have them in stock?

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One of the two packages has not arrived yet. I would like a refund for that one item.

If you have xxx in stock, I would like to purchase some of them. Do you have them in stock?

元の翻訳
Thank you for the message.
Your item has been shipped as follows:
Thanks.

Have you been contacted the customs?

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Thank you for the message.
Your item has been shipped as follows:
Thanks.

Have you been contacted by the customs?

元の翻訳
Thank you for the message.
The item has already been delivered, as shown below.
Thank you for your understanding.

Didn't anyone from the customs office contact you?

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Thank you for the message.
The item has already been shipped, as shown below.
Thank you for your understanding.

Has anyone from the customs office contacted you?

元の翻訳
Thank you for the message.
The goods have been delivered as shown below.
Thank you.

Have you been contacted by the customs office?

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Thank you for the message.
The goods have been shipped as shown below.
Thank you.

Have you been contacted by the customs office?

元の翻訳
I have uploaded the photo,please check it.
I am not considering returning the item. Please issue a partial refund.

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I have uploaded the photo, please check it.
I am not considering returning the item. Please issue a partial refund.

元の翻訳
I've just watched the Tour de France, so I'm going to bed. Good night.

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I've just finished watching the Tour de France, so I'm going to bed. Good night.

元の翻訳
We will meet at our office at 4:00 on Friday.
Tanaka can join us from 4:00 to 4:30.

Let me make sure if you come by yourself. Thank you.

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We will meet at our office at 4:00 pm on Friday.
Tanaka can join us from 4:00 to 4:30.

Let me make sure if you come by yourself. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Please visit our company on Friday at 4 pm.
Mister Tanaka will able to participate from 4 pm to 4:30 pm.

Just for confirmation, are you coming alone?

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Please visit our company on Friday at 4 pm.
Mr. Tanaka will able to participate from 4 pm to 4:30 pm.

Just for confirmation, are you coming alone?

元の翻訳
The items I ordered on 8th and 11th of July haven't arrived yet, did you send them already?
Could you let me know when you sent these items?
Thank you in advance.

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The items I ordered on 8th and 11th of July haven't arrived yet, did you send them already?
Could you let me know when you sent them?
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
I have not received items that I ordered on July 8th and 11th.
Have you sent them to me?

Please let me know when you sent them.

Thank you.

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I have not received the items that I ordered on July 8th and 11th.
Have you already shipped them out to me?

Please let me know when you have shipped them.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
About the sewing machine.

What I meant by saying ○○ is that I have only tried straight and zigzag stitches and not others.
I have checked the basic operation.

The voltage of this CD player is 100 V.
I am not sure if it will work all right without using a transformer but it might be safer if you use one.

The white part is floral design.
On the body, an ancient Japanese residence is inscribed.
The material is iron.

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About the sewing machine.

What I meant by saying ○○ is that I have only tried straight and zigzag stitches and not others.
I have checked the basic operation.

The voltage of this CD player is 100 V.
I am not sure if it will work all right without using a transformer but it might be safer if you use one.

The white part is floral design.
On the body, an ancient Japanese residence is engraved.
The material is iron.

元の翻訳
About the sewing machine,
the part means I left blank means I have not tried other than in a straight line and zigzag.
I have checked that the basics functions.

This CD player's voltage is 100V.
Do not know if it will work without the transformer.↵
It is safe to use the transformer.

The white part is a flower.
The body has an old Japanese house carved.
Material is steel.

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About the sewing machine,
The part where I have indicated as ◯◯ means that I have not tried other than the straight line and zigzag sewing.
I have checked the basic functions.

This CD player's voltage is 100V.
Do not know if it will work without the transformer, however it is safer to use it with the transformer.

The white part is a floral design.
The body has a engraving of an old Japanese house.
Material is iron.

元の翻訳
Regarding the sewing machine
The part where I wrote ○○ means that I have not tried other functions besides straight and zigzag sewing.
I have tried the basic operations.

The voltage for this CD player is 100w.
I do not know if it will work without a transformer.
Using a transformer would be safer.

The white part is a flower design.
The body is engraved with the design of a Japanese old house.
The material is iron.

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Regarding the sewing machine
The part where I wrote ○○ means that I have not tried the functions other than straight and zigzag sewing.
I have checked the basic operations.

The voltage for this CD player is 100v.
I do not know if it will work without a transformer.
Using a transformer would be safer.

The white part is a floral design.
The body is engraved with the design of a Japanese old house.
The material is iron.

元の翻訳
Thanks for message.
We garuantee to repair it if there is an initial opreration or initial error.
Best regards.

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Thanks for message.
We guarantee to repair it if there is an initial failure.
Best regards.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
In case there is initial failure, we will cover it under our warranty.
Best regards,

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Thank you for your message.
In case there is an initial failure, we will cover it under our warranty.
Best regards,