翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

2つのうち1つだけ届かなかった荷物についてですが、結局届いていないので
1つ分の代金を返金を希望します。

また、もしXXXの在庫があればいくつか購入したいのですが、在庫はありますか？

英語

As for one of the 2 packages that did not arrive, it hasn't arrived yet after all, so
I would like refund the price of that one.

In addition, I would like to buy XXX if there is any in your stock.

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chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/07/26 10:40:37

元の翻訳
As for one of the 2 packages that did not arrive, it hasn't arrived yet after all, so
I would like refund the price of that one.

In addition, I would like to buy XXX if there is any in your stock.

修正後
As for one of the 2 packages that did not arrive, it hasn't arrived yet after all, so
I would like you to refund the money I paid for that one.

In addition, I would like to buy some XXX, if there is any in your stock. Do you have any in you stock?

[mechamami]

有り難うございました。