Chris Ishii　 (bluejeans71) — 付けたレビュー

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1. The Song of the Watcher at the Farthest End

How far can I go in this lifetime? Who will I meet at the end of my journey? Does another world await beyond that? The watcher at the farthest end awaits you.

2. Dreams of the Azure Thorns

Within a lush forest of blue trees, What dreams did those renowned souls dream? Did they long to be united with a beautiful woman? Their ideals remain unknown.

3. Heart of the Cosmos

Even if their bodies were fragile, their lives fleeting, The brilliance of life remains strong and beautiful.

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1. The Song of the Watcher at the Farthest End

How far can I go in this lifetime? Who will I meet at the end of my journey? Does another world await beyond that? The watcher at the farthest end awaits you.

2. Dreams of the Azure Thorns

Within a lush forest of blue trees, what dreams did those renowned souls dream? Did they long to be united with a beautiful woman? Their ideals remain unknown.

3. Heart of the Cosmos

Even if their bodies were fragile, their lives fleeting, The brilliance of life remains strong and beautiful.

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Hi, My name is A. I'm sending this message from Japan.

Let me tell you this first, I am your huge fun.

Do you have spare kits for "Jack"?
I can't find it anywhere and I'm feeling sad.

I hope I can buy "Jack kit" from you.

I'm looking forward to your good reply.

Thank you for reading this suddenly message.

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Hi, my name is A. I'm sending this message from Japan.

Let me tell you this first, I am your huge fan.

Do you have spare kits for "Jack"?
I can't find it anywhere and I feel sad.

I hope I can buy "Jack kit" from you.

I'm looking forward to your good reply.

Thank you for reading this sudden message.

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I am "A". I am sending you a message from Japan.
First of all, I am a big fan of yours.
I just wanted to ask but do you have any spare kits of "Jack"?

I am so sad that I am looking everywhere for them but they are all sold out so it is hard to find them anywhere.

I am very keen to buy a "Jack kit” from you.
I am waiting for your positive answer.
Thank you for reading my sudden message to you.

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I am A. I am sending you a message from Japan.
First of all, I am a big fan of yours.
I just wanted to ask but do you have any spare kits of "Jack"?

I am so sad that I am looking everywhere for them but they are all sold out so it is hard to find them anywhere.

I am very keen to buy a "Jack kit” from you.
I am waiting for good news front you.
Thank you for reading my sudden message to you.

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My name is A. I'm sending a message from Japan.
Let me inform first, I'm your big fan.

Please allow me to ask you. Do you have spare kits of "Jack"?
I looked for it everywhere, but it was sold out. I'm so sad.

I'm keen to purchase "Jack Kit" from you.
I'm looking forward to hearing good news news from you.

Sorry for my sudden message. Thank you in advance for taking a look of it.

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My name is A. I'm sending a message from Japan.
Let me inform first, I'm your big fan.

Please allow me to ask you. Do you have spare kits of "Jack"?
I looked for it everywhere, but it was sold out. I'm so sad.

I'm keen to purchase "Jack Kit" from you.
I'm looking forward to hearing good news from you.

Sorry for my sudden message. Thank you in advance for taking a look of it.

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I will contact you officially, once details of Cai’s order has been decided.
(I am assuming, the order details will be a Cai-looking doll just like the Cai you have made. I would love the hair to be brown, straight mohair).
Please let me know when Cai’s kit arrives.
1. I would like you to check the balance of the head and limbs. (I’m hoping for a doll a little taller than Cai. 50cm-55cm).
2. I would like to check the balance of the kit and glass eyes. (This is because, if the iris of the eyes are not the desired size, a rearrangement will be needed).

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I will contact you officially, once details of Cai’s order have been decided.
(I am assuming, the order details will be a Cai-looking doll just like the Cai you have made. I would love the hair to be brown, straight mohair).
Please let me know when Cai’s kit arrives.
1. I would like you to check the balance of the head and limbs. (I’m hoping for a doll a little taller than Cai. 50cm-55cm).
2. I would like to check the balance of the kit and glass eyes. (This is because, if the iris of the eyes are not the desired size, a rearrangement will be needed).

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上司、電話で定期的に話し合っていますが、何もうまくいっていません。日本に来てすべてのことを話し合ってくれたら、私たちの計画がすべて明確になり、それを実行できるでしょう。そうでなければ、時間の無駄になってしまいます。

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〜さん、お互いに電話で定期的にやり取りしていますが、何もうまくいっていません。来日していただき、すべての件を打ち合わせすることで、双方の計画がすべて明確になり、実行できます。さもないと、ただ時間の無駄です。

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Dear Adani,
Hi, my name is John.
I found your home page to be very nice and fashionable indeed.
It fascinates me.
May I ask you the following questions?
1 Do you have stock of 〇〇〇 by Prada?
2 What is the price?
3 Is shipping to Japan possible?
John.

*Could you send me a list?
*Could you send me photos?
*Please send by either DHL or post.

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Dear Adani,
Hi, my name is John.
I apologize to you for contacting you so suddenly.↵
I found your home page to be very nice and fashionable indeed.
It fascinates me.
May I ask you the following questions?
1 Do you have stock of 〇〇〇 by Prada?
2 What is the price?
3 Is shipping to Japan possible?
John.

*Could you send me a list?
*Could you send me photos?
*Please send by either DHL or post.

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以下のうち、利益相反ポリシーに含まれているものを選択してください。（該当するものをすべて選択）

利益の申告
利益の管理
利益の記録
スタッフの要件
その他（追加のコメントを提供してください）
この契約の提供に影響を及ぼす可能性または実際の利益相反についての認識がないことを確認してください。
State Streetへ提供される製品/サービスに特有のインセンティブ報酬の取り決めが適切であることを確認するため、インセンティブ報酬ポリシーと/または十分な監督とコントロールがあることを確認してください（例：信用失墜、訴訟増加、または金融機関へのその他のリスクをもたらす）。

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以下のうち、利益相反ポリシーに含まれているものを提示してください。（該当するものをすべて選択）

利益の申告
利益の管理
利益の記録
スタッフの要件
その他（追加のコメントを提供してください）
この契約の提供に影響を及ぼす可能性または実際の利益相反についての認識がないことを確認してください。
State Streetへ提供される製品/サービスに特有のインセンティブ報酬の取り決めが適切であることを確認するため、インセンティブ報酬ポリシーと/または十分な監督とコントロールがあることを確認してください（例：信用失墜、訴訟増加、または金融機関へのその他のリスクをもたらす）。

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尊敬なるお客様、

何らかの理由でご不満をお感じいただいたこと、誠に申し訳ございません。お客様のご要望にお応えするため、このメッセージの添付ファイルに、以下の写真をご覧いただけます：
- 赤で下線が引かれたZINDと製品番号の写真。このコード「AA」でインターネットで検索すると、同じ製品であることが確認できます。
- 携帯電話のNFC機能をONにし、写真に表示されたラベルの上にかざします。リンクが表示され、それをクリックすると、製品の正規性を直接MONDOのウェブサイト（ウェブサイトアドレスをご確認ください）で確認できます。また、ロゴのバッジでも同じことができます。
関税はDHLの送料に関連しており、製品価格には影響しません。
ご返金も可能です！

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お客様へ

何らかの理由でご不満をお感じいただいたこと、誠に申し訳ございません。お客様のご要望にお応えするため、このメッセージの添付ファイルで、以下の写真をご覧いただけます：
- 赤で下線が引かれたZINDと製品番号の写真。このコード「AA」でインターネットで検索すると、同じ製品であることが確認できます。
- 携帯電話のNFC機能をONにし、写真に表示されたラベルの上にかざします。リンクが表示され、それをクリックすると、製品の正規性を直接MONDOのウェブサイト（ウェブサイトアドレスをご確認ください）で確認できます。また、ロゴのバッジでも同じことができます。
関税はDHLの送料に関連しており、製品価格には影響しません。
ご返金も可能です！

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Please take a look at other feedback.
We have received lots of positive feedback from buyers whom are grateful for the inclusion of rare cards.

I would like to continue selling on eBay for a long time to come.
I do not want to be hindered by such unreasonable negative feedback.

Please could you help us by deleting this unreasonable negative feedback?
Thank you

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Please take a look at other feedback.
We have received lots of positive feedback from buyers who are grateful for the inclusion of rare cards.

I would like to continue selling on eBay for a long time to come.
I do not want to be hindered by such unreasonable negative feedback.

Please could you help us by deleting this unreasonable negative feedback?
Thank you

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Although there is something like white dirt on the left sleeve shown in the photo, is it possible to add more photos of this particular part?

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Although there is something like white dirt on the right sleeve shown in the photo, is it possible to add more photos of this particular part?

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Yes, I understand. Thank you for your reply despite being busy.
I am waiting for your reply around the 7th of August.
I appreciate your continued support for me.
Once again, thank you as always.

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Yes, I understand. Thank you for your reply despite your busy schedule.
I will be expecting to hear from you around the 7th of August (August 7).
I hope we will continue developing a good relationship between us.
Once again, thank you as always.

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We would like to inform you of our technical views as follows.

We assume that the data you gave is the component detected at different irradiation spots (*) in A, and that the difference is the difference in the component data.
* (wire surface vs. wire surface precipitates?)

The total amount of ingredients is as shown in the grades, and I believe the difference in values is due to the difference in irradiation spots.
We believe that the B component is uncontrollable by changing the sintering conditions.

Also, We received a PO from your EDI, but the quantity is one.
What is this? Please confirm.

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We would like to inform you of our technical views as follows.

We assume that the data you gave is the component detected at different irradiation spots (*) in A, and that the difference is the difference in the component data.
* (wire surface vs. wire surface precipitates?)

The total amount of ingredients is as shown in the grades, and I believe the difference in values is due to the difference in irradiation spots.
We believe that the B component is uncontrollable by changing the sintering conditions.

We also received a PO from your EDI, but the quantity is one.
What is this? Please confirm.

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Alright, I am listening to the audio file that I downloaded shortly. Thank you so much for giving me the precious audio source along with the CD that you have the last. I will cherish them. Also, I am looking forward to the arrival of the package.

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Alright, I downloaded the music file a while ago and I am listening to it now. Thank you for the precious audio source along with the CD you have owned. I will cherish them. Also, I am looking forward to the arrival of the package.

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I received different item, don't you have this item?
If you have this item, too, I would like to purchase it, too, so could you put it for sale?

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I received a different item, don't you have another copy of the product ?
If you have one, I would like to purchase it, too, so could you put it for sale?

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Thank you for purchasing our product.
The product has already been shipped from Japan to the office of our staff in California.
It will be forwarded to you from there, and a tracking number will be provided.
We expect it to arrive at your location in about a week.
We apologize for any inconvenience this may have caused and appreciate your understanding.

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Thank you for purchasing our product.
It has already been shipped from Japan to the office of our staff in California.
It will be forwarded to you from there, and a tracking number will be provided.
You will receive the item in about a week.
We apologize for the inconvenience.↵
Thank you for your understanding.

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ごめんなさい。
そうです、紐の結びめを切って足を体から外してください。そして気をつけながら充填材とガラスのビーズを取り除いてください。そして、真っすぐになるかをチェックしてください。それを私に知らせてください。
または、人形を箱から取り出し、あしを少し揺すってみてください。これで改善すれば良いのですが。

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ごめんなさい。
この状況に関して、お詫びします。↵
そうです、紐の結びめを切って足を体から外してください。そして気をつけながら充填材とガラスのビーズを取り除いてください。そして、真っすぐになるかをチェックしてください。それを私に知らせてください。
または、人形を箱から取り出し、あしを少し揺すってみてください。これで改善すれば良いのですが。

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Made in Japan. Top quality control by excellent blacksmiths.

Make mowing easier. You can mow grass with minimal effort.
The steel has a double-layer structure and keeps sharp for a long time.

Among Japanese hardware with a high reputation worldwide, they are made at a Saga Cutlery factory, which is famous for its high quality. Traditional Japanese techniques that have continued for 400 years are still being used in this scythe. Please contact us if you have any questions.

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Made in Japan. Top quality control by excellent blacksmiths.

Make mowing easier. You can mow grass with minimal effort.
The steel has a double-layer structure and keeps sharp for a long time.

Among Japanese hardware with a high reputation worldwide, they are made at a Saga Cutlery factory, which is famous for its high quality. Traditional Japanese techniques that have continued for 400 years are still being used in this scythe.

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How about a telephone meeting at 10 a.m. tomorrow, together with Manager A?
A is more knowledgeable about this matter than me.

However, even with the meeting, as our company has already declined the quotation from supplier,
this will just again be an explanation on how it is difficult for our company to provide an estimate to your company for this matter.

We would like to register our shared address OO for your company's automatic mail registration.
(To prevent any unread communications in event of change in personnel)

By the way, what is the outcome of the quotation provided previously?

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How about a telephone meeting at 10 a.m. tomorrow, together with Manager A?
A knows about this matter better than I.

However, even with the meeting, as our company has already declined the quotation from supplier,
this will just again be an explanation on how it is difficult for our company to provide an estimate to your company for this matter.

We would like to register our shared address OO for your company's automatic mail registration.
(To prevent any unread communications in event of change in personnel)

By the way, what is the outcome of the quotation you previously presented?

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Hi.
I just purchased your license just now, but I bought the regular version by mistake.
I meant to buy the Pro version.
Could you give me a refund, or I can pay you the difference so could you upgrade mine to the Pro version?
Thank you in advance.

・Trading conditions
・payment methods
・Trading ID
・Amount paid

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Hi.
I just purchased your license just now, but I bought the regular version by mistake.
I meant to buy the Pro version.
Could you give me a refund, or I can pay you the difference so could you upgrade mine to the Pro version?
Thank you in advance.

・Trading conditions
・Payment methods
・Trading ID
・Amount paid