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元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I have mistakenly paid twice for the same order. So please pay back the excess amount I paid.
On top of that, why is My Order History deleted?

The following is my paypal transaction ID. Please check it.

修正後
Thank you for your reply.
It says that I paid twice for the same order. So please pay back the excess amount I paid.
On top of that, why is My Order History deleted?

The following is my paypal transaction ID. Please check it.

元の翻訳
1.　全ての部品を床に置く
2.　ベースにクロスバーをつなげる
3.　ボルトをしっかりと固定する
4.　ハンモックの枠の棒をベースにつなげる
5.　ボルトをしっかりと固定する
6.　フックとワッシャーをハンモックのサイズに合わせて適切な穴に挿入する
7.　ウィングナットを固定してフックを固定する
8.　写真のようにハンモックをつるして最初に荷重したときに少したわむように設定する。ハンモックの伸び幅を調整する
9.　注意：　大人がそばにいないときは子供たちだけでブランコとして遊ばせないこと。2本のベースレッグの間に必ずハンモックを入れておくこと。ベースレッグを超えたあたりには座らないこと。定期的にフックとねじがきちんと固定されているか確認すること。

修正後
1.　全ての部品を床に置く
2.　土台にクロスバーをつなげる
3.　ボルトをしっかりと固定する
4.　ハンモックの枠の棒を土台につなげる
5.　ボルトをしっかりと固定する
6.　フックとワッシャーをハンモックのサイズに合わせて適切な穴に挿入する
7.　ウィングナットを固定してフックを固定する
8.　写真のようにハンモックをつるして最初に荷重したときに少したわむように設定する。ハンモックの伸び幅を調整する
9.　注意：　大人がそばにいないときは子供たちだけでブランコとして遊ばせないこと。2本のベースレッグの間に必ずハンモックを入れておくこと。土台の足を超えたあたりには座らないこと。定期的にフックとねじがきちんと固定されているか確認すること。

元の翻訳
I am sorry for making you wait for a long time.

We have just received the repaired item from the maker.

The inside module and the second hand are replaced with new ones and they are working properly.

We will ship the item through EMS about 10 hours later.

The track number is ●●.

We placed in the package a $19.99 worth Amazon Gift Card to compensate for the shipping fee you paid.

It will arrive in your address on around June 21st.

Please wait until then. Thank you very much.

修正後
We are sorry for keeping you wait for a long time.

We have just received the repaired item from the maker.

The inside module and the second hand are replaced with new ones and they are working properly.

We will ship the item through EMS about 10 hours later.

The track number is ●●.

We placed in the package a $19.99 worth Amazon Gift Card to compensate for the shipping fee you paid.

It will arrive in your address on around June 21st.

Please wait until then. Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Reservations Information is here→http://t.a-ticket.jp/anis14-sdm

Date:2014/8/14 Thur.
Open 16:00 / Beginning 17:00
Location: National Yoyogi Stadium first gymnasium, Tokyo
Performing Artists: AAA(JP)/ FUTURE BOYZ(JP)/ Lead(JP)
ROOT FIVE(JP)/ SOLIDEMO（JP）/ U-KISS（KR）/ Wilber Pan（TW）/ w-inds.（JP）
and more... ※ranking by alphabet

修正後
Information about reservations is here→http://t.a-ticket.jp/anis14-sdm

Date:2014/8/14 Thur.
Open 16:00 / Beginning 17:00
Location: National Yoyogi Stadium first gymnasium, Tokyo
Performing Artists: AAA(JP)/ FUTURE BOYZ(JP)/ Lead(JP)
ROOT FIVE(JP)/ SOLIDEMO（JP）/ U-KISS（KR）/ Wilber Pan（TW）/ w-inds.（JP）
and more... ※in alphabetic order

元の翻訳
#Xcess
Appreciate your prompt shipment.
With regard to Jetspeed, please let us know the price.

#yus
We have a question regarding the declaration price. Would the entering amount be the sum of the item price and the shipping fee within the US (between the original buyer and MYUS)? In other words, the sum will be the amount shown on the invoice issued from the original buyer.

#abit
Please send us the invoice. We will settle the payment as soon as we receive it.
Also, we await your response on SLDR430.

修正後
#Xcess
We appreciate your prompt shipment.
With regard to Jetspeed, please let us know the price.

#yus
We have a question regarding the declaration price. Would the entered amount be the sum of the price of the item and the shipping fee within the US (from the buyer to MYUS)? In other words, the sum will be the amount shown on the buyer's invoice.

#abit
We are waiting for the invoice to be sent. We will settle the payment as soon as we receive it.
Also, we await your response about SLDR430.

元の翻訳
-May 31st (Sat)
"Jujika ～The Movie 'Gakkou no Kaidan -Noroi no Kotoba-' Ver.～" mu-mo Version Individual Sign Event
Place: Avex Building

-June 1st (Sun)
"Jujika ～The Movie 'Gakkou no Kaidan -Noroi no Kotoba-' Ver.～" mu-mo Version Individual Sign Event
Place: Avex Building

-June 3rd (Tue)
"Killing Me Softly" Release Celebration Mini Live & Shake-Hands Event
Place: Lalaport Toyosu

-June 4th (Wed)
"Killing Me Softly" Release Celebration Mini Live & Shake-Hands Event
Place: Nishinomiya Gardens

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-May 31st (Sat)
"Jujika ～The Movie 'Gakkou no Kaidan -Noroi no Kotoba-' Ver.～" mu-mo Version Individual Autograph Event
Place: Avex Building

-June 1st (Sun)
"Jujika ～The Movie 'Gakkou no Kaidan -Noroi no Kotoba-' Ver.～" mu-mo Version Individual Autograph Event
Place: Avex Building

-June 3rd (Tue)
"Killing Me Softly" Release Celebration Mini Live & Shake-Hands Event
Place: Lalaport Toyosu

-June 4th (Wed)
"Killing Me Softly" Release Celebration Mini Live & Shake-Hands Event
Place: Nishinomiya Gardens

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

If the product is lost, we can check where the product is lost.
There is a small possibility of the loss that we can't really help.
For the case of such a loss, we will take responsibilities such as refund.

I'm not well aware of shipments to outside countries, but we will check as much as possible.

修正後
Thank you for your message.

If the product is lost, we can check where the product was lost.
There is a small possibility of that kind of loss that we can't really help.
For the case of such a loss, we will take responsibilities such as refund.

I'm not well aware of shipments to outside countries, but we will check as much as possible.