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元の翻訳
The set expected delivery date was too early, so it could not be delivered on the specified date. This delay is being caused by an unexpected stop at the customs.

In the future we will modify the expected delivery time, and we will make sure that we will contact our customers about the expected delivery date and the customs.

We will utilize FBA here on to prevent this sort of problems to happen, and will try hard to upgrade the quality of our customer services.

Thank you a lot for your understanding.

修正後
As we have set the expected delivery date too early, the delivery will not be made on the specified date. This delay is being caused by an unexpected stop at the customs.

In the future we will modify the expected delivery time, and we will make sure that we will contact our customers beforehand about the expected delivery date and the customs.

From now on, we will utilize FBA to prevent this sort of problems from happening, and will try hard to upgrade the quality of our customer services.

Thank you very much for your understanding.

元の翻訳
The set expected delivery date was too early, so it could not be delivered on the specified date. This delay is being caused by an unexpected stop at the customs.

In the future we will modify the expected delivery time, and we will make sure that we will contact our customers about the expected delivery date and the customs.

We will utilize FBA here on to prevent this sort of problems to happen, and will try hard to upgrade the quality of our customer services.

Thank you a lot for your understanding.

修正後
The set expected delivery date was too early, so it could not be delivered on the specified date. This delay is being caused by an unexpected stop at the customs.

In the future we will modify the expected delivery time, and we will make sure that we will contact our customers about the expected delivery date and the customs.

We will utilize FBA from here on to prevent this sort of problems to happen, and will try hard to upgrade the quality of our customer services.

Thank you a lot for your understanding.

元の翻訳
What?? Your house caught on fire!??
I am very surprised to know such thing happened.
But you gave me an email so it must mean that you are safe? Are your family members not hurt?
It is really sad to hear that your R/C burnt down but I guess you should be thankful that you are alive.
That's alright! I am sure that you will again build a nice R/C.

P.S. Thanks for subscribing to my youtube channel. :) Please upload some videos! I will watch them for sure! :)

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What?? Your house was caught on fire!??
I am very surprised to know that something terrible happened (to you).
But you gave me an email so it must mean that you are safe. How about your family members, are they safe?
It is really sad to hear that your R/C burnt down but I guess you should be thankful that you are alive.
That's alright! I am sure that you will again build a nice R/C.

P.S. Thanks for subscribing to my youtube channel. :) Please upload some videos! I will watch them for sure! :)

元の翻訳
(middle part omitted) The metal balls won exchange for the prizes. Then the prize will be exchanged for money at the Prize Exchange where cash is brought in from the pachinko place.

It is one of the recognized gambles in Japan. By the way, there are also pachisuros that are in slot machine style.

▼Those animes became pachinkos!

Mobile Suit Gundam

Neon Genesis Evangelion

MACROSS Frontier

▼Rapid increase in the number of female fans!?

KNIGHTS OF THE ZODIAC

The Rose of Versailles

Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion

▼Hard-boiled… The man have joined too!

Golgo 13

FIST OF THE NORTH STAR

修正後
(middle part omitted) In exchange for the metal balls you won, you can exchange it for the prizes. Then the prize will be exchanged for money at the Prize Exchange where cash is brought from the pachinko place.

It is one of the recognized gambles in Japan. By the way, there are also pachisuros that are in slot machine style.

▼Those animes became pachinkos!

Mobile Suit Gundam

Neon Genesis Evangelion

MACROSS Frontier

▼Rapid increase in the number of female fans!?

KNIGHTS OF THE ZODIAC

The Rose of Versailles

Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion

▼Hard-boiled… That men have joined too!

Golgo 13

FIST OF THE NORTH STAR

元の翻訳
Stay together even in dreams! A must-have for Otakus! The world of hug pillows.

Your life will turn colorful once you fall in love with 2D. The strong love of wanting to get hurt.. excuse me, to be together with Moe characters has now reached inside the bed. This time, we will introduce you the Dakimakura (hug pillow), which is an item that allows you have good sleep where you can be two-dimensioned whether you are awake or asleep, and is a must-have for Otakus. Which girl should I sleep with tonight?

▼What is a Dakimakura!
A Dakimakura(hug pillow) is a kind of bedclothes. Although it is defined to be a kind of pillows, it particularly refers to the bigger ones that you can hug, and often not lay under your head.

修正後
Stay together even in dreams! A must-have for Otakus! The world of hug pillows.

Your life will turn colorful once you fall in love with 2D. The strong love of wanting to get hurt.. excuse me, to be together with Moe characters has now reached inside the bed. This time, we will introduce you the Dakimakura (hug pillow), which is an item that allows you have a good sleep where you can be two-dimensioned whether you are awake or asleep, and is a must-have for Otakus. Which girl should I sleep with tonight?

▼What is a Dakimakura!
A Dakimakura(hug pillow) is a kind of bedclothes. Although it is defined to be a kind of pillows, it particularly refers to the bigger ones that you can hug, and often not lay under your head.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the draught agreement.

We are checking through the contents now.
It looks fine as I have read it, however we also asked professional to double check.
Please give us some time to respond.
The paragraphs are in a wrong order; it is now 9, 10, 9, 10, 11. Please fix that.

Snow is falling on some areas of Japan. They have broken the record. We are in deep trouble as the public transportations are paralyzed (sigh).
I heard it does not snow usually in Idaho, but please stay warm and healthy, Andrew.

It will not be so long until the contract finalizes.
I am very much looking forward to it.
Thanks.

修正後
Thank you for the draft agreement.

We are checking through the contents now.
It looks fine as I have read it, however we also asked professional to double check.
Please give us some time to respond.
The paragraphs are in a wrong order; it is now 9, 10, 9, 10, 11. Please fix that.

Some parts of Japan were hit by heavy snow They have broken the record. We are in deep trouble as the public transportations are paralyzed (sigh).
I heard it does not snow usually in Idaho, but please stay warm and healthy, Andrew.

It will not be so long until the contract finalizes.
I am very much looking forward to it.
Thanks.

元の翻訳
御早い返事をありがとうございます。残念な事に、私の欲しかったバッグは売り切れでした。。よく考えてみたのですが、このまま送っていただいたバッグをもらったほうが、また荷造りして返送するよりは良いかと思いまして。そうなりますと、こちらの商品は2980円なので、2000円を私のアカウントに返金して頂けますか？(4980円支払ったので）返金が完了次第、この事案は終了とします。

こういう失敗が将来起こらない事を望みます。それと、御返事大変ありがとうございます。

修正後
御早い返事をありがとうございます。残念な事に、私の欲しかったバッグは売り切れでした。よく考えてみたのですが、このまま送っていただいたバッグをもらったほうが、また荷造りして返送するよりは良いかと思いまして。そうなりますと、こちらの商品は2980円なので、2000円を私のアカウントに返金して頂けますか？(4980円支払ったので）返金が完了次第、この事案は終了とします。

こういう失敗が将来起こらない事を望みます。それと、御返事大変ありがとうございます。

元の翻訳
Hello I am 〇〇. I bought the Coleman lantern from you last year.

I noticed something when I took a look at it a while ago.
I could not find the Coleman funnel, which was supposed to be included.

Did you ship it with the lantern?
Please let me know.

Regards,
〇〇

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Hello this is 〇〇. I bought the Coleman lantern from you last year.

I noticed something when I took a look at it a while ago.
I could not find the Coleman funnel, which was supposed to be included.

Did you ship it with the lantern?
Please let me know.

Regards,
〇〇

元の翻訳
I apologize for contacting you while you are on your business trip.
If the order is placed by the end of this week, the shipment is going to be in April.
The shipment will be delayed if you order it later.
If you are trying to meet a certain delivery date, then I would recommend you to place your order by the end of the week.
If you were busy on your trip and could not make it, when would you be able to confirm the order?

修正後
I apologize for contacting you while you are on your business trip.
If the order is placed by the end of this week, they will be shipped in April.
The shipment will be delayed if you order it later.
If you are trying to meet a certain delivery date, then I would recommend you to place your order by the end of the week.
If you were busy with your trip and could not place the order within this week, when would you be able to confirm the order?

元の翻訳
Everything is in stock in FL EXCEPT 407122001 which is only in CA. Last purchase price in RED. Do you want me to go ahead & place order? If so, does it ship to the same place in Medley FL that the last one did?↵
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全ての在庫は、カリフォルニアのみにある407122001を除き、フロリダにございます。最後の購入時の値段は赤にて表示しています。商品の注文を確定していいでしょうか？　その場合は、前回の商品と同じように、Medly, FLに送れば良いのでしょうか？

see below and advise DHL number for pick up.
下をご覧になり、商品受け取りの際のDHLナンバーを教えてください。

Below are the weights and dimensions on the individual items and boxed:
Let me know if you should need anything else↵
以下は、個々のアイテムの重さと、寸法です：
もし他に何か必要であれば、教えてください、

Susan, when you can (no super rush), send him size and dimensions of the items in yellow. ↵
スーザンさん、出来るときで良いので、彼に黄色のアイテムのサイズと寸法を送っておいてください。

Beth, when you can, please check stock and advise what price was on his last shipment. Thanks. Account is 220193
ベスさん、出来る時に、在庫状況と最後の商品発送の時の価格を教えておいてください。ありがとう。
アカウントは220193です。

○○ has forwarded to me the attached “Evaluation of Test Results” document.
OOさんが、添付された"テスト結果の評価”のドキュメントを私に転送して来られました。
Please let me know if this will suffice for your order ○○
００さん、これであなたの注文に事足りるでしょうか？↵
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修正後
カリフォルニアのみにある商品番号407122001を除き、他の商品は全てフロリダにございます。貴社の最後の購入時の値段は赤にて表示しています。商品の注文を確定していいでしょうか？　その場合は、前回の商品と同じように、フロリダのMedlyに送れば良いのでしょうか？


下をご覧になり、DHLに引き取らせるために貴社のDHL口座番号を教えてください。


以下は、個々のアイテムを梱包した時の重さと、寸法です：
もし他に何か必要な情報があれば、教えてください、

スーザンさん、出来るときで良いので(至急ではなく)、彼に黄色でハイライトした商品を梱包したときの寸法と重量を送っておいてください。


ベスさん、出来る時に、在庫数量と、最後に商品を出荷した時の価格を私に連絡してください。ありがとう。
彼の会社の口座番号は220193です。


OOさんが、添付された"テスト結果の評価”のドキュメントを私に転送して来られました。

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００さん、これであなたの注文条件に事足りるでしょうか？