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元の翻訳
I fail upgrade, even processed upgrade many times (the character of a menu is not displayed)
Is upgrade impossible for 1.5 from 1.3 possibly ?
Or isn't the update file of the database of MySql wrong (neighborhood which can choose language)?
Moreover, although I tried to log in from the following URL, it was not able to log in.
Since I could not processed, even I processed upgrade many times, when it is going to install newly, is only a pure white page displayed, and I can't new installation be performed, either.
Could you support me advise?

修正後
I fail upgrade, even processed upgrade many times (the character of a menu is not displayed)
Is upgrade impossible for 1.5 from 1.3 possibly [awkward]?
Or isn't the update file of the database of MySql wrong (neighborhood which can choose language)?
Moreover, although I tried to log in from the following URL, I was not able to log in.
Since I could not processed [ungrammatical], even I processed upgrade many times, when it is going to install newly, is only a pure white page displayed, and I can't new installation be performed, either [unreadable].
Could you support me advise [ungrammatical]?

元の翻訳
I fail upgrade, even processed upgrade many times (the character of a menu is not displayed)
Is upgrade impossible for 1.5 from 1.3 possibly ?
Or isn't the update file of the database of MySql wrong (neighborhood which can choose language)?
Moreover, although I tried to log in from the following URL, it was not able to log in.
Since I could not processed, even I processed upgrade many times, when it is going to install newly, is only a pure white page displayed, and I can't new installation be performed, either.
Could you support me advise?

修正後
I fail to upgrade, no matter how many times I try. (The characters on the menu are not displayed)
Does it possibly mean that upgrading from 1.3 to 1.5 is not available?
Or, perhaps, you might have provided the wrong update file for MySQL database by mistake (The part where I can choose the language)?
Moreover, although I tried to log in from the following URL, I was not able to log in.
Since I could not upgrade after so many failures, I even tried a fresh installation but I wasn't able to do it either as only the blank page was displayed on the screen.
Could you offer an advise?

元の翻訳
It starts, and a light noise comes out periodically and continues immediately about 2.3 minutes.
The level of a noise is the not a level but minimum quantity which affect music appreciation.
Probably I think that the portion is the noise which has occurred since a thing like mold adheres and it has not removed completely.
The other state is very beautiful like other records.

修正後
As soon as the operation starts, a light noise comes out periodically and continues for about 2 to 3 minutes.
The level of the noise is not at the level to affect music appreciation, as it is very small.
Probably I think that the noise is originated from the portion where something like mold is stuck and not removed completely.
The rest of the conditions are excellent just as other records.

元の翻訳
I received a rug on yesterday, I ordered. However please see a picture which coloer is different.
Label is [MINT], even I ordered [AQUA].

This product doesn't have [MINT] color.
I would like to confirm, if [MINT]and [AQUA] is the same or not.
I wonder, it seems light blue.

I wish, I can hear your reply soon.

修正後
I received a rug on yesterday. However, please see a picture.
The label is indicated as [MINT], when the color that I ordered was [AQUA].

You did not have this product in [MINT].
I would like to confirm, if [MINT] and [AQUA] are supposed to be the same color.
It seems to be light blue for me.

I hope to hear from you soon.

元の翻訳
（１）AがTの顧客または現地調整に行う好ましい作業やプレゼンテーションの違いは何か？
（２）　Tのような外国市場での成功のために必要な道具として、どんなコミュニケーションやマーケット突破戦略があるか？
（３）　政府事業との合体や公私事業はポートフォリオの顧客リストにある公共事業の一部の方針があるのではない？
（４）Tの年間ビジネス運営後　ビジネス案件上、顧客に近づく特例は何か？
（５）運営上のあらゆる困難、あるいはコミュニケーションは、　T のような新しいロケーションでの革新的ビジネスのような取り込みを試むようにAは考えたか？

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（１）Tの顧客基板に対してAが提供することを好む業務やプレゼンテーションを行う際の違い、あるいは特定地域に合わせて調整する際の違いは何か？
（２）　Tのような外国市場での成功のために必要な道具として、どんなコミュニケーションやマーケット突破戦略があるか？
（３）　政府事業との合体や公私事業はポートフォリオの顧客リストにある公共事業の一部の方針があるのではない？
（４）Tの年間ビジネス運営後　ビジネス案件上、顧客に近づく特例は何か？
（５）運営上のあらゆる困難、あるいはコミュニケーションは、　T のような新しいロケーションでの革新的ビジネスのような取り込みを試むようにAは考えたか？