Aki (akihiro_12) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Date: 06/14 2014 Saturday ※time of open and start will be announced later.
Place: Maihama Amphitheater (Maihama 2-50 Urayasu city,Chiba )
MC : Sayumi Michishige , T.M.Revolution , w-inds (※ABC order)
Live Act : Berryz kobo , E-girls , Kyari pamyu pamyu , Daichi Miura and others.(ABC order)
Official Site: VMAJ.JP(http://gyao.yahoo.co.jp/vmaj2014/)

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Date: 06/14 2014 Saturday ※door opening time and the performance time will be announced later.
Place: Maihama Amphitheater (2-50 Maihama Urayasu city,Chiba)
MC : Sayumi Michishige , T.M.Revolution , w-inds (※Alphabetical order)
Live Act : Berryz kobo , E-girls , Kyari pamyu pamyu , Daichi Miura and others.(※Alphabetical order)
Official Site: VMAJ.JP(http://gyao.yahoo.co.jp/vmaj2014/)

元の翻訳
By pressing the [vote] button,we accept votes not only in Japan but also in other countries.
And if you replay the nominated music video,it will also be counted as a vote.

<Voting Period>
from 3/28/2014 (Friday) afternoon to 5/8/2015 wednesday at 11:59 pm (Japan time)

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By pressing the [vote] button,we accept votes not only in Japan but also in other countries.
And if you play the nominated music video, it will also be counted as a vote.

<Voting Period>
from 3/28/2014 (Friday) afternoon to 5/8/2015 (Wednesday) at 11:59 pm (Japan time)

元の翻訳
I have two questions for you. Are the API that you use last.fm and YouTube?
Also, is it possible that searching for top pages and information of last.fm are changed to the other languages?

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I have two questions for you. Are the API that you use last.fm and YouTube?
Also, is it possible to translate the searching on the top page and information of last.fm to other languages?

元の翻訳
弊社はAmazon.comにおける売主様のアカウントのレビューを行っています。レビューを行っていますと、必ずと言っていいほど売主様のアカウントへの資金転送凍結が適用されます。

この（資金転送凍結の）金額は、先行する14日間の総売上と同じ金額になります。注文する数量に基づいて、（資金転送凍結される）金額は日々変わる可能性があります。

アカウントの残高が資金転送凍結される金額を超える場合、支払いスケジュールに応じて、資金転送が可能になります。

アカウント残高を閲覧することはできますし、支払いのスケジュールを立てることもできますし、セラーセントラルアカウントのレポートセクションの支払い画面で資金を使わずに残しておくもできます。

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弊社はAmazon.comにおける売主様のアカウントのレビューを行っています。レビューを行っていますと、必ずと言っていいほど売主様のアカウントへの資金転送凍結が適用されます。

この（資金転送凍結の）金額は、先行する14日間の総売上と同じ金額になります。注文する数量に基づいて、（資金転送凍結される）金額は日々変わる可能性があります。

アカウントの残高が資金転送凍結される金額を超える場合、支払いスケジュールに応じて、資金転送が可能になります。

セラーセントラルアカウントのレポートセクションの支払い画面で、アカウント残高、概算の支払い日、引当額が閲覧できます。

元の翻訳
我々は、そのおいしいPDX Carpetを受ることができませんでした。そして他に何が空港にあるのでしょうか？もちろんX線装置。まあ、これは一つのテーマのバリエーションで、我々が好きなものです。これはウールの靴下です。ル•ティグレやカフェソックスに似ています。ここに品物があります。彼らは単に涼しい天候でのサイクリングのためではなく、彼らはあなたの甘い小さな脳に作ることができるすべてのタイプ冒険に最適です。

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我々は、そのおいしいPDX Carpetを受ることができませんでした。そして他に何が空港にあるのでしょうか？もちろんX線装置。まあ、これは一つのテーマのバリエーションで、我々が好きなものです。これはウールの靴下です。ル•ティグレやカフェソックスに似ています。つまり、彼らは単に涼しい天候でのサイクリングのためではなく、彼らはあなたの甘い小さな脳に作ることができるすべてのタイプ冒険に最適なのです。

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The product I've bought seems already been sent from seller, but I can't track where it's now through the tracking number.
Does the product package lost from seller to delivery company? Or does it been stolen? Are you investigating the situation?
Because it's very important package for us so it's urgent.
Please reply us within today.

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The product I've bought seems already been sent from seller, but I can't track where it's now through the tracking number.
The seller is saying that the delivery company might have lost the package or it may be stolen. Are you investigating the situation?
Because it's very important package for us, it's urgent.
Please reply us by the end of today.

元の翻訳
I'll use it for 749R, 2005 model.
I'd like to order full exhaust system but have some questions to clear before order.

The price of silencer homologated and for race is different??
The product here from you is full exhaust system right??
If we talk about only silencer, how much it will be?

Best Regards,

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I'll use it for 749R, 2005 model.
I'd like to order full exhaust system but have some questions to clear before order.

Are the prices of silencer homologated and for race different??
The product you sell here is full exhaust system right??
If we talk about only silencer, how much will it be?

Best Regards,

元の翻訳
I have been inquiring you for these few days about seven golf clubs that I had asked you to transfer, however, I have NOT heard anything from you yet.

What is goin on?

I believe that the clubs have arrived at the warehose up there, and I believe they are still there as long as they have not come to Japan yet.

As I said previously, they are very precious products and are impossible for me to obtain replacements. I already have some damage.

I am not asking you for compensation, but I just need them as soon as possible.

Please be sure to answer me TODAY.

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I have been inquiring you for these few days about seven golf clubs that I had asked you to transfer, however, I have NOT heard anything from you yet.

What is going on?

I believe that the clubs have arrived at the warehose up there, and I believe they are still there as long as they have not come to Japan yet.

As I said previously, they are very precious products and are impossible for me to obtain replacements. I already have some damage.

I am not asking you for compensation, but I just need them as soon as possible.

Please be sure to answer me TODAY.

元の翻訳
How are you?
When will be the order for 2014?
And, in Japan, the tops (camisoles and tank tops) usually have pads for breasts.
Could you make your products with pads beaming to Japan?

It have been a while after I made an order as a back order.
When are you going to ready to ship?

Please let me know the passward as I want to log in the page for retailers as I want to place an order.

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How are you?
When will be the order for 2014?
And, in Japan, the tops (camisoles and tank tops) usually have pads for breasts.
Could you make your products with pads beaming to Japan?

It have been a while after I made an order as a back order.
When are you going to ready to ship?

Please let me know the passward required to log in the page for retailers as I want to place an order.

元の翻訳
About the shipping schedule, the ship will depart on December 7th, so I 'm expediting the export procedure.
If I can complete the procedure timely for this shipping, the ship will arrive in Dar es Salaam around at the end of December.
I will update the status to you later.↵

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About the shipping schedule, the ship will depart on December 7th, so I 'm expediting the export procedure.
If I can complete the procedure timely for this shipping, the ship will arrive in Dar es Salaam around at the end of December.
I will keep you updated with the status.

元の翻訳
1　Clearbridge Accelerator

Clearbridge Acceleratorはシンガポールの国立研究財団（NRF）であり、技術コマーシャライザーやインキュベーターの後援を受けている。彼らが重きを置く投資分野は、生物医学機器、先端材料、計算アルゴリズムだ。既存のポートフォリオ企業がいくつか含まれる。

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1　Clearbridge Accelerator

Clearbridge Acceleratorはシンガポールの国立研究財団（NRF）であり、技術コマーシャライザーやインキュベーターの後援を受けている。彼らが重きを置く投資分野は、生物医学機器、先端材料、計算アルゴリズムだ。既存のポートフォリオ企業は以下の通り。