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rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 17 Aug 2024 at 12:35
original 1. The Song of the Watcher at the Farthest End How far can I go in this lifetime? Who will I meet at the end of my journey? Does another world await beyond that? The watcher at the farthest end awaits you. 2. Dreams of the Azure Thorns Within a lush forest of blue trees, What dreams did those renowned souls dream? Did they long to be united with a beautiful woman? Their ideals remain unknown. 3. Heart of the Cosmos Even if their bodies were fragile, their lives fleeting, The brilliance of life remains strong and beautiful.	corrected 1. The Song of the Watcher at the Farthest End How far can I go in this lifetime? Who will I meet at the end of my journey? Does another world await beyond that? The watcher at the farthest end awaits you. 2. Dreams of the Azure Thorns Within a lush forest of blue trees, what dreams did those renowned souls dream? Did they long to be united with a beautiful woman? Their ideals remain unknown. 3. Heart of the Cosmos Even if their bodies were fragile, their lives fleeting, The brilliance of life remains strong and beautiful.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

17 Aug 2024 at 12:35

original
1. The Song of the Watcher at the Farthest End

How far can I go in this lifetime? Who will I meet at the end of my journey? Does another world await beyond that? The watcher at the farthest end awaits you.

2. Dreams of the Azure Thorns

Within a lush forest of blue trees, What dreams did those renowned souls dream? Did they long to be united with a beautiful woman? Their ideals remain unknown.

3. Heart of the Cosmos

Even if their bodies were fragile, their lives fleeting, The brilliance of life remains strong and beautiful.

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1. The Song of the Watcher at the Farthest End

How far can I go in this lifetime? Who will I meet at the end of my journey? Does another world await beyond that? The watcher at the farthest end awaits you.

2. Dreams of the Azure Thorns

Within a lush forest of blue trees, what dreams did those renowned souls dream? Did they long to be united with a beautiful woman? Their ideals remain unknown.

3. Heart of the Cosmos

Even if their bodies were fragile, their lives fleeting, The brilliance of life remains strong and beautiful.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 07 Mar 2024 at 12:02
Comment This is a very good translation.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 13 Jun 2024 at 14:27
original ボス、私たちは定期的に電話で話し合っていますが、何もうまくいっていません。もしあなたが私の日本訪問を手伝ってくれて、すべてのことを話し合うことができれば、↵ 私たちの計画はすべてクリアになりますが、そうでなければ時間の無駄になるだけです。	corrected ボス、私たちは定期的に電話で話し合っていますが、何もうまくいっていません。もしあなたが私の日本訪問を手伝ってくれて、すべてのことを話し合うことができれば、私たちの計画はすべてクリアになり、まとめることができますが、そうでなければ時間の無駄になるだけです。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 04 Oct 2023 at 09:18
Comment まず、第2文の主語はyouにすべきです。「完成を待ち望んで」いる人物と「完成を急」いでいる人物はともに「友人」のはずですが、主語が「I」になってしまっています。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 19 Aug 2023 at 21:07
original We would like to inform you of our technical views as follows. We assume that the data you gave is the component detected at different irradiation spots () in A, and that the difference is the difference in the component data. (wire surface vs. wire surface precipitates?) The total amount of ingredients is as shown in the grades, and I believe the difference in values is due to the difference in irradiation spots. We believe that the B component is uncontrollable by changing the sintering conditions. Also, We received a PO from your EDI, but the quantity is one. What is this? Please confirm.	corrected We would like to inform you of our technical views as follows. We assume that the data you gave is the component detected at different irradiation spots () in A, and that the difference is the difference in the component data. (wire surface vs. wire surface precipitates?) The total amount of ingredients is as shown in the grades, and I believe the difference in values is due to the difference in irradiation spots. We believe that the B component is uncontrollable by changing the sintering conditions. We also received a PO from your EDI, but the quantity is one. What is this? Please confirm.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

19 Aug 2023 at 21:07

original
We would like to inform you of our technical views as follows.

We assume that the data you gave is the component detected at different irradiation spots (*) in A, and that the difference is the difference in the component data.
* (wire surface vs. wire surface precipitates?)

The total amount of ingredients is as shown in the grades, and I believe the difference in values is due to the difference in irradiation spots.
We believe that the B component is uncontrollable by changing the sintering conditions.

Also, We received a PO from your EDI, but the quantity is one.
What is this? Please confirm.

corrected
We would like to inform you of our technical views as follows.

We assume that the data you gave is the component detected at different irradiation spots (*) in A, and that the difference is the difference in the component data.
* (wire surface vs. wire surface precipitates?)

The total amount of ingredients is as shown in the grades, and I believe the difference in values is due to the difference in irradiation spots.
We believe that the B component is uncontrollable by changing the sintering conditions.

We also received a PO from your EDI, but the quantity is one.
What is this? Please confirm.

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