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rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 28 Jul 2014 at 11:53
original Thank you for leaving a message There is a possibility that instead of the item being lost through delivery overseas, it might rather be being held at the customs. The cost of the product would be returned. I am deeply sorry about that. If the product is delivered, kindly contact us. Thank you for your help.	corrected Thank you for leaving a message Since it was shipped as an overseas delivery, there is a possibility that your item might be either lost or held at the customs. We will issue you a refund for the shipping cost. I am deeply sorry about that. If the product is delivered, kindly contact us. Thank you for your help.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 28 Jul 2014 at 14:08
original I am sorry for the sudden email. The below error is displayed when accessing to the URL of admin page. In addition, it cannot log in. How shall it be resolved? Also, the width of black portion in the top page seems rather wide. Is it an error? Furthermore, could you give me PSD data of top page. I would like to change the letters of images to Japanese.	corrected I am sorry for the sudden email. The below error is displayed when accessing to the URL of admin page. In addition, it cannot log in either. How shall it be resolved? Also, the width of black portion in the top page seems rather wide. Is it an error? Furthermore, could you give me PSD data of top page. I would like to change the character of images to Japanese.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2014 at 11:40
original Thank you for the message. The item will be arriving sometime around between 7th and 22nd. I can't add track number for this item because if I put it, the cost will be more expensive than the item price itself, which won't pay for me. Thank you very much for your understanding in advance. Thank you for the message. I can write down the price cheaper than the actual one. Thank you very much.	corrected Thank you for the message. The item will be arriving sometime around between 7th and 22nd. I can't add tracking number for this item because if I did so, the cost will be more expensive than the item price itself, which will be in deficit. Thank you very much for your understanding in advance. Thank you for the message. I can write down the price cheaper than the actual one. Thank you very much.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

26 Jul 2014 at 11:40

original
Thank you for the message.

The item will be arriving sometime around between 7th and 22nd.
I can't add track number for this item because if I put it, the cost will be more expensive than the item price itself, which won't pay for me. Thank you very much for your understanding in advance.

Thank you for the message.
I can write down the price cheaper than the actual one.
Thank you very much.

corrected
Thank you for the message.

The item will be arriving sometime around between 7th and 22nd.
I can't add tracking number for this item because if I did so, the cost will be more expensive than the item price itself, which will be in deficit. Thank you very much for your understanding in advance.

Thank you for the message.
I can write down the price cheaper than the actual one.
Thank you very much.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2014 at 11:37
Comment いつもながらすっきりと文章がまとまっていますね。2点だけコメントさせて頂きます。 1.　おそらくご存知だと思うのですが、cheapには安っぽいという意味合いがあるので販売する側としては使用を避けたい表現だと思います。自分が扱う商品が安っぽいとわざわざ顧客に伝える販売者はい...

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

26 Jul 2014 at 11:37

Comment
いつもながらすっきりと文章がまとまっていますね。2点だけコメントさせて頂きます。 1.　おそらくご存知だと思うのですが、cheapには安っぽいという意味合いがあるので販売する側としては使用を避けたい表現だと思います。自分が扱う商品が安っぽいとわざわざ顧客に伝える販売者はい...

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2014 at 22:38
original I am watching the 19th stage of AAA race. We only have Mr./Ms. ABC as a commentator today. Incidentally, Mr./Ms. ABC is wearing the CCC jersey.	corrected I am watching the 19th stage of AAA race. We only have Mr./Ms. ABC as a commentator today. Incidentally, he/she is wearing the CCC jersey of BBB today.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 20 Aug 2014 at 13:26
original As a man with Japanese temperament, I would like to have the item of which packing is neatly done even if it is intended for the operation. The wrapping method of your item is somewhat looked like the junk which I cannot accept in any way. In addition, the cable is different from the original one and in poor quality. I do not want to change my mind to demand to you for issuance of refund including the shipping charge.	corrected As a man with Japanese temperament, I would like to have the item of which packing is neatly done even if it works fine. The packinging method of your item looks nothing but a junk, which I cannot accept in any way. In addition, the cable is different from the original one and in poor quality. I shall not change my mind requesting you for a full refund including the shipping charge.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

20 Aug 2014 at 13:26

original
As a man with Japanese temperament, I would like to have the item of which packing is neatly done even if it is intended for the operation. The wrapping method of your item is somewhat looked like the junk which I cannot accept in any way. In addition, the cable is different from the original one and in poor quality. I do not want to change my mind to demand to you for issuance of refund including the shipping charge.

corrected
As a man with Japanese temperament, I would like to have the item of which packing is neatly done even if it works fine. The packinging method of your item looks nothing but a junk, which I cannot accept in any way. In addition, the cable is different from the original one and in poor quality. I shall not change my mind requesting you for a full refund including the shipping charge.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 20 Aug 2014 at 13:23
original From Japanese point of view, I would like to expect the item should be nicely package even if the item itself has no problem functioning. Your item looks like a junk, and I can hardly accept. The cable, also, is different from the original one, and very poorly made. I will not change my request to refund including shipping cost.	corrected From Japanese point of view, I would like to expect the item should be nicely packed even if the item itself has no problem functioning. Your item looks like a junk, and I can hardly accept that. The cable, also, is different from the original one, and very poorly made. I will not change my request for the full refund including shipping cost.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2014 at 00:58
original I have a question about the book on sale. How many cards are there in the book?	corrected I have a question about the book you have listed. How many cards are there in the book?

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2014 at 00:57
original I have a question about the book you have listed. How many cards are in the book?	corrected I have a question about the book you have listed. How many cards are there in the book?

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2014 at 10:10
original One of the two packages has not arrived yet. I would like a refund for that one item. If you have xxx in stock, I would like to purchase a couple of them. Do you have them in stock?	corrected One of the two packages has not arrived yet. I would like a refund for that one item. If you have xxx in stock, I would like to purchase some of them. How many do you have in stock?

rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2014 at 19:40
Comment これはちょっとひどすぎると思います。全く関係ない文章をコピペしてるだけの詐欺です。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 25 Jul 2014 at 15:32
original Thank you for the message. This product has shipped as below. Could you please check if custom office has contacted you.	corrected Thank you for the message. This product has been shipped as below. Thank you for your understanding. ↵ Could you please check to see if custom office has contacted you yet?

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 25 Jul 2014 at 15:31
original Thank you for the message. Your item has been shipped as follows: Thanks. Have you been contacted the customs?	corrected Thank you for the message. Your item has been shipped as follows: Thanks. Have you been contacted by the customs yet?

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 25 Jul 2014 at 15:30
Comment 最後の文章をもうすこし工夫できると5 starsだと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 25 Jul 2014 at 15:29
original Thank you for the message. The item has already been delivered, as shown below. Thank you for your understanding. Didn't anyone from the customs office contact you?	corrected Thank you for the message. The item has already been shipped, as shown below. Thank you for your understanding. Has the customs office contacted you yet?

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 25 Jul 2014 at 15:26
original Thank you for the message. The goods have been delivered as shown below. Thank you. Have you been contacted by the customs office?	corrected Thank you for the message. The goods have been shipped as shown below. Thank you. Have you been contacted by the customs office?

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 20 Aug 2014 at 12:23
Comment ABCとHIJそれぞれの前にfromをつけてもいいかもしれません。訳全般は簡潔明瞭にかけていると思います。

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 25 Jul 2014 at 15:11
original 注文した時は、アマゾンで確かに在庫ありとなっていました。他のところでは売り切りとなっています。あなたは他の販売者と比べて100ドルも多く要求しているのに、在庫ありとなっていましたので、あなたからこの商品を購入しました。私は待つのを構いませんが、その代わりに値段を下げてください。アマゾンでの間違えた商品情報によって起こった損の賠償として、shoppinginjapan.netと同じ値段にして、そして郵送も無料にしてください。上記のことはできないのであれば、注文をキャンセルしてください。その方は別の販売者からその腕時計をもっと安く手に居られるからです。よろしくお願いします。 Nikki Goode	corrected 注文した時は、アマゾンで確かに在庫ありとなっていました。他のところでは販売開始前となっています。 100ドルの価格差も甘んじて、在庫があるというから注文したのです。↵ あなたは他の販売者と比べて100ドルも多く要求しているのに、在庫ありとなっていましたので、あなたからこの商品を購入しました。待つのは構いませんが、その代わりに値段を下げてください。アマゾンで誤解を煽る商品情報を提示した賠償として、shoppinginjapan.netと同額かつ送料無料で対応してください。上記のことはできないのであれば、注文をキャンセルしてください。別の安いところで腕時計を購入します。よろしくお願いします。 Nikki Goode

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese

25 Jul 2014 at 15:11

original
注文した時は、アマゾンで確かに在庫ありとなっていました。

他のところでは売り切りとなっています。

あなたは他の販売者と比べて100ドルも多く要求しているのに、在庫ありとなっていましたので、あなたからこの商品を購入しました。

私は待つのを構いませんが、その代わりに値段を下げてください。アマゾンでの間違えた商品情報によって起こった損の賠償として、shoppinginjapan.netと同じ値段にして、そして郵送も無料にしてください。

上記のことはできないのであれば、注文をキャンセルしてください。その方は別の販売者からその腕時計をもっと安く手に居られるからです。

よろしくお願いします。
Nikki Goode

corrected
注文した時は、アマゾンで確かに在庫ありとなっていました。

他のところでは販売開始前となっています。

100ドルの価格差も甘んじて、在庫があるというから注文したのです。↵
あなたは他の販売者と比べて100ドルも多く要求しているのに、在庫ありとなっていましたので、あなたからこの商品を購入しました。

待つのは構いませんが、その代わりに値段を下げてください。アマゾンで誤解を煽る商品情報を提示した賠償として、shoppinginjapan.netと同額かつ送料無料で対応してください。

上記のことはできないのであれば、注文をキャンセルしてください。別の安いところで腕時計を購入します。

よろしくお願いします。
Nikki Goode

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 25 Jul 2014 at 14:34
Comment 文全体はよくまとまっていて問題なく理解できます。ただビジネス文書なのでもう少しキレがあるといいなと思いました。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 25 Jul 2014 at 14:30
original I am sorry for keep you waiting. The ransaction is being proceeded. I will refund the repair costs of your guitar. Please let me know how much will be the cost for the repairing price. Looking forward for your response.	corrected I am sorry for keeping you waiting. The transaction is being proceeded. I will refund the repair costs of your guitar. Please let me know how much the cost of the repair would be. Looking forward to hearing from you.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 24 Jul 2014 at 12:25
Comment バンドやリンクが実際どのようなものなのかこの文面からはわかりづらい部分が大きいですが、和訳はそれらも含めて網羅されていていいとおもいます。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 24 Jul 2014 at 10:53
Comment 御依頼主様が備考欄に書いておられる指示に注意を払い、文章に含まれる主語や目的語である名称を正確に捉えたほうがよろしいかと思います。1-2行目にかけて和文に含まれていない疑問文が英訳されているなど不可解な訳が目に付いてしまいますので、提出前に一度ご確認をされることをお勧めします。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English

24 Jul 2014 at 10:53

Comment
御依頼主様が備考欄に書いておられる指示に注意を払い、文章に含まれる主語や目的語である名称を正確に捉えたほうがよろしいかと思います。1-2行目にかけて和文に含まれていない疑問文が英訳されているなど不可解な訳が目に付いてしまいますので、提出前に一度ご確認をされることをお勧めします。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 24 Jul 2014 at 10:46
Comment 文章の内容自体は機械的な手続きな話でしたが、正確に情報を訳すだけではない適切で無駄のない表現力が勉強になりました。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 25 Jul 2014 at 12:13
original The picture has already been uploaded , please check it. Returned goods will not be in my consideration. Please return part of the price .	corrected The picture has already been uploaded, so please check. Returning the goods will not be my option.Please issue me a partial refund.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 25 Jul 2014 at 10:19
original Please take a look at the attached photo, Could you please make partial refund. I would not prefer return the items.	corrected Please take a look at the attached photo. Could you please issue me a partial refund? I am not thinkingking about returning the items.

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