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Have you ever seen sumo wrestler?
I'm sure he is much more gigantic than you expect!

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Have you ever seen a sumo wrestler?
I'm sure he is much more gigantic than you expect!

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My age is 40's front already, but my appearence and feelings are like a young man. (It has been many times that people tell me shocked when I meet them "Are you really an engineer?"). I think my co-ordination and communication skills are extremely high. (The type of disseminate ideas and opinions).

I do not have experience yet, but I can handle formal presentations and interact without problems.

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I am almost 40 years old, but I look young and feel young at heart. (People whom I meet often say "Are you really an engineer?" in surprise). I think I work well with the others and my communication skills are excellent. (I am outspoken about my ideas and opinions).

I do not have experience yet, but I can handle formal presentations and interact without problems.

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In the morning when a new idea springs up in my head.
I am in a good mood.
I write down the idea.
I draw an illustration with a big Magic Marker.
I am losing myself in it.
I excitedly show it to staffs.
There is no reaction. I become flaccid. (LOL)
I don't care anymore. (LOL)
The no reaction aaccelerate my sense of responsibility.
It's OK.
"The no reaction is a harbinger of a great success.
I added a line with a big Magic Marker.
Things will come round.
Hallelujah.

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In the morning when a new idea springs up in my head.
I am in a good mood.
I write down the idea.
I draw an illustration with a big Magic Marker.
I am losing myself in it.
I excitedly show it to staff.
There is no reaction. I become flaccid. (LOL)
I don't care anymore. (LOL)
The no reaction accelerate my sense of responsibility.
It's OK.
"The no reaction is a harbinger of a great success.
I add a line with a big Magic Marker.
Things will come round.
Hallelujah.

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Thank you so much for your concern with my family and Japan.

I remember the sense of intimacy of you, your family, Saudi Arabis and Islamic culture.

Recently, I have many oppurtunity to know employees and former employess of Sony, and have received many information regarding Sony's condition. They seems to be fed up with US management style recent years even though they really love Sony. Many great products were produced in the past is might be due to engineers who really love Sony.

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Thank you so much for your concern about my family and Japan.

I have an affinity for you, your family, Saudi Arabia and the Islamic culture.

Lately, I have many opportunities to get to know employees and former employees of Sony, and am often consulted on Sony's condition. They seem to be fed up with the current US management style even though they really love Sony. The reason why many great products were produced in the past might be due to the engineers who really loved Sony.

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Video Title: Cute Character Lunchboxes Anyone Can Make ~Fun Pool~
Video Summary: The goal here was to make a simple yet cute character bento box. I'm bragging, but my daughter looks forward to eating this every day!

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Video Title: Cute Character Lunchboxes Anyone Can Make ~Fun Pool~
Video Summary: The goal here is to make a simple yet cute character bento box. I'm bragging, but I've been working my butt off for my daughter!

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Dear Bill Haley

Thank you for your reply.


So I will not buy too many this time because it is our first trade.
If possible, I will buy a large quantity next time.


1.4 items of George Foreman GR10B (082846033732 UPC)

2.2 items of Razor Ripstik Caster Board Red (845423001018 UPC)

the total is six items, and will be deal at $178.


Please send a paypal invoice if it is available
Thank you very much.

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Dear Mr. Bill Haley

Thank you for your reply.


Because it is our first trade, I would like to order in small quantities this time .
Next time I would buy in large quantities.


1. 4 orders of George Foreman GR10B (082846033732 UPC)

2. 2 orders of Razor Ripstik Caster Board Red (845423001018 UPC)

A total of six items, and $178. Would that work?


Please send a PayPal invoice if you could.
Thank you very much.