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評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2013/08/14 09:49:11

msongsk
msongsk 50 Hello! I've spent a year each in Kobe...
日本語

動画タイトル：誰でも作れる可愛いキャラ弁～楽しいプール～
動画の説明：とても簡単、でも可愛くみえるキャラ弁を目指して作っています。自己満ですが、娘っこの為に頑張っています！

英語

Video Title: Cute Character Lunchboxes Anyone Can Make ~Fun Pool~
Video Summary: The goal here was to make a simple yet cute character bento box. I'm bragging, but my daughter looks forward to eating this every day!

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ziggy 60 Hi. I am a former ESL and Japanese la...
ziggyはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/08/23 10:38:02

元の翻訳
Video Title: Cute Character Lunchboxes Anyone Can Make ~Fun Pool~
Video Summary: The goal here was to make a simple yet cute character bento box. I'm bragging, but my daughter looks forward to eating this every day!

修正後
Video Title: Cute Character Lunchboxes Anyone Can Make ~Fun Pool~
Video Summary: The goal here is to make a simple yet cute character bento box. I'm bragging, but I've been working my butt off for my daughter!

I'm not sure about "I'm bragging" here. "I don't mean to brag" may be more accurate?

msongsk msongsk 2013/08/23 22:07:37

That's the phrase I was looking for! Thanks, ziggy.

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