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Will you please discount the VAT amount from the price of the last time?
Do you sell the product of the attached photograph?
Do you have any popular products that you are selling in Japan? Please tell me if there is any such ones.
I want to ask you about some other things.
As I will purchase five of them, will you cut it to 9 dollars?
How many should I buy for you to cut the price to around 9 dollars?
How will you manage when a defective article is found?
Can you send post-free by FedEx?
As I will buy five of them, will you send them post-free?
I want you send them by a delivery method to arrive as early as possible.

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Will you please discount the VAT amount from the price of the last time?
Do you sell the product of the attached photograph?
Do you have any popular products that you are selling in Japan? Please tell me if there is any such ones.
I want to ask you about some other things.
As I will purchase five of them, will you cut it to 9 dollars?
How many should I buy for you to cut the price to around 9 dollars?
How will you manage when a defective article is found?
Can you send by FedEx for free?
As I will buy five of them, will you send them for free?
I want you to send them by a delivery method to arrive as early as possible.

元の翻訳
Free to be feeling cool everyday, and also the cute and adorable
And the commitment to offer playful, timing and quality goods
Jewelries are produced base on such concepts and commitments

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Feeling free, fun, and cool everyday, and also the cute and adorable
And the commitment to offer playful, timing and quality goods
Jewelries are produced base on such concepts and commitments

元の翻訳
What drama are you watching?
Are you watching "The Walking Dead"?
How many seasons are there to "The Walking Dead"?
Are your shoulders stiff?
Do you have back pain?
Are you working tomorrow?
When's your next day off?
Could you possibly be sitting all day?
I easily get tired these days.
My boyfriend is getting fat these days.
I am going to make eryngii tempura.
Are you free?
I don't want to get tanned no matter what.
It's hot today like summer.
Almost season for no halved sleeves.
I work 11 hours a day.
Skin care is a pain in the neck.
I'm looking for a better foundation.
I have athlete's foot.
By back itches.
My lower belly is getting fat.

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What drama are you watching?
Are you watching "The Walking Dead"?
How many seasons are there to "The Walking Dead"?
Are your shoulders stiff?
Do you have back pain?
Are you working tomorrow?
When's your next day off?
Are you possibly sitting all day?
I easily get tired these days.
My boyfriend is getting fat these days.
I am going to make eryngii tempura.
Are you free?
I don't want to get tanned no matter what.
It's hot today like summer.
Almost season for no halved sleeves.
I work for as much as 11 hours a day.
Skin care is a pain in the neck.
I'm looking for a better foundation.
I have athlete's foot.
My back itches.
My lower belly is getting fat.

元の翻訳
Thank you for informing of your visit to Japan.
We would love to meet you and introduce our new product.
It will suit us either 2 p.m. or 3 p.m. on July 1.
The place is the same as the last time, see the address below.
Will you bring an interpreter with you again?

Please check the stock for the following item.

What would the delivery lead time be in case we place an order for this quantity?
Please also advise the lead time including sewing onto all of them.

How should we process for the payment?
Is there any room for you to discount a bit?

We look forward to your soonest reply.

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Thank you for informing of your visit to Japan.
We would love to meet you and introduce your new product.
It will suit us either 2 p.m. or 3 p.m. on July 1.
The place is the same as the last time, see the address below.
Will you bring an interpreter with you again?

Please check the stock for the following item.

What would the delivery time be in case we place an order for this quantity?
Please also advise the lead time including sewing onto all of them.

How should we process the payment?
Is there any room for you to discount a bit?

We look forward to your soonest reply.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us regarding your visit to Japan.
We would like to see you and introduce the new work to us.
We are available either at 2 o'clock and 3 o'clock in the afternoon on July 1st.
We can meet at the address below, which is the same as the last time.
Are you coming with your interpreter again this time?

Would you check the inventory of the following item?
If we order this volume, when you are going to deliver them to us? Please also let us know when you can deliver if we add embroidery at them.

How should we pay? May we ask you to give us some discount again?
We are looking forward to your prompt reply.

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Thank you for contacting us regarding your visit to Japan.
We would like to see you and introduce the new work to us.
We are available either at 2 o'clock and 3 o'clock in the afternoon on July 1st.
We can meet at the address below, which is the same as the last time.
Are you coming with your interpreter again this time?

Would you check the inventory of the following item?
If we order this volume, when are you going to deliver them to us? Please also let us know when you can deliver if we add embroidery at them.

How should we pay? May we ask you to give us some discounts again?
We are looking forward to your prompt reply.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry. The character "本" is a part of the word being searched.
Regarding the size of the goods, we specified "Regular size" in the product explanation column beforehand not to make you mistake, so please check it.

<Regarding return the goods>
If you can send us back the goods, we can pay you back 32 dollars of the 40 dollars that you paid. We will minus 8 dollars as the charge for the successful bid and shipping.
If you want to return the goods, please let us know.

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I'm sorry. The character "本" is a part of the word being searched.
Regarding the size of the goods, we specified "Regular size" in the product explanation column beforehand not to make you mistake, so please check it.

<Regarding the return of the goods>
If you can send us back the goods, we can pay you back 32 dollars of the 40 dollars that you paid. We will deduct 8 dollars as the charge for the successful bid fee and shipping cost.
If you want to return the goods, please let us know.

元の翻訳
We are sorry, the word "Book" is part of the search words.
As for the product size, we have clearly written "Regular Size" in the product description field to be sure. Please confirm.

About the return of products
If you return the product, we can issue a refund of 32 dollars after reducing 8 dollars (the total amount of bidding fee and the shipping cost ) from 40 dollars.
Please let us know if you wish to return the product.

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We are sorry, the word "Book" is part of the search words.
As for the product size, we have clearly written "Regular Size" in the product description field to be sure. Please confirm.

About the return of products
If you return the product, we can issue a refund of 32 dollars after deducting 8 dollars (the total amount of bidding fee and the shipping cost ) from 40 dollars.
Please let us know if you wish to return the product.

元の翻訳
I managed to register after shortening my address.
I wrote my actual address below.
I'm looking forward for its arrival

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I managed to register after shortening my address.
I wrote my actual address below.
I'm looking forward to its arrival

元の翻訳
We spend about one third of our life sleeping. However it is not clear why the sleeping is necessary.

While we are sleeping, a large amount of grow hormone is produced in our body. This growth hormone repair or replace damaged cells and tissues.

In addition, te sleeping promote healing.

While we are sleeping, our brain continue working.

The moment we dream is the time when our eyeballs are moving under the eyelids, which is called "rem sleep".

It is very important to dream.

If you are waked up each time you fall in rem sleep and can not dream for several days, you may feel
very anxious or get sick.

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We spend about one third of our life sleeping. However it is not clear why the sleeping is necessary.

While we are sleeping, a large amount of grow hormone is produced in our body. This growth hormone repair or replace damaged cells and tissues.

In addition, sleeping promote healing.

While we are sleeping, our brain continues working.

The moment we dream is the time when our eyeballs are moving under the eyelids, which is called "rem sleep".

It is very important to dream.

If you are waked up each time you fall in rem sleep and can not dream for several days, you may feel
very anxious or get sick.

元の翻訳
違う商品が届いています。クリアーパーツのクリアーのキットと、予備の剣、剣のスタンドのはずですが、pgの赤いフレームの物が届いています。
よく考えると、そちらが赤いフレームの商品を別の人に売るとき、また送料を払わないといけないのですが。私はすぐ買いますので。その時は私にはどうしようもありません。

この石についてる砂はなんでしょう？

本当に発注はこれですか？
すこし発注に問題があると思います。
確認して頂けますか？
本当に問題ないですか？

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違う商品が届いています。クリアーパーツのクリアーのキットと、予備の剣、剣のスタンドのはずですが、pgの赤いフレームの物が届いています。
よく考えると、そちらが赤いフレームの商品を別の人に売るとき、また送料を払わないといけないのですが。私はすぐ買いますので。その時は私にはどうしようもありません。

この石についてる砂はなんでしょう？

個の注文は正しいですか？
すこし発注に問題があると思います。
確認して頂けますか？
本当に問題ないですか？

元の翻訳
We received the payment for February. We were expecting your payment to our Rakuten Bank account, so we did not notice your payment to Shiba Shinyoukinko. I apologize for that. Now we confirmed that all of your payment has been made. we are glad to work with you and we hope we would work with you again someday. I am looking forward to seeing another fascinating products from your company.

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We received the payment for February. ↵
We were expecting your payment to our Rakuten Bank account, so we did not notice your payment to Shiba Shinyoukinko. ↵
I apologize for that. ↵
↵
Now we confirmed that all of your payment has been made. ↵
We are glad to work with you and we hope we would work with you again someday. ↵
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I am looking forward to seeing another fascinating products from your company.

元の翻訳
Who should I contact between your holiday?
I would like you to ship jojoba oil ASAP because we will be not in stock.

As for Macadamia, you asked me, I hoped to confirm how you gave actions for the accident that macadamia oil you sent had leaked by a half of the bottle, with FedEx not having a responsibility about it.

When is ●● going to be back?
I hope to ask ●● because the invoice I received tells the different cost from what ●● said.

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Who should I contact during your holiday?
I would like you to ship jojoba oil ASAP because it is running out of stock.

As for Macadamia, you asked me, I hoped to confirm how you gave actions for the accident that macadamia oil you sent had leaked by a half of the bottle, with FedEx not having a responsibility about it.

When is ●● going to be back?
I hope to ask ●● because the invoice I received tells the different cost from what ●● said.

元の翻訳
Could you let me know whom I could contact during your holiday?
I kindly ask you to ship jojoba oil as soon as possible as my stock is running.

Regarding the macadamia, the oil leaked for the last shipment and it only contained less than the half of the bottle.
According to FedEx, they had no responsibility for that. So, I would like to know what you could do with it.

When will XX be back from holiday?
I would like to check with XX as the amount in the invoice sent is different from XX.

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Could you let me know whom I could contact during your holiday?
I kindly ask you to ship jojoba oil as soon as possible as my stock is running.

Regarding the macadamia, the oil leaked for the last shipment and it only contained less than the half of the bottle.
According to FedEx, they had no responsibility for that. So, I would like to know what you could do with it.

When will XX be back from holiday?
I would like to check with XX as the amount in the invoice you sent is different from XX.

元の翻訳
I was rated negatively at the recent trading.
I ask the customers to pay within 3 days on the page of the items. I arranged for cancellation of the bidding I won after this period, and was rated negatively.
I worked on it based on the instruction of the page of the items.
Could it be deleted?
I am in an inconvenience. Would you advise me?

You worked on it based on the instruction of the page of the items and won the bidding by seeing the page.
You must have checked it, and ignored the message.

You are the first person who handled in this way.
Please contact me immediately.

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I was rated negatively at the recent trading with you.
I ask the customers to pay within 3 days on the page of the items. I arranged the cancellation of the bidding you won after this period, and was rated negatively.
I worked on it based on the instruction of the page of the items.
Could it be deleted?
I am in an inconvenience. Would you advise me?

You worked on it based on the instruction of the page of the items and won the bidding by seeing the page.
You must have checked it, and ignored the message.

You are the first person who handled in this way.
Please contact me immediately.

元の翻訳
I got a negative valuation for lately deal from you.
However we are asking customers for payment within 3 days on our item page,
and the period has past, and we took a cancellation process, then got a negative valuation.
Although I handled the deal as what is written on item page, isn't this subject for deleting?
We are very in trouble.
Please give us an advice.

We handled the deal just as we described on the item page.
And you placed a bid, seeing the page.
You should have checked it.
Plus you are ignoring our messages.

You are the first person who acted like this.

Please would you give us a contact right away?

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I got a negative feedback for the recent deal from you.
Although we are asking customers to pay within 3 days on our item page,
and the period has past, and we took a cancellation process, then got a negative feedback.
Although I handled the deal as what is written on item page, isn't this subject for deleting?
We are very in trouble.
Please give us an advice.

We handled the deal just as we described on the item page.
And you placed a bid, seeing the page.
You should have checked it.
Plus you are ignoring our messages.

You are the first person who acted like this.

Please would you give us a contact right away?

元の翻訳
Your younger brother called, and I would like to confirm once again the size of the jacket I ordered.
My current orders are 2 DUCATIs of the attached file, 2 MONSERs, and a two‐piece suit of REPSOL.

The suit which you made to one-piece by mistake instead of two‐piece I had meant was No.2. Please do not mistake that again.

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Your younger brother called, and I would like to confirm once again the size of the jacket I ordered.
My current orders are 2 DUCATIs of the attached file, 2 MONSERs, and a two‐piece suit of REPSOL.

The suit which you made to one-piece by mistake instead of two‐piece I had meant was No.2. Please do not mistake that.