yusuke0802 — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I've just got the notification that they are ready to ship from ○○ company.
Please check attached. ↵
Those files say the size and weight of the product.
Because I'm hurried, I would like you to ship this product to Japan as soon as possible.

Could I have the estimate?

As I told you yesterday, the American shipping company I use now costs me 550 dollars to send 200 lbs stuff to Japan.

Because your company is the world wide shipping professional, I expect lower price.

By the way, I can accept 7 to 10 days as delivery days.

修正後
I have just received the notification from ○○ company that the product is ready to ship.
Please check the size and weight of the product in the attached file.
Because I'm in a hurry, I would like you to ship this product to Japan as soon as possible.

Could you send me an estimate?

As I told you yesterday, the American shipping company I use now charges 550 dollars for 200 lbs to Japan.

Because your company is a world wide shipping professional, I expect a lower price.

By the way, I can accept 7 to 10 days as delivery days.

元の翻訳
I can understand what you wrote in English. However, ～ is not perfect. ～ is the exact expression.

So, you got interested in Japan for the first time when a Japanese woman in yukata visited your school. If you can see that woman again, it's so nice.

The reason why I started to work for the IT field is I had really interesting experience to created web site in class when I was a student.

The reason why I started to study English enthusiastically is I couldn't communicate at all when I attended the event hosted by ～ because the conversation there was all in English.

修正後
I can understand what you wrote in English. However, ～ is not perfect. ～ is the exact expression.

So, you got interested in Japan for the first time when a Japanese woman in yukata visited your school. If you can see that woman again, it's so nice.

The reason I started to work for the IT field is I had really interesting experience to created web site in class when I was a student.

The reason I started to study English enthusiastically is I couldn't communicate at all when I attended the event hosted by ～ because the conversation there was all in English.

元の翻訳
if the product specifications doesn't say anything, I would like you to wright about it on the title or the item description to call an attention. Regarding this, I don't require any discount because it is partly my fault. However, I didn't get your answer about the paint peeling. Though it is small, there is a paint peeling on the left side of "R" of "CROWN". I attached the picture the last time, so please make sure of it.

修正後
if the product specifications doesn't say anything, I would like you to write it on the title or the item description to call attention to it. Regarding this, I don't require any discount because it is partly my fault. However, I didn't get your answer about the paint peeling. Though it is small, there is a paint peeling on the left side of "R" of "CROWN". I attached the picture the last time, so please make sure of it.