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元の翻訳
Birth Date: 1986/12/11
Birth Place: Nagasaki
Height: 167 cm
Blood Type: A type

<TV>
2006.02 Short Drama "Karera no Umi 8" on air on TV Kumamoto (TKU), Fuji TV (CX), etc.
2008.10~ "Mirai Seiki Shakespeare" on Kansai TV (KTV)
2011.10 "Tousouchu 18 ~ run for money ~ Targed Hunters Edition" on Fuji TV

修正後
Birth Date: 1986/12/11
Birth Place: Nagasaki
Height: 167 cm
Blood Type: A type

<TV>
2006.02 Short Drama "Karera no Umi 8" on air on TV Kumamoto (TKU), Fuji TV (CX), etc.
2008.10~ "Mirai Seiki Shakespeare" on Kansai TV (KTV)
2011.10 "Tousouchu 18 ~ run for money ~ Targeted Hunters Edition" on Fuji TV

元の翻訳
*The handshake event will be held per group, and those groups will be announced on the date of the event.
*The handshake event participation ticket will be handed out on the first-come-first-serve basis. Please know the handing out will end as soon as the last ticket will be gone.
*Upon reservation, please pay for the item and its shipping fee altogether (*the shipping fee will be applied for the mini album reservation only).
*Please be informed that no cancellation will be accepted after purchase through the reservation.
*The maximum quantity of purchase per person is limited up to 5 at a time.
*Please line up at the end of the queue if you wish to purchase more. Depending on the situation, the maximum quantity of your purchase may subject to change.

修正後
*The handshake event will be held per group, and those groups will be announced on the date of the event.
*The handshake event participation ticket will be handed out on the first-come-first-serve basis. Please know the handing out will end as soon as the last ticket is gone.
*Upon reservation, please pay for the item and its shipping fee altogether (*the shipping fee will be applied for the mini album reservation only).
*Please be informed that no cancellation will be accepted after purchase through the reservation.
*The maximum quantity of purchase per person is limited up to 5 at a time.
*Please line up at the end of the queue if you wish to purchase more. Depending on the situation, the maximum quantity of your purchase may subject to change.

元の翻訳
※ For more information about the monkey & dog, please check it out for yourself on the day of the event.

[Warnings]
* This event is not a handshake event.
* The participating members may change without prior notice.

* The products will be exchanged with a reference number on the day of the event.
* None of the presents can be returned, so please take this into account.
* Once everyone present has had their turn the event will be ended.
* Video recording and voice recording are completely forbidden.
* When showing up after the event has started, you will have to start at the back of the line.

修正後
※ For more information about the monkey & dog, please check it out for yourself on the day of the event.

[Warnings]
* This event is not a handshake event.
* The participating members may change without prior notice.

* The products will be exchanged with a reference number on the day of the event.
* None of the presents can be accepted, so please take this into account.
* Once everyone present has had their turn the event will be ended.
* Video recording and voice recording are completely forbidden.
* When showing up after the event has started, you will have to start at the back of the line.

元の翻訳
授乳方法
1.
ジッパーの付いた面を下にして体に枕を巻き付けます。位置と厚みが快適になるよう、腰のクッションを調整してください。膝の上にクッションを自然に置きます。
2.
赤ちゃんと対面するように抱き上げます。赤ちゃんの頭・首・肩を手で支え、親指を耳の後ろ斜め下に添えます。人差し指はほかの指の後ろ斜め下に置きます。
3.
赤ちゃんの頭の後ろにまわした手で、赤ちゃんの頭を少しだけ後ろに倒します。赤ちゃんの鼻よりもあごが胸に近づくようにします。
4-1.
手を胸に添えます。

修正後
授乳方法
1.
ジッパーの付いた面を下にして体に枕を巻き付けます。背中が一番快適な状態になるよう腰のクッションの位置と厚みを調整してください。膝の上にクッションを自然に置きます。
2.
赤ちゃんと対面するように抱き上げます。赤ちゃんの頭・首・肩を手で支え、親指を耳の後ろ斜め下に添えます。人差し指は反対側の耳の後ろ斜め下に置きます。
3.
赤ちゃんの頭の後ろにまわした手で、赤ちゃんの頭を少しだけ後ろに倒して、赤ちゃんの鼻よりもあごが胸に近づくようにします。
4-1.
手を胸に添えます。

元の翻訳
こんにちわ。中国からの発送は可能です。日本への送料は、コンボ21個で1500ドルになります。バーコードは私たちの既存の商品と同一で、品質も全く今まで通りです。到着まで一週間ほどかかる予定です。

返信頂ければ、今日中に早急に発送の手配をいたします。

修正後
こんにちは。中国からの発送は可能です。日本への送料は、コンボ21個で1500ドルになります。バーコードは私たちの既存の商品と同じ場合は同一で、品質も全く同じです。到着まで一週間ほどかかる予定です。

ご確認いただければ、今日中に早急に発送の手配をいたします。

元の翻訳
こんにちは。
私たちは、中国からあなたのもとへ配送可能です。
日本宛の配送料は、21箱で1500ドルです。
それらのバーコードは我々の存在している製品と同じである場合があります。
そして、その品質は確実に同じものです。
およそ１週間、一週間かかります。
ご確認下さい。できる限り早く、これが配送されるよう本日手配いたします。

修正後
こんにちは。
私たちは、中国からあなたのもとへ配送可能です。
日本宛の配送料は、21箱で1500ドルです。
それらのバーコードは我々の存在している製品と同じである場合があります。
そして、その品質は確実に同じものです。
およそ一週間かかります。
ご確認下さい。できる限り早く、これが配送されるよう本日手配いたします。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.
this is an official item so the attachment about this item is in the box.
And we will ship this out with the most careful attention to make sure the item doesn't get damaged by using cushioning material after the packing with cardboard box.

修正後
Thank you for your inquiry.
this is an official item and is in the box attached.
As we will ship this out, we will pay close attention to make sure the item doesn't get damaged by using cushioning material after packing with the cardboard box.

元の翻訳
I want to order 60 of this product.
Please send an invoice to me by Paypal.

If possible, could I have you deliver that directly to Japan?
As I use our DHL account, so shipping charges will be paid upon delivery.

I am looking forward to your reply.

修正後
I want to order 60 of this product.
Please send an invoice to me by Paypal.

If possible, could I have you deliver them directly to Japan?
As I use our DHL account, shipping charges will be paid upon delivery.

I am looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
You can choose the reference point of the picture, which you want to display, from where you are now, your favorite locations registered, or a search from a map.

You can set up the displayed region from neighbor to the whole world.
You can also sort out by the date or the popularity.

You can mark the photo you like.
You can download popular photos and share them to SNS.
It shows you the map where the photo was taken and you can see the other pictures around there.

You can narrow down that all photos from the world by date and the place.
You can learn the scenery or events in the world that you have never seen.

修正後
You can choose the reference point of the picture which you want to display, from where you are now, your favorite locations registered, or a search from a map.

You can set up the displayed region from neighbor to the whole world.
You can also sort out by the date or the popularity.

You can mark the photo you like.
You can download popular photos and share them to SNS.
It shows you the map where the photo was taken and you can see the other pictures around there.

You can narrow down the pictures you like from all the pictures in the world by date and the place.
You can learn the scenery or events in the world that you have never seen.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your email.
We understand it and are canceling your previous order right now.
Also Thank you to place another order.
We've confirmed you ordered Pokemon items such as ○○ besides the new order. Do you mind if we ship them all together?
If it's okay with you, the shipping charges will be $5 cheaper and we will refund it to you after shipping them out. If you prefer to stick to the separate shipping, please let us know.

We are going to ship them within a few days. Please kindly wait for it.
We are also putting some Pokemon items as bonus. I hope you will like them.

修正後
Thank you for your email.
We understand it and are cancel your previous order right now.
Also, thank you for placing an another order.
We've confirmed you ordered Pokemon items such as ○○ besides the new order. Do you mind if we ship them all together?
If it's okay with you, the shipping charges will be $5 cheaper and we will refund it to you after shipping them out. If you prefer to stick to the separate shipping, please let us know.

We are going to ship them within a few days. Please kindly wait for it.
We are also putting some Pokemon items as bonus. We hope you will like them.