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ir0753

こんにちは、あなたが送ってくれた荷物が届きましたが注文したものと違うものが入っています。間違って届いた商品を変装しますので正しい商品を送ってください、Super Robot Chogokin Great Mazinger が注文した商品です。荷物にはフィギュアが2点入っていました。Mazingerが届くのを楽しみにしています。Adrianoさん、宜しくお願いします。

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ir0753

こんにちは、あなたが送ってくれた荷物が届きましたが注文したものと違うものが入っています。間違って届いた商品を返送しますので正しい商品を送ってください、Super Robot Chogokin Great Mazinger が注文した商品です。荷物にはフィギュアが2点入っていました。Mazingerが届くのを楽しみにしています。宜しくお願いします。Adrianoより

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I've just watched the Tour de France, so I'm going to bed. Good night.

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I've just finished watching the Tour de France, so I'm going to bed now. Good night.

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Cheeky Parade NY TOUR "School Trip a la Cheeky Parade - How about New York? - (Oct. 9th - Oct. 13th) < Starting additional subscription due to huge popularity!>

The additional subscription for the tour "School Trip a la Cheeky Parade - How about New York? - " leaving on Oct. 9th 2014, Thursday, was decided due to a lot of application!

<Period of additional subscription>
Jul. 7th 2014, Monday, at 19:00 - Jul 31st, Thursday, at 23:59

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Cheeky Parade NY TOUR "School Trip a la Cheeky Parade - How about New York? - (Oct. 9th - Oct. 13th) < Starting additional subscription due to huge popularity!>

The additional subscription for the tour "School Trip a la Cheeky Parade - How about New York? - " departing on Thursday, Oct. 9th 2014, was decided due to a lot of application!

<Period of additional application>
Monday, Jul. 7th 2014, at 19:00 - Thursday, Jul 31st, at 23:59

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3/22 Cheeky Parade PREMIUM LIVE You may be able to watch "Chikinology" performed in "THE FIRST" again.

Please look forward to watching it!

☆★The date of the performance☆★

【Date】
2014/8/16(Sutarday)

【The venue】
EX THEATER ROPPONGI
Website：http://www.tv-asahi.co.jp/ex-theater/

【Time】
《The first stage》Open 12:00/ Closed 13:00
《The second stage》Open 16:00/ Closed 17:00

【Price・the type of seats】
Advance sale of tickets: Standing seat 3,900 yen (tax included)

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3/22 Cheeky Parade PREMIUM LIVE You may be able to watch "Chikinology" performed in "THE FIRST" again.

Don't miss it!

☆★The date of the performance☆★

【Date】
Aug 16, 2014 (Sat)

【The venue】
EX THEATER ROPPONGI
Website：http://www.tv-asahi.co.jp/ex-theater/

【Time】
《Part I》Open 12:00/ Start 13:00
《Part II》Open 16:00/ Start 17:00

【Price/ Seat type】
Advanced sale ticket: Gallery 3,900 yen (tax included)

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I have not received items that I ordered on July 8th and 11th.
Have you sent them to me?

Please let me know when you sent them.

Thank you.

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I have not received items that I ordered on July 8th and 11th.
Have you sent them to me yet?

Please let me know when you sent them.

Thank you.

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The items I ordered on 8th and 11th of July haven't arrived yet, did you send them already?
Could you let me know when you sent these items?
Thank you in advance.

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The items I ordered on 8th and 11th of July haven't arrived yet, did you send them already?
Could you let me know when you sent them?
Thank you in advance.

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The bottle I'm looking for is a little bit different so I won't be buying it. Thank you for doing so much searching for me. Do you think if one searched for more all Japanese bottles in Holland that there would be even more things that would appear???

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The bottle I'm looking for is a little bit different so I won't be buying it. Thank you for doing so much searching for me. Do you think if one could find more of those old Japanese bottles in Holland???

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There are request and a question from the Risona Bank of Japan.
Could you send your insurance card or the original of your insurance policy?

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There are a request and a question from the Resona Bank of Japan.
Could you send them the 2 original copies of the insurance policy or the original certificate?

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Thank you for your cooperation on my first trading with you. I am Sato From NUREX.↵
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I have two questions from a bank in Japan on issuing L/C.
① Could you explain why you cannot send us two copies of insurance policy while they were supposed to be handed to clients?
②Could you write me back on when B/L will be sent to a bank in Vietnam?

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Thank you for your cooperation on my first trading with you. I am Sato From NUREX. I have two questions received from a bank in Japan on issuing L/C.
① Could you explain why you cannot send us two original copies of insurance policy? Generally they are supposed to issue two original copies to clients.
②When will B/L be submitted to a bank in Vietnam?↵
Please follow up the above.

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When I browse the hit charts at iTunes, only the following one tune won't play. Is it because there are special characters in the tune's name?

Also, when I click its name, the page doesn't change. (You're probably aware of this, though)
By the tune in the lowermost line, the playback button doesn't show up. I could fix it with CSS, but I'm reporting it just in case.

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When I browse the iTunes hit charts, only the following tune won't play. Is it because there are special characters in the its title?

Also, when I click its name, the page doesn't change. (You're probably aware of this, though)
By the tune in the lowermost line, the play button doesn't show up. I could fix it with CSS, but I'm reporting it just in case.

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商品をまだ受け取れていません。発送状況を追ったところ、「保留」と表示されてしまいます。売り手に対して、なぜ商品が届かないのか、あるいは発送会社に問題があるのかたずねようとしたのですが、お返事がなく、そのままです。３週間たちますが、まだ商品は配送されていません。

Ebayをとおしてあなたんい、メールを送りました。その後、Paypalとも連絡をとっています。カメラの何が問題かというと、２種類のちがうソニーテープを試したのですが、カメラにテープがからまってしまい、どちらも損傷してしまいました。あなたが設定している１４日間の返金規定に基づいて、カメラを返品した上で返金を求めます。カメラは２０１４年の７月１４日ごろに受け取ったものです。

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商品をまだ受け取れていません。発送状況を追ったところ、「保留」と表示されてしまいます。売り手に対して、なぜ商品が届かないのか、あるいは発送会社に問題があるのかたずねようとしたのですが、お返事がなく、そのままです。３週間たちますが、まだ商品は配送されていません。

Ebayを通してあなたにメールを送りました。その後、Paypalとも連絡をとっているところです。カメラの何が問題かというと、２種類のちがうソニー製テープを試したのですが、カメラにテープにしわがより、どちらも破損してしまいました。あなたが設定している１４日間の返金規定に基づいて、カメラを返品した上で返金を求めます。カメラは２０１４年の７月１5日ごろに受け取ったものです。

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We are terribly sorry that we have kept you waiting.

As we told you before, we will need some more days for shipment.
So we have not shipped the merchandise yet.
On your Amazon page, the status is "shipped," but this is because a system error will occur if we do not put "shipped" status on it.

We guarantee that you will receive the merchandise safely.
But in case you would like to cancel the purchase, please let us know as soon as possible.

We will do our best to deliver the merchandise as soon as possible.

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We are terribly sorry that we have kept you waiting.

As we told you before, we will need some more days for the product release.
So we have not shipped the merchandise yet.
Although Amazon notifies the product delivery status as "shipped," it is for the purpose of the systems error prevention.

We guarantee that you will receive your merchandise safely and for sure.
But if you wish to cancel the order, please let us know as soon as possible.

We will do our best to deliver the merchandise to you as soon as possible.

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It is 2 months over since this product was ordered, and it has not returned yet.
So, we have not been able to refund.

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It has been over 2 months since this product was ordered, and has not been returned to us as of yet.
So, we are not able to issue you a refund.

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Please be advised that the items shown in the picture may be a bit different from the actual items. The reason is that the items shown in the picture show similar type of items. We cannot post each picture of all items due to many varieties of items.
For more details, please visit and confirm at the website of ○△. Every items will be shipped from Japan. We obtain each and every item from their authentic dealers and they are all brand new without any copied items. So, please don't worry about the authenticity.

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Please be advised that the items shown in the picture may be a bit different from the actual items. The reason is, though we post those photos of similar types, there are way too many kinds for us to post every single one of them.
For more details, please visit and confirm at ○△ website. Every item will be shipped from Japan. We obtain each and every item from their authentic dealers and they are all brand new, unused, and no counterfeits. So, please be assured.

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This item was delivered to the customer at 30th June with no sender's name written on it.
The tracking number and URL is below.
Could you please cancel this repayment?

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This item was delivered to the customer at 30th June with no sender's name written on it.
The tracking number and URL are as follows.
Could you please cancel this refund?

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Morikubo: So you said you can't be bothered, is that right?

Female: I'm sorry! But the your cousin who goes to T University whom you introduced me to doesn't want anything to do with me.

Morikubo: I said I'd only introduce him, and that you're on your own after that.

Female: But I invited Kamagawa in library just like you told me to. And now he gets along great with his current girlfriend, right? Help me out here!

Morikubo: Fine, you win...

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I'm concerned about this (a little bit).

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Morikubo: I told you not to bother me, right?

Female: I'm sorry! But the your cousin who goes to T University whom you introduced me to doesn't want anything to do with me.

Morikubo: I said I'd only introduce him, and that you're on your own after that.

Female: But I invited Torikawa in library just like you told me to. And now he gets along great with his current girlfriend, right? Help me out here!

Morikubo: Fine, you win...

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I'm concerned about this (a little bit).

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Thank you for sending a psot card to me whenever you travel abroad.
As I found while I was traveling, we don't have time to send a post card while we are traveling (
we are busy), and it is difficult to do so.↵
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Taiwan is one of the countries that I would like to visit, so this card is a quite memorative one.

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Thank you for sending me a postcard whenever you travel abroad.
From my personal experiences, it's hard to find time to send a post card while we are traveling (
we are busy). Taiwan is one of the countries that I would like to visit, so this postcard shall serve as a good memory.

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I wonder if it this combination can fit within 2 kilometers?

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With these put together, would it fit less than 2kg?

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Hello
I am ● ●.
Thank you for buying me this product ! !

I am playing soccer and futsal.
I like football!
I also like soccer game!

Please contact me if there is a product you want it!
By all means, thank you introduced to friends.↵
I hope that you must introduce the product for your friends.

ps
You are looking for a product in Japan, regardless of the football-related.↵
Please contact me!

I would support to you fully!

Good luck with you!

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Hello
I am ● ●.
Thank you for buying this product from me ! !

I play soccer and futsal.
I love football!
I also love soccer game!

Please contact me if there is any product you want!
By all means, please refer to your friends about me.

ps
If you are looking for a product in Japan, regardless of the football-related, please contact me!

I would fully support you!

Good luck!

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翻訳して頂いた中にアーティストの発言が翻訳してあった箇所がありましたが、この部分は英語のままで残しますので翻訳する必要はありません。ただし、日本人アーティストの発言は例外となります。発言が日本語の場合はそのままで意味は通じますが、他の言語に翻訳するために一旦英訳します。

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翻訳して頂いたアーティストの引用の１つが翻訳してあった箇所がありましたが、翻訳は不要です。この部分は当方で英語のままで残します。ただし、日本人アーティストの引用は例外となります。発言が日本語の場合はそのままでいいのですが、その他の言語にその引用を英訳します。