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Thank you for the contact.
A major mistake was found out as I inquired the post office today: selected and printed on the shipping label turned out to be Saipan but not Spain. The item is in New York at the moment on its way for Spain. It is likely to take an extra few more days before reaching to you. Please accept our sincere apologies for the inconvenience that has been caused to you. As a sign of our apologies, we will repay you a half of the shipping fee. We are so sorry but please wait for a while.

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Thank you for the contact.
A major mistake was found out as I inquired the post office today: I had selected Saipan but not Spain for it to be printed on the shipping label. The item is in New York at the moment on its way to Spain. It is likely to take a few more days before reaching you. Please accept our sincere apologies for the inconvenience that has been caused to you. As a sign of our apologies, we will repay you a half of the shipping fee. We are so sorry but please wait for a while.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the message.
After going to the post office, I know that I have made a big mistake. I chose "Saipan" instead of "Spain" to be printed on the shopping labels. The products are in New York now and will be delivered to Spain. It will take some days before these products will be delivered to you. I am really sorry for my mistake. In order to show our sincerity, we refund half of the price to you. I am sorry for this and please wait for a few moments.

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Thank you for the message.
After going to the post office, I happened to know that I had made a big mistake. I chose "Saipan" instead of "Spain" to be printed on the shopping labels. The products are in New York now and will be delivered to Spain. It will take some days before these products are delivered to you. I am really sorry for my mistake. In order to show our sincerity, we will refund half of the price to you. I am sorry for this and please wait for a few moments.

元の翻訳
The first point is that you can confirm the health status of your baby at home. Since babies cannot talk, it might take some time for their parents to notice babies' disorder. But this diaper can confirm baby's health status by communicating with a smartphone so there would be less risk of not noticing babies' disorder.
The next point is its cost. Since you can confirm babies' health status, you might not have to go to the hospital as much as you would have.
The last point is flexible imagination. This new product was created by combining diapers, QR codes and smartphone which does not seem to be related to each other.

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The first point is that you can check the health status of your baby at home. Since babies cannot talk, it might take some time for parents to notice their babies' disorders. But the diaper can check a baby's health status by communicating with a smartphone so there would be less risk of overlooking the baby's disorder.
The next point is its cost. Since you can check your baby's health status at home, you might have to go to the hospital less often.
The last point is flexible creativity. This new product was created by combining diaper, QR code and smartphone which are seemingly unrelated to each other.

元の翻訳
Hi, My name is XXX.
We are talking about purchasing below products.

Product name: yyyyy
Item number:123456

We want to know the quality and facial expressions before purchasing.
We want you to reply this message with some photos showing the whole image, face and quality of the product.
We hope to hear from you soon.

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Hi, my name is XXX.
We are interested in purchasing the below products.

Product name: yyyyy
Item number:123456

We want to know about the quality and facial expressions before purchasing.
We want you to reply to this message with some photos showing the whole image, face and quality of the product.
We hope to hear from you soon.

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Hello, My name is xxx.
I'm considering to buy following product.

Product name: yyyyy
Item number: 123456

Before deciding to purchase, I want to know texture of the product and facial expression etc..
I'd like to ask you to take several photos that I can confirm total image, face and texture of the product and return this mail with the photos.
I look forward to your reply.

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Hello, My name is xxx.
I'm considering buying the following product.

Product name: yyyyy
Item number: 123456

Before deciding to purchase, I want to know about the texture of the product and the facial expression etc.
I would like to confirm the whole image, the face and the texture of the product, so could you kindly take several photos and return this mail with the photos?
I look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
As you told me, I called and told them the followings.
Please remove the locking immediately.

Probably the reason is that I used the Internet in the hotel
where I stayed.
As I am a user, I do not have a problem.

What else do you need?
Details of what I told you by telephone
Date of birth
Account ID
Address
Telephone number
E-mail address

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As you told me, I called and told them the followings.
Please release the lock immediately.

Probably the reason is that I used the Internet in the hotel
where I stayed.
As I am a user, there should be no problem.

What else do you need?
Details of what I told you by telephone
Date of birth
Account ID
Address
Telephone number
E-mail address

元の翻訳
I phoned and gave the information below as I was told to do so.
Please unlock it soon.

The reason why this happened is because I stayed at a hotel and used their internet line.
The user is myself so I don't see there is a problem

What else should I give?

The information I gave on the phone:
Date of birth
Account ID
Address
Phone number
Email address

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I phoned and gave the information below as I was told to do so.
Please unlock it immediately.

The reason why this happened is because I stayed at a hotel and used their internet line.
The user is myself so I don't see there is a problem

What else should I give?

The information I gave on the phone:
Date of birth
Account ID
Address
Phone number
Email address

元の翻訳
サイトでの販売における制限に関しイーベイカスタマーサービスへご連絡いただきありがとうございます。
本イーベイへの多商品の出品にお喜びのことでしょう。
私の名前はジェサです。本日、担当されていただくこと嬉しく思います。

貴アカウントを確認したところ、日本のメンバーの本制限については特別チームが対処するはずです。
この類の問題は本チームが担当するので、迅速に最善且つ最たる克明な解決がもたらされるでしょう。

同チームとの連絡において、貴方のメールアドレスからhkrswebhelp@ebay.com.sgまでメールをお送りください。

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サイトでの販売における制限に関しイーベイカスタマーサービスへご連絡いただきありがとうございます。
本イーベイへの多商品の出品にお喜びのことでしょう。
私の名前はジェサです。本日、担当させていただくことを嬉しく思います。

貴アカウントを確認したところ、日本のメンバーの本制限については特別チームが対処する必要があります。
この類の問題は本チームが具体的に対応するので、迅速に最善且つ最たる克明な解決がもたらされるでしょう。

同チームとの連絡においては、貴方のメールアドレスからhkrswebhelp@ebay.com.sgまでメールをお送りください。

元の翻訳
サイトで商品を販売する際の制限について、eBayカスタマーサービスをご連絡頂き、ありがとうございます。eBayで商品を更に販売することについて、強く望んでいる旨、ご理解いたしました。私の名前はJessaと言いまして、本日喜んでお手伝いさせていただきます。
あなたのアカウントを調べたところ、制限要求については弊社の、日本のメンバーに対する特別チームが対応していることが判明しました。このチームは特別にこれらの問題を対処し、それによりあなたが最良、及び最も正確な返事をできるだけ早く受け取れるよう努力しています。
このチームと連絡を取るには、このアドレスhkrswebhelp@ebay.com.sgにあなたの個人のメールアドレスからメールを送信する必要があります。

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サイトで商品を販売する際の制限について、eBayカスタマーサービスへご連絡頂き、ありがとうございます。eBayで商品を更に販売することについて、強く望んでいる旨、ご理解いたしました。私の名前はJessaと言いまして、本日喜んでお手伝いさせていただきます。
あなたのアカウントを調べたところ、制限要求については弊社の、日本のメンバーに対する特別チームが対応する必要があることが分かっています。このチームは具体的にこれらの問題を対処し、それによりあなたが最良、及び最も正確な返事をできるだけ早く受け取れるよう努力しています。
このチームと連絡を取るには、このアドレスhkrswebhelp@ebay.com.sgにあなたの個人のメールアドレスからメールを送信する必要があります。

元の翻訳
eBayカスタマーサービスへ、販売アイテムがサイトに掲載している際の制限についてお問い合わせをありがとうございました。eBayにより多くのアイテムを掲載することは、あなたにとってとても期待されていることでしょう。私はJessaと申します。この度、あたなのお役に立てて光栄です。

あなたのアカウントを拝見いたしました。制限につきましては、私たちの日本人メンバーのための特別チームによって対応する必要がございます。この特別チームが、これらの件について対応することにより、あなたは最善で、もっとも正確な返事を出来る限り迅速に得ることができます。

このチームに連絡するためには、あなたの個人メールから、hkrswebhelp@ebay.com.sgにメールをお送りください。

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eBayカスタマーサービスへ、当サイトで商品を販売される際の制限についてお問い合わせをいただきありがとうございます。eBayにより多くのアイテムを出品することは、あなたにとってとても期待されていることでしょう。私はJessaと申します。この度、お客様のお役に立てて光栄です。

あなたのアカウントを拝見いたしました。制限につきましては、当社の日本人メンバーのための特別チームによって対応する必要がございます。このチームが、これらの件について具体的に対応することにより、あなたは最善で、もっとも正確な返事を出来る限り迅速に得ることができます。

このチームへの連絡は、あなたの個人メールから、hkrswebhelp@ebay.com.sgにメールをお送りください。

元の翻訳
こんにちは。
お支払いいたしますので、お取り置き願います。
よろしくお願いします。

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こんにちは。
お支払いいたしますので、お待ちください。
よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
I asked ●● to make an estimation by e-mail.
I have already sent a sample. And then I answered what material we use for it.
But I didn't receive any reply yet.
I understand at least it should be 100 lots. Could you just let me know why you don't give me a reply.
If you can not make it, please send back the sample we sent.
I am waiting for your reply. Thank you.

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I asked ●● to make an estimate by e-mail.
I sent a sample, and then answered to what material we use for it.
But I haven't received any reply yet.
I understand the minimu order quantity is 100. Could you just let me know why you don't give me a reply?
If the production is impossible, please send back the sample we sent.
I am waiting for your reply. Thank you.

元の翻訳
We have asked Mr/Mrs ●● at your office for your company's quotation.
We have send a sample and we have not been able to receive any replies after we gave an answer concerning what material to be used.
We do understand that the minimum order is 100.
Could you kindly give us an explanation on why we have not been given any replies.
If the production cannot be done by you please send us back the sample that we have send you.
Thank you for your reply in advance.

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We have requested an estimate to Mr/Mrs ●● in your company.
We have not received any replies since we sent a sample and gave an answer to what material to be used.
We do understand that the minimum order quantity is 100.
Could you kindly give us an explanation on why we have not got any replies?
If the production is impossible, please send back the sample to us that we sent you.
Thank you for your reply in advance.

元の翻訳
We are very sorry for keeping you waiting.

We tried to find its current location but there is no update after shipping our from Japan.
As usual, it takes one week to arrive at the destination. I am afraid that it probably get stuck in a customs.

Sorry for bothering you. but could you please contact your neighbor post office with the racking number?

if there is anything we can do for you, please kindly let us know.

Best regards

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We are very sorry for keeping you waiting.

We tried to find its current location but there is no update about it after it was shipped out from Japan.
Usually, it takes one week for the shipment to arrive at the destination. I am afraid that it probably gets stuck in customs.

Sorry for bothering you, but could you please contact your neighborhood post office with the tracking number?

If there is anything we can do for you, please kindly let us know.

Best regards

元の翻訳
Thank you for your always help.

We are still waiting for the arrival of the lenses so far
but it is 6:00 p.m. on Saturday night now in Japan and a customer service of FEDEX has already been closed.

On the next Monday, we are going to have contact with FEDEX and confirm whether finding the location without a tracking number is possible or not.
Could you please give us another 2 days?

Best regards

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Thank you for your continuous help.

We are still waiting for the arrival of the lenses so far
but it is 6:00 p.m. on Saturday right now in Japan and the customer service of FEDEX is closed.

On next Monday, we are going to contact with FEDEX and confirm whether I can track the package without a tracking number.
Could you please give us another 2 days?

Best regards

元の翻訳
Hello. Your lenses have not arrived yet as of today. It's 6:00 p.m. on Saturday in Japan so FedEx customer service is closed.
I'll contact them on Monday and confirm if there's a way to track the package without a tracking number. Please give me couple days. Thank you.

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Hello. The lenses have not arrived yet as of today. It's 6:00 p.m. on Saturday in Japan so FedEx customer service is closed.
I'll contact them on Monday and confirm if there's a way to track the package without a tracking number. Please give me a couple days. Thank you.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。
貴方の最近の注文をキャンセル後、返金しました。
ところが、貴方がアマゾンのアカウントにおいて販売していらっしゃることを
見つけました。これは、違法です。
今後の発注は許可しませんし、大型の発注の際は、スキャンさせていただきます。

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こんにちは。
貴方の最近の注文をキャンセル後、返金しました。
ところが、貴方がアマゾンのアカウントにおいて当社の商品を販売していらっしゃることを
見つけました。これは許し難いことです。
今後の発注は許可しませんし、大型の発注の際は、入念に調べさせていただきます。

元の翻訳
Good day.
Below are the questions and concerns I have.
Thank you for your help.

・If I purchase 100 pieces wouldn't each piece be ●$ ?
・After the item has been purchased, about how long would it take to arrive to Japan?
・Since I would like the item ASAP, is there a possibility to deliver via express? （Express delivery）
If it is possible how much would the additional shipping fees be?
Also, how long would it take to be delivered to Japan?

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Good day.
Below are questions and concerns I have.
Thank you for your help.

・If I purchase 100 pieces, would each piece be ●$ ?
・After I place an order, about how many days would it take for the item to arrive in Japan?
・Since I would like the item ASAP, is there a possibility to deliver it by express mail? （Express mail）
If express mail delivery is possible, how much would the additional shipping fees be?
Also, how long would it take for the item to be delivered to Japan?

元の翻訳
Hello,
I bought a long cardigan for myself this time.
I have checked the other clothes and was impressed that there were many items that have good taste.
I am selling products in Japan, but are you planning to have a brand exhibition (in Japan or in other countries)?

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Hello,
I bought a long cardigan sweater for myself this time.
I have checked the other clothes and was impressed to see that there were many sophisticated items.
I am selling products in Japan, and are you planning to have a brand exhibition (in Japan or in other countries)?

元の翻訳
こんにちは。もう少し良い保証カードの写真、またケースに記載されているシリアル番号を送ってくれませんか。

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こんにちは。もう少し写りの良い保証書カードの写真、またケースとムーブメントに記載されているシリアル番号を送ってくれませんか。

元の翻訳
If you have not accepted the order form A, which I sent to Rayan yesterday, we would like to cancel it.
We have just sent the order form B which includes some of the items we had listed in the order form A.

We understand the reasons of delay in items' shipment.
However, we kindly ask you to arrange the shipment so that we will be able to receive the items in Japan, in the next week, at the latest.

By the way, I appreciate that we will not have to bear the handling charge of 30 €.
We would like to order an additional item and, up to this, hope you can kindly handle without the handling charge.

We are now waiting for the arrival of the following items, so please kindly verify.

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If you have not accepted the order form A which I sent to Rayan yesterday, we would like to cancel it.
We have just sent the order form B which includes some of the items we had listed in the order form A.

We understand the reasons of delay in the items' shipment.
However, we kindly ask you to arrange the shipment so that we will be able to receive the items in Japan at the latest by the next week.

By the way, I appreciate that we will not have to bear the handling charge of 30 €.
We would like to order an additional item and, up to this, hope you can kindly handle without the handling charge.

We are now waiting for the arrival of the following items, so please kindly verify.

元の翻訳
I sent a purchase order to Ryan yesterday.
If he has not received it yet, I would like to cancel it.
I added part of the item in the purchase order of B that I sent just now.

I understand the reason why the item is delayed in sending.
I would like to receive it in Japan in the next week at the latest.

I appreciate that I do not have to pay the 30 pounds as the feel.
As I am going to add 1 item today, I would also like you to send it without the fee.
We are waiting for the arrival of the following item, and could you check its content?

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I sent a purchase order to Ryan yesterday.
If he has not received it yet, I would like to cancel it.
I added part of the item in the purchase order of B that I sent just now.

I understand the reason why the item is delayed in shipment.
I would like to receive it in Japan by the next week at the latest.

I appreciate that I do not have to pay the 30 pounds as the handling fee.
As I am going to add 1 item today, I would also like you to send it without the handling fee.
We are waiting for the arrival of the following item, and could you check the details?

元の翻訳
How long does it take if you use air-cargo?
Also, how do I know that you have shipped it correctly?

I will pay for it as soon as I get the information about shipping.

I do want to process it as you feel like.

Thank you for taking care of it. I look forward to hearing from you.

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How long does it take if you use air shipment?
Also, how do I know that you have shipped it correctly?

I will pay for it as soon as I get the information about shipping.

I do want to process it immediately as you do.

Thank you for taking care of it. I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
How may days are required to be sent to Japan by air?
How can I find that you had sent a package to me?
If you prove that you had sent the package to me, I will
arrange for payment immediately.

I would like to process it as early as you like.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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How may days are required for the air shipment to Japan?
How can I know you shipped my order?
If you prove that you shipped the package to me, I will
arrange for payment immediately.

I would like to process it immediately as you do.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。

こちらを返品しようとしているのですが、地元の郵便局はわたしが郵便局でアカウントを作らない限りCOD配送は提供できないとのことでした。

この商品を送れる唯一の方法はエアーメールで送ることです。(追跡なし)

この荷物を集める方法がない限り？
このオプションは高くなりますがUPSであればアカウントをつかっておくれます。

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こんにちは。

こちらを返品しようとしているのですが、地元の郵便局はわたしが郵便局でアカウントを作らない限り着払い配送は提供できないとのことでした。

この商品の代金をわたしが負担して送れる唯一の方法はエアーメール便で送ることです。(追跡番号なし)

そちらでこの荷物を集める方法がない場合はですが。
このオプションは高くなりますがUPSであればアカウントをつかっておくれます。