翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

こんにちは
今回は個人用としてロングカーディガンを購入しました。
他の商品も見ましたが、すごくセンスの良い商品がいっぱいで感動しました。
私は日本で物販をしていますが、ブランドの展示会の開催予定（日本、海外）はありますか？

英語

Hello,
I bought a long cardigan for myself this time.
I have checked the other clothes and was impressed that there were many items that have good taste.
I am selling products in Japan, but are you planning to have a brand exhibition (in Japan or in other countries)?

レビュー ( 1 )

tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/02/15 12:45:34

元の翻訳
Hello,
I bought a long cardigan for myself this time.
I have checked the other clothes and was impressed that there were many items that have good taste.
I am selling products in Japan, but are you planning to have a brand exhibition (in Japan or in other countries)?

修正後
Hello,
I bought a long cardigan sweater for myself this time.
I have checked the other clothes and was impressed to see that there were many sophisticated items.
I am selling products in Japan, and are you planning to have a brand exhibition (in Japan or in other countries)?