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The goods that you ordered is a three‐piece set.
So it doesn't have six-piece from the first.
But it's strange there's only two-piece, please send me the photo of delivered goods.

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The item that you ordered is a three‐piece set.
So it originally doesn't have six pieces.
But it's strange there are only two pieces, so please send me the photo of the delivered item.

元の翻訳
The items a customer ordered is a 3 set items. And so originally there are not additional 6. However, as it is strange that you have only received 2, could you kindly send us the image of the items having been sent?

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The item you ordered is a 3-piece set , so originally 6 pieces are not included. However, as it is strange that you have only received only 2 pieces, could you kindly send us the image of the item you have received?

元の翻訳
もう一件出荷準備を完了したものがあり、DHLの人がもうすぐ取りに来てくれます。新しい送り状を添えてあります。あといくつか、届いていないグラスがあります。

一つ気づいたことがあります。 この部品番号RHD800Kは、メーカーから届いた取り寄せ注文リストには載っていなかったようです。このタイプの組み合わせを強いれることはできないようです。この部品番号の代わりに注文できるグラスセットとしては、他にもあるんですか？

A0347 ハーレー・デイビットソン (Harley-Davidson) RHD800K 11.45

よろしくお願いします。

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もう一件出荷準備を完了したものがあり、DHLの人がもうすぐ取りに来てくれます。新しい送り状を添えてあります。あといくつか、届いていないグラスがあります。

一つ気づいたことがあります。 この部品番号RHD800Kは、メーカーから届いた取り寄せ注文リストには載っていなかったようです。このタイプの組み合わせを仕入れることはできないようです。この部品番号の代わりに注文できるグラスセットとしては、他にもあるんですか？

A0347 ハーレー・デイビットソン (Harley-Davidson) RHD800K 11.45

よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
もう一件発送の用意ができており間もなくDHLが取りに来ます。新しい送り状が付いてきます。まだ数個のグラスが到着するのを待っています。

一つ気がつきました。この特殊な部品番号RHD800Kは弊社の製造業者の取り寄せ注文のリストにはないようです。この種の梱包は弊社は出来ないようです。この部品番号の代わりに他の一組のグラスを注文することはできますか。

Ao347 Harley- Davidson RGD800K 11.45

よろしくお願い致します。

修正後
もう一件発送の用意ができており間もなくDHLが取りに来ます。新しい送り状が付いてきます。まだ数個のグラスが到着するのを待っています。

一つ気がつきました。この特殊な部品番号RHD800Kは弊社の製造業者の取り寄せ注文のリストにはないようです。この種の梱包は弊社は出来ないようです。この部品番号の代わりにグラスを他に一組注文することはできますか。

Ao347 Harley- Davidson RGD800K 11.45

よろしくお願い致します。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.

Could you connect your personal power cord?

I think it will work if you buy an electric converter in Japan.

By the way,is there any other things that you need?

As the start set, so it will work quickly, and if you want to buy you any nessesary part↵
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Please tell me.

Thank you for your attention.

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Thank you for your reply.

Could you include its personal power cord, too?

I think it will work if I buy an electric converter in Japan.

By the way, are there any other things that I need?

As a start set, I would like to use it quickly, and if I need to buy any other nessesary parts, I will, so please tell me.

Thank you for your attention.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
Will it be possible to provide me with the exclusive power code too?
I am thinking to buy the converter in Japan to use the item.
Is there anything else needed?
I would like to use it as soon as possible with the start kit .
I will purchase the parts if I need, so please let me know.
Thank you in advance.

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Thank you for your reply.
Will it be possible to provide me with its exclusive power cord, too?
I am thinking of buying a converter in Japan to use the item.
Is there anything else needed?
I would like to use it as soon as possible as a start kit .
I will also purchase other parts if I need, so please let me know.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
I apologize that I am late in replying you. Regarding sending, as there were several accidents in its delivery to Mexico, I use only EMS, which is the most expensive. The shipping charge is 30 dollars. I cannot list the price in the invoice that is lower than the actual price. The price that was guaranteed in the past when an accident occurred was low. I hope that you understand it. You can cancel the bidding. If you request so, please let e know.

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I apologize for being late in replying to you. Regarding shipment, as there were several accidents happening during delivery to Mexico, I use only EMS, which is the most expensive. The shipping charge is 30 dollars. I cannot list the price in the invoice that is lower than the actual price. The price that was guaranteed in the past when an accident occurred was low. I hope that you understand it. You can cancel the bidding. If you request so, please let e know.

元の翻訳
I apologize for the late reply. As for shipping, I have had many shipping accidents in the past, so I only use EMS, which is the most expensive. Therefore, the shipping cost is $30. Also, I can’t a lower price on the invoice. That’s because when an accident happened in the past, only up to the low amount was guaranteed. Thank you for your understanding. You can cancel the winning bid, so please let me know.

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I apologize for the late reply. As for shipping, I have had many shipping accidents in the past, so I only use EMS, which is the most expensive. Therefore, the shipping cost is $30. Also, I can’t list a lower price on the invoice. That’s because when an accident happened in the past, only up to the low amount was guaranteed. Thank you for your understanding. You can cancel the winning bid, so please let me know.

元の翻訳
How your condition lately?
Here in Tokyo, the hot summer has arrived.
I eagerly would like to go to London in September.
I will be glad if I can meet you on the second weekend.
Looking forward to your reply.

So you've changed the price of the ticket?
I think it's affordable good price for many audience to come.

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How is your condition lately?
Here in Tokyo, the hot summer has arrived.
I eagerly would like to go to London in September.
I will be glad if I can meet you on the second weekend.
Looking forward to your reply.

So you've changed the price of the ticket, haven't you?
I think it's affordable price that can attract a large audience.

元の翻訳
I have understood about the refund.
I mostly agree what you say, but there was a clear difference in the sewing and the level of stain between the first arrived sample and that of the second order.
It might have been that our demand standard was too high.
I will send the postage slip.
I have taken so much of your time, I am sorry.
Thanking you for your cooperation in advance.

The card has arrived.
I think that we may order you many after the exhibition next month.
Your mass production preparation is going well?
Please tell me about the progress.

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I have understood about the refund.
I mostly agree what you say, but there was a clear difference in the sewing and the level of stain between the first received sample and that of the second order.
Our demand standard might have been too high.
I will send the postage slip.
I have taken so much of your time, I am sorry.
Thank you for your cooperation in advance.

The card has arrived.
I think that we can place a lot of order with you after the exhibition next month.
Your mass production preparation is going well?
Please tell me about the progress.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact.
We have two stocks for the goods you requested.
If you purchase three items in total, we will pay you back 15 dollars.
Look forward to hearing from you.

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Thank you for your contact.
We have two in stock for the goods you requested.
If you purchase three items in total, we will pay you back 15 dollars.
Look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry.

I didn't notice your message.

I have been working from 8am to 7pm during one month.
And I still have three days left...

Are you still looking for the book?
If so, please let me know.

This book seems very old.
I try looking for it in used bookstore if you need it.

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I'm sorry.

I didn't notice your message. I'm very sorry.

I have been working from 8am to 7pm for one month.
And I still have three days left...

Are you still looking for the book?
If so, please let me know.

This book seems very old.
I will look for it in used bookstores if you need it.

元の翻訳
$3,000以上（割引後）のお買い上げでVineland, NY 08260（米国住所）での本船渡しで、卸売り価格の25%引きになります。

定期的な取引をさせていただくようなり、コンテナでの取引になりました後で、インドから発送のオペレーション上の最適化を図ることが可能になります。

とりあえずご参考の為に初期購入価格リストを添付しました。価格は全て米ドルになります。（他の通貨での価格が入用でしたらお知らせください。）

本件を現実化する為に、他にもなにかお役に立てることがありましたら何なりとお知らせください。御社の事業成長の概略から拝しますと、弊社とのパートナーシップは成功が望めることと存じます。

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$3,000超（割引後）のお買い上げでVineland, NY 08260（米国住所）での本船渡しで、卸売り価格の25%引きになります。

定期的な取引をさせていただくようなり、コンテナでの取引になりました後で、インドから発送のオペレーション上の最適化を図ることが可能になります。

とりあえずご参考の為に初期購入価格リストを添付しました。価格は全て米ドルになります。（他の通貨での価格がご入用でしたらお知らせください。）

本件を現実化する為に、他にもなにかお役に立てることがありましたら何なりとお知らせください。御社の事業成長の概略から拝しますと、弊社とのパートナーシップは成功が望めることと存じます。

元の翻訳
I apologize for the inconveniences caused by a defective product.

I offered to refund you with Amazon gift card valued at about 10% more than the purchase price. I am e-mailing you since I have not heard from you.

If you do not wish a refund with Amazon gift card, I will refund in the usual manner.

If I do not hear from you within 48 hrs, I will refund the entire purchase price by the normal refund process so please understand.

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I apologize for the inconvenience caused by the defective product.

I previously offered to refund you with an Amazon gift card valued at about 110% of the purchase price. I am e-mailing you for confirmation since I have not heard from you.

If you do not wish a refund with an Amazon gift card, I will give you a refund in the usual manner.

If I do not hear from you within 48 hrs, I will refund the entire purchase price by the normal refund process so please understand.

元の翻訳
Greetings.
I sent a mail to XXX three days ago, but there has been no reply. Thus, I contact you again.
The mail's detail was: could you please tell me how to register the bank account to which I want to have my Amazon earnings deposited?
In the XXX's document I submitted when opening a corporation account, there was only a section to fill the bank's name and nothing else.
That, and now I can't login to the XXX's management screen. The earnings' deposit time is near, so I am now very inconvenienced. What should I do? Thank you for having a look at this in addition to the bank account matter.

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Greetings.
I sent a mail to XXX three days ago, but there has been no reply. Thus, I am contacting you again.
The mail's detail was: could you please tell me how to register a bank account to which I want to receive earnings from Amazon?
In XXX's document I submitted when opening a corporate account, there was only a section to fill a bank name.
Also, I can't login to XXX's management screen. I'm supposed to receive earnings soon, so I am very much in trouble. What should I do? Could you kindly take care of this in addition to the bank account registration?

元の翻訳
クリーニング　- コーチは外皮部分を柔らかい布に、ぬるま湯の弱性石鹸水とを染み込ませて拭くことを推奨している。使用する布は必ず完全に絞り、ごくわずかに湿っている状態にし、優しく皮の表面を拭く。繰り返し拭くときは、常に綺麗な水を使う。

保管　- 使わないときは、柔らかいナイルブルーバッグに入れて、気温と湿度が低い環境下で保管する。

お手入れ　- 製品を直射日光に長く当てたままにしない。日光や、他の強い光に長時間さらしたままにすることで色落ち、劣化、型崩れの原因になる。

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クリーニング　- コーチは外皮部分を柔らかい布に、ぬるま湯の弱性石鹸水とを染み込ませて拭くことを推奨している。使用する布は必ず完全に絞り、ごくわずかに湿っている状態にし、優しく皮の表面を拭く。繰り返し拭くときは、常に綺麗な水を使う。

保管　- 使用しないときは、柔らかいナイルブルーバッグに入れて、気温と湿度が低い環境下で保管する。

お手入れ　- 製品を直射日光に長く当てたままにしない。日光など強い光に長時間さらしたままにすることで色落ち、劣化、型崩れの原因になる。

元の翻訳
I'm listing items at Amazon.co.uk.

I am very sorry to have listed your brand item in Amazon.co.uk by mistake.
Our CSV upload of items was not accurate and caused issue like uploading your brand items.

Below is my improvement plan to prevent issues like the above from happening again.

-Reviewing item management system.
--> I will stop registration of all new items.

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I'm listing items at Amazon.co.uk.

I am very sorry to have listed your brand item in Amazon.co.uk by mistake.
Our upload of CSV for items had not been controlled correctly and caused such an issue like uploading the items of your brand.

Below is my improvement plan to prevent the issues above from happening again.

-Reviewing item management system.
--> I will stop registration of all new items.

元の翻訳
We list the items at Amazon Co.UK.

We apologize that we listed your item of the brand at the Amazon.Co.UK by mistake this time.
As we had not controlled uploading CSV of the item appropriately, we caused a problem where we uploaded your item of the brand.
This time we will improve it as follows to prevent the above trouble happening again.

Reviewing of the item control system
We stop registration of all the new items.

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We list the items at Amazon co.uk.

We apologize for having listed an item of your brand at Amazon.co.uk by mistake this time.
As we had not controlled the uploading of CSV for our items appropriately, we caused such a problem that we uploaded an item of your brand.
This time we will improve it as follows to prevent the above trouble happening again.

Reviewing of the item management system
We will stop registration of all the new items.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

I understand regarding shipping to your son's address.

The item will be shipped on April 29th.

It usually takes 8 days to arrive at the requested address after shipping, the item would arrive around May 7th.

Also, you might need to pay the customs on the item, so please let him know in advance.
Please understand that we do not know how much it will be.

We will inform you of the trucking number after shipping.

Thank you.

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Thank you for your message.

I understand regarding shipping to your son's address.

The item will be shipped on April 29th.

It usually takes 8 days to arrive at the requested address after shipping, so the item would arrive around May 7th.

Also, you might need to pay the customs on the item, so please let him know in advance.
Please understand that we do not know how much it will be.

We will inform you of the tracking number after shipping.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thanks for your message.

I noted to sent the item to your son's address.

Item will be sent out on April 29th.

After it's sent out it takes about 8 days till it's delivered to the designated address, so it will reach around on May 7th.

Also, it may be subject to tariff so please inform your son in advance.
Please note that we do not know expected amount of tax.

I will let you know the tracking number after I sent the item.

Thank you.

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Thanks for your message.

I understood that you wanted me to ship the item to your son's address.

The item will be sent out on April 29th.

After it's sent out it takes about 8 days till it's delivered to the designated address, so it will reach you around May 7th.

Also, it may be subject to tariff so please inform your son in advance.
Please note that we do not know the expected amount of tax.

I will let you know the tracking number after I send the item.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

I got it that you want us to send the product to the address of your son.

I am going to dispatch the product on April 29.

Because it needs about 8 days before it is delivered at the requested address, I expect that the delivery date will be around May 7.

Further, in case that the tax is charged to it, please inform your son of the possibility beforehand.
Please note that we do not know or estimate the amount of the charge.

After the product shipment, I inform you of the truck number.

With kindest regards,

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Thank you for your message.

I understood that you wanted us to send the product to the address of your son.

I am going to ship the product on April 29.

Because it needs about 8 days before it arrives at the requested address, I expect that the delivery date will be around May 7.

Furthermore, it is possible that tax is charged on it, so please inform your son of that possibility beforehand.
Please note that we don't know how much you are supposed to pay for tax.

After the product is shipped, I will inform you of the tracking number.

With kindest regards,

元の翻訳
There are different addresses with same ID, to which address should I send it to?
Please let me know the delivery address.
Thank you.

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There are different addresses with the same ID, to which address should I send it to?
Please let me know the delivery address.
Thank you.