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元の翻訳
I found your brand on Instagram. I am interested in an attached picture which is a leather wallet with coin pockets. Could you please tell me its price, colors, and shipping cost to Japan? I look forward to your reply.

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I found your brand on Instagram. I am interested in the leather wallet with coin pockets in the attached picture. Could you please tell me its price, colors, and shipping cost to Japan? I look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I looked into My jobs of AGITO but cannot confirm the video.

It might have been considered as a normal task and declined. Could you therefore confirm it again?

I appreciate,

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Thank you for your reply.
I looked into My jobs of AGITO but cannot confirm the video.

It might have been considered as a normal task and declined. Could you therefore confirm it again?

Thank you for your kind assistance.

元の翻訳
それには、私を混乱させるようなマークがいくつかあります。それらはくぼみのようで、Mewtwoが本来のマット仕上げというよりは光沢感のある感じです。また、Mewtwoの取り外し式ハンドは非常に簡単に外れてしまいます。そのため、しばしばポーズをとる瞬間を台無しにしてしまうことがあります。あまりに簡単に外れてしまうので、取り外し式ハンドをなくしてしまいそうで不安です。

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それには、私を困惑させるような傷がいくつかあります。それらはくぼみのようで、Mewtwoが本来のマット仕上げというよりは光沢感のある感じです。また、Mewtwoの取り外し式ハンドは非常に簡単に外れてしまいます。そのため、しばしばポーズをとる楽しい時間を台無しにしてしまうことがあります。あまりに簡単に外れてしまうので、取り外し式ハンドをなくしてしまいそうで不安です。

元の翻訳
四半期売上レポートにおいて初めて、中国でのiPhone販売台数がアメリカを超える

UBSによる最新の調査によると、2014年最後の四半期においてAppleは、同社史上最大となる6930万台のiPhoneを販売した（提供元Techweb and Phonearena）。中国はそれら台数の三分の一以上を占める。

アメリカの祝日販売が今回の6930万という販売台数に貢献しているのは確かである一方で、中国はそのうちの35%近くを占め、初めてアメリカでの販売台数を超えた。昨年同期では、中国はiPhone販売台数の22%を占めていた。

アメリカの販売台数比率は前年と比べて24%から29%に上昇した。

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四半期売上レポートにおいて初めて、中国でのiPhone販売台数がアメリカを超える

UBSによる最新の調査によると、2014年最後の四半期においてAppleは、同社史上最大となる6930万台のiPhoneを販売した（提供元Techweb and Phonearena）。中国はそれら台数の三分の一以上を占める。

アメリカのクリスマスシーズンの販売が今回の6930万という販売台数に貢献しているのは確かである一方で、中国はそのうちの35%近くを占め、初めてアメリカでの販売台数を超えた。昨年同期では、中国はiPhone販売台数の22%を占めていた。

アメリカの販売台数比率は前年と比べて24%から29%に上昇した。

元の翻訳
Having considered the past dealing with you, it has been decided that your order will be shipped out without canceling it (I understand that you are busy for studies in an university).
Please make a payment for the balance of shipping fee when you are available.

With regard to ◇ which you have inquired of, these were arrived in my hand yesterday (two of three different types in total of six).
There will be reserved for five days, so please notify us if you need more.

As a suggestion, the payment for ◯ can be received as the payment for ◇ that you have not yet paid for, and ◇ cab be despatched this month with ☆. Please let us know how you would like about this case.
Please pay the price of ◯ in February.

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Having considered the past dealing with you, we have decided that we will ship your order without canceling it (I understand that you are busy studying at college).
Please make a payment for the balance of the shipping fee when you can.

With regard to the ◇ you have inquired of, these arrived here yesterday (two of three different types in total of six).
We can have them on hold for five days, so please notify us if you still need them.

We could consider the payment for ◯ as the payment for ◇ that you have not yet paid for, and ◇ cab [word confusion] be despatched [spelling] this month with ☆. Please let us know how you would like about this case.
You can pay for ◯ in February.

元の翻訳
This product has been through a total maintenance by the manufacture. It has then been confirmed that there is no problem with the product's movement/operation.
There is no information with respect to the number of past owners.
The serial number is ◯◯.

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On November 21, we had this product checked by the manufacture [word confusion] for total maintenance to confirm that it works without any problem.
We don't know how many people have owned it previously.
The serial number is ◯◯.

元の翻訳
I unfortunately cannot attend the board meeting today because it begins too late.

Regarding the schedule of board meetings, thank you for sending me it.
Due to the time difference between London and Japan, it is difficult to join a meeting starting at noon in London time. I, therefore, would ask you to consider starting it earlier time. I appreciate for your consideration in advance.

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I unfortunately cannot attend the board meeting today because it begins too late.

Regarding the schedule of the board meetings, thank you for sending me it.
Due to the time difference between London and Japan, it is difficult to join a meeting starting at noon in London time. I, therefore, would ask you to consider starting it earlier time. I appreciate for your consideration in advance.

元の翻訳
Our shipping is only through EMS.
We will not charge additional fee except for the shipping cost.
Customs duties may be imposed.
Please tell us a detail of customs duties in your country.
We, unfortunately, have no authorities to do anything about customs duties.
Your order will be arrived within about five days after shipping.
Please take us into your consideration.

I have made contacted with you many times.
I have emailed you through the one registered in ebay.
I have sent ()
Please send us a receipt of customs duties to the email address.
We will refund as soon as we confirm.

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Our shipping is only through EMS.
We will not charge additional fee except for the shipping cost.
Customs duties may be imposed.
Please tell us a detail of customs duties in your country.
We, unfortunately, have no authorities to do anything about customs duties.
Your order will be arrived within about five days after shipping.
Please take us into your consideration.

I have made contact with you many times.
I have emailed you at an address registered in ebay.
I have sent ()
Please send us a receipt of customs duties to the email address.
We will refund as soon as we confirm.