スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

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How do you do?
My name is . I am a film writer in Japan.
Thank you for announcing a remarkable short movie. I appreciate it.

Those who are in film industry as well as my friends are also excited about your film very much.
If you don' t mind, why don't we introduce this work on Japanese web news such as media Huffington Post Japanese version?

Also I would be happier if I can interview you by Skype?
What do you think about it?

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How do you do?
My name is ○○○ . I am a Videographer in Japan.
Thank you for presenting a remarkable short movie. I appreciate it.

Those who are in video industry as well as my friends are also excited about your video work very much.
If you don' t mind, we would like to introduce this work on Japanese web news such as media Huffington Post Japanese version?

Also I would be happier if I can interview you by Skype?
What do you think about this?

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
The following is the tracking number.
We checked it, and found that the item was delivered.

RR906236137JP
We appreciate your cooperation.

Thank you for your message.
Could you tell us either ASIN or URL of the item?

Thank you for your message.
We are sicerely sorry, but we listed the tracking number by mistake.
We will send the tracking number again to you.
We hope that you understand it.

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Thank you for your message.
The following is the tracking number.
We checked it, and found that the item was delivered.

RR906236137JP
We appreciate your cooperation.

Thank you for your message.
Could you tell us either ASIN or URL of the item?

Thank you for your message.
We are sincerely sorry, but we listed the wrong tracking number by mistake.
We will send the tracking number again to you.
We hope that you understand it.

元の翻訳
On July 1st that falls on Founation Day of Canada, Tronto Tourism Bureay held a reception at Academy Hills in Minato-ku, Tokyo. A large number of those who are involved in MICE such as members of MPI Japan Chapter, which coopearted on special base, meeting planner of the companies and tourist companies participated in it.

The reasons that Tronto is focused on now are that a direct flight is flown from Haneda Airport, it is close to Prince Edward Island that is where "Anne of the Green Gable" was performed, it is a safe, relaxing and friendly city as well as 150th anniversary of the nation's foundation is planned in 2017.

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On July 1st that falls on the Foudation Day of Canada, Toronto Tourism Bureau held a reception at Academy Hills in Minato-ku, Tokyo. A large number of those who are involved in MICE such as members of MPI Japan Chapter, which cooperated on special base, meeting planner of the companies and tourist companies participated in it.

The reasons that Toronto is focused on now are that a direct flight is flown from Haneda Airport, it is close to Prince Edward Island that is where "Anne of the Green Gable" was performed, it is a safe, relaxing and friendly city as well as the 150th anniversary of the nation's foundation is planned in 2017.

元の翻訳
Thank you for using the function of AAA that I had asked long time ago.
I found a point that I was concernd about.
The case in index page should be as folllows.

Also the case in hashtag page should be as follows.

As I am not a native speaker of English, I apologize↵
if I cannot get my message across you well.

My indication itself might be wrong, so please use it as reference.
I corrected it by myself, and it is reporting.

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Thank you for implementing the function of AAA that I had asked long before.
I found two points about which I was concernd.
The case of the index page should be as folllows.

Also the case of the hashtag page should be as follows.

As I am not a native speaker of English, I apologize if I cannot get my message across you well.

My indication itself might be wrong, so please use it as reference.
I corrected them by myself, and I just want to report ny concern.

元の翻訳
We apologize to give you a trouble this time from the bottom of our heart.
Have you checked the refunding we gave to you a few days ago?
We requested you to return the item that we had sent to you by mistake.
For this, we handled you very rudely, and we apologize again.

We know that you are at a loss sufficiently. Please do not return the item, and use it by yourself.

Finally we have a favor to ask you. It is about feedback that you had filled out in Amazon.

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We apologize to give you a trouble this time from the bottom of our heart.
Have you checked the refunding we gave to you a few days ago?
We requested you to return the item that we had sent to you by mistake.
For this, we handled you very rudely, and we apologize again.

We completely understand that you are at a loss. Please do not return the item, and use it by yourself.

Finally we have a favor to ask you. It is about feedback that you had filled out in Amazon.

元の翻訳
First I would like to apologize to you as a representative of our company regarding the problem this time.

We found a cause by detailed information you have provided.

Amazon accepts returning of the pruchased items as you know.

As for watch, Amazon does not sell the returned item with problem but it resells if it has no problem.

Probably this process has a problem. We negotiate Amazon not to sell the returned item no matter under what kind of condition the item is.

We sincerely appreciate your indication.

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First of all, I would like to apologize to you from the bottom of my heart on behalf of our company regarding the problem this time（→the issue).

We were able to identify the cause based on the detailed information you have provided.

As you know, Amazon accepts returns of the purchased items.

As for the watch, Amazon does not sell the returned item with problem, but it resells if it has no problem.

Probably this process has a problem. We will negotiate with Amazon to not to sell the returned item no matter under what kind of condition the item is.

We sincerely appreciate your indication.

元の翻訳
This item has not been sold in Japan yet.

This is a remarkable item that gives the highest safety for both pregnant woman and a baby
in her body.

A couple of days ago my friend wa involved in a traffic accident.
She was pregnant.
Shocked by the accident, the baby in her body was killed since she was not
wearing a seat belt.

If she had used this item, the baby must have not been killed.
She is so disappointed that she still cannot recover herself.

I would like to decrease the number of people who have the same experience as her.

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This item has not been sold in Japan yet.

This is a remarkable item that gives the highest safety for both pregnant woman and baby
in her body.

A couple of days ago my friend was involved in a traffic accident while
she was pregnant.
Shocked by the accident, the baby in her body did not survive since she was not
wearing a seat belt.

If she had used this item, the baby may have survived.
She is so disappointed that she still cannot recover.

I would like to decrease the number of people who have the same experience as her.

元の翻訳
Your item is at thencustoms in San Paulo Airport.
I am sorry that you have to wait.
It takes 2 to 3 days to be deliverd to USA by EMS.
But it takes longer in particular to Brazil.

I don't understand about one item.↵
It was sent by airplane from the airport in japan on June 16th 2014 and↵
it arrives at June 24th 2014. It took 8 days. Is it possible to fly 8 days?
It might take longer time before you receive it. I am sincerely sorry for you.

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Your item appears to be at the customs in Sao Paulo Airport.
I am sorry to have kept you waiting.
It takes 2 to 3 days for the delivery to the USA by EMS.
But it seems that it takes particularly longer time for delivery to Brazil.

There is one point that I don't understand regarding this shipment. Although it was sent by airplane from the airport in Japan on June 16th, 2014, it has taken 8 days, as it was arrived in Brazil on June 24th, 2014. Can an airplane keep flying for 8 days?
It might take longer time before you receive it. I am sincerely sorry about this.

元の翻訳
The day of holding: July 2nd 2014(Wednesday)
Time: Open at 19:30 and start of performance at 20:00
Admission: 1,5000 Yeh by reservation and 1,800 Yen if you pay on the day(pay 1 drink additionally)

Reservation of ticket
http://2-5-d.jp/schedule/20140702/

USTREAM
http://www.ustream.tv/channel/2-5d1

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The day of holding: July 2nd 2014(Wednesday)
Time: Open at 19:30 and start of performance at 20:00
Admission fee: 1,500 yen by reservation and 1,800 Yen if you pay on the day(pay 1 drink additionally)

Reservation of ticket
http://2-5-d.jp/schedule/20140702/

USTREAM
http://www.ustream.tv/channel/2-5d1

元の翻訳
It was found tht laravel framework has been used, and I checked it and solved it by myself.
Other than that, please correct the bug.
Unless the bug is corrected,I cannot open the website.

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As it was found that laravel framework has been used, I checked it and solved it by myself.
Other than that, please fix the bug I have requested the other day.
Unless the bug is fixed, I cannot open the website.

元の翻訳
当国では冷蔵庫の輸入は禁止されていますが、洗濯機はお届けすることができます。↵
↵
LCD TVは、PAL SYSTEMの活用しても問題ありませんか。↵
↵
携帯電話及びコンピューターのサンプルをお手配していただけますか。

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当国では冷蔵庫の輸入は禁止されていますが、洗濯機については後日連絡します。液晶テレビは、PAL SYSTEMの活用しても問題ありませんか。携帯電話及びコンピューターのサンプルをお手配していただけますか。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
We sent the item.
Haven't you received it yet?

We will check it.
If you have not received it, we will refund it.

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Thank you for your message.
We sent the item.
Haven't you received it yet?

We will also check the status at this end.
If you have not received it, we will process the refund for you.

元の翻訳
こんにちわ。

台湾の転送会社へ連絡する際の情報をご提供ください。
前回貴方からいただいたウェブサイトは日本の転送会社の
ウェブサイトであったため、連絡できませんでした。

貴方の出荷先を知りたいのです。
どの書類が出荷に必要ですか。
注文書番号をお持ちですか。

よろしくお願いします。

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こんにちは。

台湾の運送会社の連絡先を教えてださい。
前回ご紹介いただいたウェブサイトは日本の運送会社の
ウェブサイトであり、弊社には日本語を使える者がいないので連絡できません。

貴方の出荷先を知りたいのです。
どの書類が出荷に必要ですか。
注文書番号をお持ちですか。

よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
こんにちわ。

台湾の転送会社へ連絡する際の情報をご提供ください。↵
前回貴方からいただいたウェブサイトは日本の転送会社の↵
ウェブサイトであったため、連絡できませんでした。

貴方の出荷先を知りたいのです。
どの書類が出荷に必要ですか。
注文書番号をお持ちですか。

よろしくお願いします。

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こんにちわ。

台湾の転送会社の連絡先の情報をご提供ください。前回貴方からいただいたウェブサイトは日本の転送会社のウェブサイトであったため、連絡できませんでした。

貴方の出荷先を知りたいのです。
どの書類が出荷に必要ですか。
注文書番号をお持ちですか。

よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
When you send a present from Japan to Italy, you do not need an invoice.
Please inquire to the customs over there.
I will send a file of the invoice for reference.

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When you send a present from Japan to Italy, you do not need an invoice.
Please inquire it to the customs over there.
I will send a file of the invoice for your reference.

元の翻訳
The manual and explanation booklet are written in Japanese.
Returning an item and refunding are subject to policy of Amazon.
If you have a question, please ask us any time.
We always try to provide the items in good quality in our sales, and make the customers feel delighted.

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The manual and user's handbook are written in Japanese.
Item returns and refunds are subject to policy of Amazon.
If you have a question, please ask us any time.
We strive to provide the items in good quality in our sales, and make the customers feel delighted.

元の翻訳
In the 3rd year in elementary school. I encountered programming, and worked on creating software enthusiastically from BASIC, assembly and C.

While I was studying at Technical Vocational School of Fukui, I was involved in development↵
of software in study group and part-time job, and found how satisfied I was that people used the works that I had develped. After graduating from the school, I considered starting my company by working as a freelance programmer.

After starting 2 companies, I established the company jig.jp that I work for now. I developed↵
the download style full browser that was developed for the first time in the world, which enabled people to see the site for personal computer for cellular phone where people saw only mobile site.

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When I was a third grader, I encountered programming, and worked on creating software enthusiastically from BASIC, assembly and C.

While I was studying at the Fukui National College of Technology, I was involved in the development of software in the study group and part-time job, and found how satisfied I was that people used the works that I had developed. After graduating from the school, I considered starting my company by working as a freelance programmer.

After starting 2 companies, I established my current company, jig.jp. I developed the world's first download-style full browser, which enabled people to see the site for personal computer on cellular phone where people saw only mobile site.