スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I will ask you the question again. On which day in this month are you going to make a payment?
If you do not reply me, I will close this case tomorrow.
In that case, I hate to say, but it will be listed as "unpaid" at eBay.
I appreciate your understanding.

修正後
I will ask you the question again. On which day in this month are you going to make a payment?
If you do not reply to me, I will close this case tomorrow.
In that case, I hate to say, but it will be listed as "unpaid" on eBay.
I appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
You have not updated the script of ABC as I expected.
I am sure that there are a number of bugs at this script.

I found that the contents of the following page is different.
It must be due to the bug.

修正後
You have not updated the script of ABC as I expected.
I am sure that there are a number of bugs in this script.

I found that the content of the following page is different.
It must be due to the bug.

元の翻訳
If I do business by accepting the price you request, I will be in deficit.
Then let me propose an idea.
Could you purchase on our homepage?
As we cannot publicize the homepage by e-mail of eBay subject to our regulation, if you bid the pick
I sell, we can share the e-mail address. Then we can do the business directly. Of course, I refund the price of the pick.
It causes an extra work to you. However, if you follow the above, we do not need the fee, and I can sell at the price you request (I can offer the price close to your request one).
I appreciate that you consider it.

修正後
If I do business by accepting the price you request, I will be in deficit.
Then let me propose an idea.
Could you purchase via our homepage?
We cannot publicize our homepage via our eBay email according to eBay rules,. But if you bid on the pick
I sell, we can share our email addresses. Then we can do business directly. Of course, I will refund you for the price of the pick.
I apologize for the inconvenience, but if we do it this way no fees will be needed, and I will be able to sell at the price you request (I can offer a price close to your requested one).
Thank you for your consideration.

元の翻訳
釣り用のディストロイヤーフェース3F5-76xの見積もりをありがとうございました。↵
エヴォルジオンF7ー76tiホワイトパイソンをも購入したいのですが、↵
送料の見積もりは２本の釣り棒ですか。それとも１本のみですか。他の釣り棒の見積もりもお願いします。

修正後
釣り用のディストロイヤーフェーズ3F5-76xの見積もりをありがとうございました。エヴォルジオンF7ー76tiホワイトパイソン竿も購入したいのですが、送料の見積もりは２本の釣り竿ですか。それとも１本のみですか。他の釣り竿の見積もりもお願いします。

元の翻訳
こんにちは。レンズにカビが生えているそうですので、そのレンズの写真を数枚お送りいただけませんか。そして、説明を加え、詳細をもご教示ください。
イタリアへも発送していただけますか。関税で問題が発生しそうですか。
宜しくお願いします。

修正後
こんにちは。レンズにカビが生えているということでしたら、そのレンズの写真を数枚お送りいただけませんか。そして、説明を加え、詳細をもご教示ください。
イタリアへも発送していただけますか。関税で問題が発生しそうですか。
宜しくお願いします。

元の翻訳
We would like to deliver the items of F from Japan.
May we deliver them to your company without using a
forwarding company at A?
Of course, we will pay the duties.

If you have some points we have to be careful about
when we deliver them, please let us know.
For example, do you have the following restrictions?
The size is 50x60x50, and even one of them is
allowed to exceed it.
The weight must be less than 30 kilograms.
If it is over 15 kilograms, we must list "overweight"
at the top and sides of the boxes.
The torn boxes are not allowed.
The boxes must not be packed by the bands.
The wet boxes are not allowed.
The cash on divery is not allowed.
The renovated boxes are not allowed.

修正後
We would like to deliver the items of F from Japan.
May we deliver them to your company without using a
forwarding company at A?
Of course, we will pay the duties.

If you have some points we have to be careful about
when we deliver them, please let us know.
For example, do you have the following restrictions?
The size is 50x60x50, and even one of them is not
allowed to exceed it.
The weight must be less than 30 kilograms.
If it is over 15 kilograms, we must list "overweight"
at the top and sides of the boxes.
The torn boxes are not allowed.
The boxes must not be packed by the bands.
The wet boxes are not allowed.
The cash on delivery is not allowed.
The renovated boxes are not allowed.

元の翻訳
If 1,600 US dollars is calculated as the amount to be filed at the customs, it might be a mistake made by the office at the customs when they checked or calculated. We attach the filing form of the customs and the invoice for reference.
The same documents must have been printed out and attached at the item.
Would you please check them?
Thank you for your cooperation.

修正後
If 1,600 US dollars is calculated as the amount to be filed at customs, it might be a mistake made by the office at customs when they checked or calculated. We have attached the customs filing form and the invoice for reference.
The same documents should have been printed out and attached to the item.
Would you please check them?
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Good day!
Regarding ZEISS IKON SW that you made an inquiry, we checked it,
and found that "73,000 Japanese Yen" was listed in the filing form
of the customs and an invoice.
it is calculated to be 613 US dollars by today's exchange rate.
By considering the responsiblity of a buyer, we set the filing
amount that is a little lower than the bidding price.
We cannot make it lower extremely because it will be the maximum in guaranteeing if an accident occurs during its transportation.
For this reason, we decided this amount.
We are sure that 1,600 US dollars is not listed.

修正後
Good day!
Regarding ZEISS IKON SW that you made an inquiry, we checked it,
and found that "73,000 Japanese Yen" was listed in the filing form
of the customs and an invoice.
it is calculated to be 613 US dollars by today's exchange rate.
By considering the burden of a buyer, we set the filing
amount that is a little lower than the bidding price.
We cannot make it lower extremely because it will be the maximum in guaranteeing if an accident occurs during its transportation.
For this reason, we decided this amount.
We are sure that 1,600 US dollars is not listed.

元の翻訳
貴方へ送付する荷物に「割れ物注意」と明記し、２重に梱包しました。これでよかったですか。
発送方法についてはご連絡いただいておりません。
付保された優先によるシステム９３．７０ドルプラス保険料１３ドルの合計１０６．７０ドルの場合、２，３日でお届け可能です。

スタンダード便の場合、送料６８．２６ドルプラス保険料が１３ドル、合計８１．２６ドルとなり１週間ほどでお届けします。イーベイは５４．３０ドルを提示しましたが、これは、スタンダード便より２６．９６ドル安価です。
スタンダード便として送付する際、この金額をお支払いいただけますか。

修正後
貴方へ送付する荷物に「割れ物注意」と明記し、２重に梱包しました。これでよかったですか。
ご希望の発送方法についてはご連絡いただいておりません。
保険付きプライオリティ送料９３．７０ドルプラス保険料１３ドル、合計１０６．７０ドルの場合、２，３日でお届け可能です。

スタンダード便の場合、送料６８．２６ドルプラス保険料１３ドル、合計８１．２６ドルとなり１週間ほどでお届けします。イーベイは５４．３０ドルを提示しましたが、これは、スタンダード便より２６．９６ドル安価です。
スタンダード便として送付する際、この金額をお支払いいただけますか。

元の翻訳
拝啓
フランクフルトの税関において荷物が通関、現在、拙宅近くの税関に
保管されております。
直接私が出向き、問題を解決するのが得策なのでしょう。
数日以内に進展をお知らせします。よろしく。
レゾルーションセンターでも本件の詳細を確認できます。
以下をご留意ください。
ペイパルにより支払いを行う場合、イーベイ返金保証の枠内において
下される決定はペイパルの購入者保護方針に依拠しています。

修正後
拝啓
フランクフルトの税関において荷物が通関、現在、拙宅近くの税関に
保管されております。
直接私が出向き、問題を解決するのが得策なのでしょう。
数日以内に進展をお知らせします。よろしく。
レゾルーションセンターでも本件の詳細を確認できます。
以下をご留意ください。
「ペイパルにより支払いを行う場合のイーベイ返金保証」の枠内において
下される決定は、ペイパルの購入者保護方針に依拠しています。

元の翻訳
Recently you have "Like" on the Facebook more and more rapidly.
Has something special happened to you?
I found that 00 was sold out on the website, and you are going to receive it at the end of February.
Why did it happen?
You do not receive the item even if I order now?
May I have an origina data of a moving picture of the KIckstar?
I am going to use it by correcting the logo of 00.
If you have a new plan you are going to develop this year, would please let me know?

Regarding the contract, as I would like to add some, may I send a topic of the additional sentences to you?

修正後
Recently you have "Like" on the Facebook more and more rapidly.
Has something special happened to you?
I found that 00 was sold out on the website, and you are going to receive it at the end of February.
Why did it happen?
You do not receive the item even if I order now?
May I have an origina data of a moving picture of the KIckstar?
I am going to use it by correcting the logo of 00.
If you have a new plan you are going to develop this year, would please let me know?

Regarding the contract, as I would like you to add some, may I send additional sentences to you?

元の翻訳
I hate to say, but I do not cancel it.
Although I informed you that I was going to cancel, I place an order.
As for the transportation, I do not mind if you send it by air or sea.
Would you please send it at low cost?
After finally decide which one you use, please let me know.

The attached document is the parts we are receiving.
May I ask you to check it?
If you charge, I will prepare for making a payment.

I would like to have all by "Regular."
I attach the corrected PO.
Would you also change 46L to 46R?

修正後
I am sorry but I do not cancel it.
Although I informed you that I was going to cancel, I would like to place an order instead.
As for the transportation, I do not mind if you send it by air or by ship.
Would you please send it at low cost?
After you finally decide which way you use, please let me know.

The attached document is the list of parts we have received.
May I ask you to check it?
If you send me a bill, I will prepare for making a payment.

I would like to have all in "Regular."
I attach the corrected PO.
Would you also change 46L to 46R?