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Could you accept my proposal of exclusive distributorship in Japan?

2. Could you supply the JA’s tools lower than current wholesale price?
I would like to have around 30% of discount from the current wholesale price because the prices of them are about 50% higher than that of those very cheap American made.
I appreciate if you could consider it. I would like to purchase them at lower price as much as possible to give them price competiveness for familiarizing them in Japan.

3. Could you send me digital images of tools published on the catalogue?
I would like to used them on the internet shop in Japan.

That all I would like to request you to take them in consideration.

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Could you accept my proposal of exclusive distributorship in Japan?

2. Could you supply the JA products lower than current wholesale price?
I would like to have around 30% of discount from the current wholesale price because the prices of them are about 50% higher than that of those very cheap American made.
I appreciate if you could consider it. I would like to purchase them at lower price as much as possible to give them price competiveness for familiarizing them in Japan.

3. Could you send me the digital images of the products published on the catalogue?
I would like to used them on the internet shop in Japan.

That is all I would like you to take them in consideration.

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I am sorry for the sudden email.
The below error is displayed when accessing to the URL of admin page.
In addition, it cannot log in. How shall it be resolved?
Also, the width of black portion in the top page seems rather wide. Is it an error?

Furthermore, could you give me PSD data of top page. I would like to change the letters of images to Japanese.

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I am sorry for the sudden email.
The below error is displayed when accessing to the URL of admin page.
In addition, it cannot log in either. How shall it be resolved?
Also, the width of black portion in the top page seems rather wide. Is it an error?

Furthermore, could you give me PSD data of top page. I would like to change the character of images to Japanese.

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As a man with Japanese temperament, I would like to have the item of which packing is neatly done even if it is intended for the operation. The wrapping method of your item is somewhat looked like the junk which I cannot accept in any way. In addition, the cable is different from the original one and in poor quality. I do not want to change my mind to demand to you for issuance of refund including the shipping charge.

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As a man with Japanese temperament, I would like to have the item of which packing is neatly done even if it works fine. The packinging method of your item looks nothing but a junk, which I cannot accept in any way. In addition, the cable is different from the original one and in poor quality. I shall not change my mind requesting you for a full refund including the shipping charge.

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他の選択肢は貴店が2,200ドルで出品していた時計のバンドの長さを調べることかもしれません。他の時計の20cmのバンドと入れ替えることが出来れば、腕時計をすることができるので購入したいです。この件に関する貴店のお考えを教えてください。

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他の選択肢は貴店が2,200ドルで出品（？）していた時計のバンドの長さを調べることかもしれません。他の時計の20cmのバンドと入れ替えることが出来れば、腕時計として手につけられるので購入したいです。この件に関する貴店のお考えを教えてください。

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Please be advised that the items shown in the picture may be a bit different from the actual items. The reason is that the items shown in the picture show similar type of items. We cannot post each picture of all items due to many varieties of items.
For more details, please visit and confirm at the website of ○△. Every items will be shipped from Japan. We obtain each and every item from their authentic dealers and they are all brand new without any copied items. So, please don't worry about the authenticity.

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Please be advised that the items shown in the picture may be a bit different from the actual items. The reason is that the items shown in the picture show similar type of items. We cannot post each picture of all items due to many varieties of items.
For more details, please visit and confirm at the website of ○△. Every items will be shipped from Japan. We obtain each and every item from their authorized dealers and they are all brand new without any copied items. So, please don't worry about the authenticity.

元の翻訳
Please be advised that the items shown in the picture may be a bit different from the actual items. The reason is that the items shown in the picture show similar type of items. We cannot post each picture of all items due to many varieties of items.
For more details, please visit and confirm at the website of ○△. Every items will be shipped from Japan. We obtain each and every item from their authentic dealers and they are all brand new without any copied items. So, please don't worry about the authenticity.

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Please be advised that the items shown in the picture may be a bit different from the actual items. The reason is, though we post those photos of similar types, there are way too many kinds for us to post every single one of them.
For more details, please visit and confirm at ○△ website. Every item will be shipped from Japan. We obtain each and every item from their authentic dealers and they are all brand new, unused, and no counterfeits. So, please be assured.

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I am grad to hear that you seem doing fine. I am also doing fine. You must be able to meet your baby, aren't you? Take it easy as actually you are going to get tired easily and continue having back ache and hard day in and day out in the final stage of delivery.
I really respect you still working.
Have Jason moved out without any trouble? Great, you two are doing very good. Just spend yourself feeling comfortable until the delivery. I really hope that I could speak English by the day I would actually meet you. Now, I request the Conyac for the translation.

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I am grad to hear that you seem doing fine. I am also doing fine. You must be able to meet your baby, aren't you? Take it easy as actually you are going to get tired easily and continue having back ache and hard day in and day out in the final stage of delivery.
I really respect you still working.
Have Jason moved without any trouble? Great, you two are doing very good. Just spend yourself feeling comfortable until the delivery. I really hope that I could speak English by the day I would actually meet you. Now, I request the Conyac for the translation.

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I purchased two pieces of Blue-ray disk A, three pieces of Blue-ray disk B, and four pieces of Blue-ray disk C.
I have received all four pieces of C, but I have only received one each of A and B.
When will you ship the remaining one piece of A and two pieces of B?
Thank you for your cooperation.

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I purchased two Blue-ray disks of A, three of B, and four of C through Amazon.com the other day.
I have received all four of C, but only each of A and B.
When will you ship the remainder?
Thank you for your cooperation.

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# For buyer has experience purchasing items at eBay and desire to purchase additional items

I have had not communications before, but I am writing to you because I won your auction at eBay this time (before).
I would like to purchase additional items from you, but would you be possible to give me a discount?
I think if we have direct deal without through eBay, you would not need to be charged the eBay’s commission and I would purchase items cheaper without their commission.
I would appreciate if you could take consideration on this matter.↵

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# When a buyer with prior purchase experiences wishes to place an additional order

Nice to meet you. I am an import distributor in Japan.↵
I won your auction at eBay this time (before).
As I would like to purchase additional items from you, would you give me a discount?
If we could make a deal without going through eBay, you would not need to pay for the eBay’s handling fee, and I would purchase items cheaper that way.
I would appreciate if you could take this matter into your consideration.

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沢山のレンズを持っていて、多分あなたが興味を持つのでないかと思いメールしています。もし興味があるのであれば何処に住んでいようが価格交渉をしましょう。私はカリフォルニアに住んでいます。

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沢山のレンズを持っているので、多分あなたが興味をお持ちでないかと思いメールしています。もしご興味があるのであればあなたのいらっしゃるところまでは伺えませんが価格交渉をしましょう。私はカリフォルニアに住んでいます。

元の翻訳
We are truly sorry for taking up your time.
Missing your home address number was the mistake of our staff in charge of shipping.
We will strengthen the checking system to prevent the same mistake from recurring.

We really appreciate your information about it and taking your precious time for picking up the item.
Thank you very much.

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We are truly sorry for taking up your time.
Missing your home address number was the mistake of our shipping staff.
We will strengthen the checking system to prevent the same mistake from recurring.

We really appreciate your information about it and taking your precious time for picking up the item.
Thank you very much.

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Hello,

I have had no communication with you before, but I am writing to you because we are very much interested in your items.

We are thinking of purchasing these items in a large volume.
Would you please have a business with us on a bulk order basis?

We will make the payment either through the PayPal or a credit card.
The shipping destination will be Florida.

I really look forward to your response.

I am grateful if you could reply to my Skype address.

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Hello,

I have had no communication with you before, but I am writing to you because we are very much interested in your items.

We are thinking of purchasing these items in a large volume.
Would you please consider giving us a bulk discount?

We will make the payment either through the PayPal or a credit card.
The shipping destination will be Florida.

I really look forward to your response.

I am grateful if you could reply to my Skype address.

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Thank you for your message.
The item with the following tracking number, when we checked, has already arrived, so please confirm it.

Tracking number: RR906236137JP

Thank you for your message.
Would you give me either ASIN or URL of the item?

Thank you for your message.
I am afraid to inform you that we have stated the wrong tracking number.
Please make sure for not use the previously told one as we inform you the correct tracking number.

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Thank you for your message.
The item with the following tracking number, when we checked, has already arrived, so please confirm it.

Tracking number: RR906236137JP

Thank you for your message.
Would you give me either ASIN or URL of the item?

Thank you for your message.
I am afraid to inform you that we have stated the wrong tracking number.
Please make sure not use the number previously provided to you as we will inform you the correct tracking number.

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質問）カップ一杯のコーヒーを入れた後のCanadianoをどのように掃除するのですか。
回答）入れた後のコーヒーの粉は堆肥として使え、また使用したCanadianはぬるま湯で洗ってください。Canadianoを掃除するときには食器用洗剤などを使う必要は本当にありません。ぬるま湯で洗うだけでCanadianoのひいたコーヒー粉を入れる部分は確実にきれいになります。もし必要と思う場合は、食器用潜在を使用してください。時間がたてば、お客様の好きなコーヒーを毎回入れることで、コーヒー豆に含まれる天然の油がCanadianoに吸収され保持されます。

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質問）カップ一杯のコーヒーを入れた後のCanadianoをどのようにクリーニングするのですか。
回答）入れた後のコーヒーの粉は堆肥として使え、また使用したCanadianはぬるま湯で洗ってください。Canadianoを掃除するときには食器用洗剤などを使う必要は本当にありません。ぬるま湯で洗うだけでCanadianoのひいたコーヒー粉を入れる部分は確実にきれいになります。もし必要と思う場合は、食器用洗剤を使用してください。時間がたてば、お客様の好きなコーヒーを毎回入れることで、コーヒー豆に含まれる天然の油がCanadianoに吸収され保持されます。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
We have already removed the Orange Amp related items from our listings, but if it is still remaining in our listings, we are sorry for taking up your time bu would you inform us its ASIN or URL?
When you would inform us, we will remove it immediately.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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Thank you for your message.
We have already removed the Orange Amp related items from our listings, but if it is still remaining in our listings, we are sorry for taking up your time but would you inform us its ASIN or URL?
When you would inform us, we will remove it immediately.
Thank you for your cooperation.