翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

先日amazon.comで「A」というブレーレイディスクを２つ、「B」というブルーレイディクスを３つ、「C」というブルーレイディスクを４つ購入しました。
しかし、「C」は４つ届きましたが、「A」、「B」は１つづつしか届いていません。
残りはいつになるでしょうか？
よろしくお願いします。

英語

I purchased two pieces of Blue-ray disk A, three pieces of Blue-ray disk B, and four pieces of Blue-ray disk C.
I have received all four pieces of C, but I have only received one each of A and B.
When will you ship the remaining one piece of A and two pieces of B?
Thank you for your cooperation.

レビュー ( 2 )

tearzはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/07/14 16:37:07

元の翻訳
I purchased two pieces of Blue-ray disk A, three pieces of Blue-ray disk B, and four pieces of Blue-ray disk C.
I have received all four pieces of C, but I have only received one each of A and B.
When will you ship the remaining one piece of A and two pieces of B?
Thank you for your cooperation.

修正後
I purchased two Blue-ray disks of A, three of B, and four of C through Amazon.com the other day.
I have received all four of C, but only each of A and B.
When will you ship the remainder?
Thank you for your cooperation.

なるべく反復する表現はシンプルにまとめるといいと思います。

chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/07/15 15:44:32

GJ