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元の翻訳
USPSから今戻ってきたところですが、商品はUSPSが保険を掛けたものではなく、システムに記録されていないので、USPSは貴販売店の依頼に応じて事件報告を申請できないと言っていました。これで郵便局に行ったのは3回目です。（これでこの件に関する5回目のメッセージです。大変申し訳ありませんが、この状態を受け入れることはできません。気販売店の依頼を全てこなそうと誠実に対応してきましたが、これ以上仕事の時間を取るわけにはいきません。貴販売店から次にとる明確な指示を早急にもらえない場合は、壊れた中古のレコードを添付しeBayとPayPalにどうすればよいのかの手伝いを依頼します。
よろしくお願いします。

修正後
USPSから今戻ってきたところですが、商品はUSPSが保険を掛けたものではなく、システムに記録されていないので、USPSは貴販売店の依頼に応じて事件報告を申請できないと言っていました。これで郵便局に行ったのは3回目です。（これでこの件に関する5回目のメッセージです。大変申し訳ありませんが、この状態を受け入れることはできません。貴販売店の依頼を全てこなそうと誠実に対応してきましたが、これ以上仕事の時間を取るわけにはいきません。貴販売店から次にとる明確な指示を早急にもらえない場合は、壊れた中古のレコードを添付しeBayとPayPalにどうすればよいのかの手伝いを依頼します。
よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
サイン済みの書類を提供していただきありがとうございます。当社はこの書類を持ってｊ申請の審査を先に進めるつもりです。さらに追加の質問などがある場合は遠慮なく連絡してください。

当社ではお客様の申請の審査をしましたが承認はまだ下りていません。お客様の申請が承認される前に、お客様が情報を提供してくれたクレジットカードの住所が米国外の住所であるため全てのお客様の支払いは銀行振り込みでなければならないことをお知らせいたします。銀行振り込み1回毎に20ドルの取引手数料が適用されます。お客様がこれらの条件に同意される場合は回答を返信してください。お客様の（同意する旨の）回答を受け取り次第、販売者ログイン名、パスワード、及び高解像度の写真をメールで送付いたします。

修正後
サイン済みの書類を提出していただきありがとうございます。当社は申請手続きを進めます。さらに追加の質問などがある場合は遠慮なく連絡してください。

当社ではお客様の申請の審査をしましたが承認はまだ下りていません。お客様の申請が承認される前に、お客様が情報を提供してくれたクレジットカードの住所が米国外の住所であるため全てのお客様の支払いは銀行振り込みでなければならないことをお知らせいたします。銀行振り込み1回毎に20ドルの取引手数料が適用されます。お客様がこれらの条件に同意される場合は回答を返信してください。お客様の（同意する旨の）回答を受け取り次第、販売者ログイン名、パスワード、及び高解像度の写真をメールで送付いたします。

元の翻訳
Hello,
I purchased the item at Amazon the other day.
Althoug there is no problem in operation wise, there were no warranty card and the manual attached.
Would you send them to me?
Address is in Japan.

In addition, how long will be the warranty period?

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Hello,
I purchased the item at Amazon the other day.
Althoug there is no problem in operation wise, the warranty certificate and the instruction manual were not attached.
Would you send them to me?
Address is in Japan.

In addition, how long will be the warranty period?

元の翻訳
Hello,
I am looking for a Bolt 0829 belt.
As I would like to have a stainless steel belt, I am looking for compatible one with Bolt 0829. Which model of belt is compatible with it?

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Hello,
I am looking for a belt for Bolt 0829.
As I would like to have a stainless steel belt, I am looking for the one compatible with Bolt 0829. Which model number of the belt is compatible with it?

元の翻訳
I have started blogging since April in the last year and now, I can congratulate together with many other people. Thank you for "comments" and "like". Thank you for those who gave me comments translated in Japanese as I am a Japanese. Because I am not good at English, I cannot express my mind in a good way, but I am very pleased that you have been so friendly to me.

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I started blogging in April last year and now, I can congratulate [word choice] together with many people. Thank you for "comments" and "likes". Thank you to those of you who give me comments and translate them into Japanese as I am a Japanese. Because I am not good at English, I cannot express my mind in a good way [awkward], but I am very pleased that you have been so friendly to me.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。おめでとうございます。eBayからインボイスを受け取りましたか。国際販売をするときにはeBayのグローバル シッピング プログラムが出荷を取り扱います。支払いをする確認をしてください。ボーナス ギフトを送ります。

修正後
こんにちは。おめでとうございます。eBayから請求書をお受け取りになりましたか。弊社は海外でも販売しており、eBayの国際配送プログラムが出荷を取り扱います。お支払いがきちんとされていることを御確認ください。ボーナスギフトをお送りします！

元の翻訳
I have received the ●●.
Thank you very much.

Please send the item to this shipping address.

Let me ask some questions.
· Does the value indicated on invoice include the shipping fee?
· Where shall I transfer the payment?
· After shipping the item, would you give me the tracking number?
· Can I purchase easily by just log in from next time?

I am sorry for taking up your time, but I look forward to hearing from you.

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I have received the ●●.
Thank you very much.

Please send the item to the below shipping address.

Let me ask you some questions:
· Does the value indicated on the invoice include the shipping fee?
· Where shall I transfer the payment?
· After shipping the item, would you give me the tracking number?
· Can I purchase easily by just logging in from next time?

I am sorry for taking up your time, but I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
貴販売店はどのような出荷方法でこの商品を出荷するのか確定していただけませんか。
郵便サービスでの出荷が最善です。また、また以前に貴販売店に注文しようとしましたが、後になって注文が完了していないと貴販売店から言われましたので、この商品がハワイの当社に出荷される事を確認できれば幸いです。

よろしくお願いします。

修正後
貴販売店はどのような出荷方法でこの商品を出荷するのか確定していただけませんか。
郵便サービスでの出荷が最善です。また、また以前に貴販売店に注文しようとしましたが、後になって注文が完了できなかったと貴販売店から言われましたので、この商品がハワイの当社に出荷される事を確認できれば幸いです。

よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
こんにちは。支払をする前に三脚のブランドとモデルを教えてくれませんか。

こんにちは。一つ質問ですが、三脚の正確なモデルを教えてくれませんか。
2日以内に支払います。PayPal口座が使用できるようになるのを待っています。

修正後
こんにちは。支払いをする前に三脚のブランドとモデル名を教えてくれませんか。

こんにちは。一つ質問ですが、三脚の正確なモデル名を教えてくれませんか。
2日以内に支払います。PayPal口座が使用できるようになるのを待っています。

元の翻訳
With regard to the rose bouquet, the growing speed to roses are delayed due to the weather condition now.
We are afraid to inform you that we would like to request you to wait for around two weeks to be grown up the roses.
We will get back to you when we can determine the expected date of delivery. So, please have patience.

修正後
With regard to the rose bouquet (50 roses), the growing speed to roses are delayed [ungrammatical, awkward] due to the weather condition now.
We are afraid to inform you that we would like to request you to wait for around two weeks to be grown up the roses [convoluted, unreadable].
We will get back to you when we can determine the expected date of delivery [excellent, sounds natural]. So, please have patience.

元の翻訳
With regard to the rose bouquet, the growing speed to roses are delayed due to the weather condition now.
We are afraid to inform you that we would like to request you to wait for around two weeks to be grown up the roses.
We will get back to you when we can determine the expected date of delivery. So, please have patience.

修正後
With regard to the rose bouquet, the growing speed to roses are delayed due to the weather condition now.
We are afraid to inform you that we would like you to wait for about two weeks till they grow.
We will get back to you once the expected date of delivery is fixed. We appreciate your patience.

元の翻訳
• Photos of your company history
• Photos of gift wrapping
• List of website for online sales
• Price list
• Inventory status until next year (items to be production cancelled)

Please pack the following items together when you ship packages to us.
• Sample for variety of fabrics (even though defective fabric but we can see texture and patterns)
• 50 copies each of catalog published with product for this season and Jacadi catalog
(Not in Japanese but in English your company is using)

In addition, we have several questions;

• If your products are published in magazine, please give us photos used by that magazine.

修正後
• Photos of your company history
• Photos of gift wrapping
• List of website for online sales
• Price list
• Inventory status until next year (items to be discontinued)

Please pack the following items together when you ship packages to us.
• Samples for a variety of fabrics (even defective fabrics as long as we can see texture and patterns)
• 50 copies each of the catalog published with products for this season and Jacadi catalog
(Not in Japanese but the English catalog your company is using)

In addition, we have several questions;

• If your products have been published in magazines, please send us the photos of these magazines.

元の翻訳
I also would like to order the bearing mount and screw of A as I requested previous email.
The used one is all right for me as you suggested.
There is no problem if it is the returned parts used for A.
Please give me at lower price as much as possible and indicate it on the invoice.

Have you obtain B?
If it is possible, I would like to request you to ship them together with items I ordered this time.

修正後
I also would like to order the bearing mount and screw of A as I requested in our previous email.
The used one you have recommended is all right for me.
There is no problem if they are the returned parts used for A.
Please give me your best quote as much as possible and show me on the invoice.

Have you obtained B?
If it is possible, I would like to request you to ship them together with the items I ordered this time.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for placing your order.

This is the authentic item manufactured by Casio in Japan.

We have shipped the item today by EMS of Japan Post with the tracking number ●●●.

We expect that it will be delivered to your address in four days as a guide

Our pre-shipping inspection finds no particular problem, but we will be grateful if you can contact us when you will find any malfunction.

In addition, if you also find any defect, please feel free to contact us.

修正後
Thank you very much for placing your order.

This is the authentic item manufactured by Casio in Japan.

We will shipped the item today by EMS of Japan Post with the tracking number ●●●.

We expect that it will be delivered to your address in four days or so.

Our pre-shipping inspection finds no particular problem, but we would be grateful if you could contact us when you find any malfunction.

In addition, if you also find any defect, please feel free to contact us.

元の翻訳
With regard to GTX7803GB for MAC PRO I purchased from you, When I run an application after installing the OS 10.9.5 and the latest drivers, it shows "No CUDA". This is totally different from the statement in the specification. I did not expect it was such incomplete software. You must issue a full refund for me including the shipping charge.

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With regard to GTX7803GB for MAC PRO I purchased from you, when I run CUDA-Z application after installing the OS 10.9.5 and the latest drivers, it shows "No CUDA". This is totally different from the statement in the specification. I did not expect it was such an incomplete software. You must issue a full refund to me including the shipping charge.

元の翻訳
Although I paid the amount at $567.55, why the amount of refund was $492.99?
(I accepted your offer of the refund at $492.00 because I thought it was not necessary to return the item. I noticed it was necessary to return the item after accepting your offer for the refund.)
If it is necessary to return the item, should you pay back the amount at $567.55 I paid?
* I do understand that buyers are responsible for the return shipping charge under the eBay rule, but it is not a business practice that I absorb the return shipping charge because of seller’s negligence.
I am also a seller and I issue a full refund including the shipping charge if there is a problem about items.

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Although I paid the amount at $567.55, why the amount of refund was $492.00?
(I accepted your offer of the refund at $492.00 because I thought it was not necessary to return the item. I noticed it was necessary to return the item after accepting your offer for the refund.)
If it is necessary to return the item, should you pay back the amount at $567.55 I paid?
* I do understand that buyers are responsible for the return shipping charge under the eBay rule, but it is not a business practice that I absorb the return shipping charge because of seller’s negligence.
I am also a seller and I would issue a full refund including the shipping charge if there is a problem about items.

元の翻訳
I understood what you wanted me to do.
To make sure, I am going to ship the item as registered package, but the shipping address was not PayPal registered address, so it is a change that the package may not be delivered to you; therefore, please note the followings;
• Our response may be delayed (because the package will be returned to Japan)
• If in that case, we may issue a refund to solve an issue.
If you could accept the above conditions, we can have business with you.


I feel very sad because unfortunately, the thing went wrong.
We have taken this response because we may be charged by eBay if the payment due date was passed.
We are sorry about it, but thank you for your understanding.


Please wait a while as we are going to check it.

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I understood what you wanted me to do.
To make sure, I am going to ship the item as a registered package, but the shipping address was not PayPal registered address, so there is a chance that the package may not be delivered to you; therefore, please note the followings;
• Our response may be delayed (because the package will be returned to Japan)
• If in that case, we may issue a refund to solve an issue.
If you could accept the above conditions, we can have business with you.


I feel very sad because unfortunately, the thing went wrong.
We have taken this response because we may be charged by eBay if the payment due date is passed.
We are sorry about it, but thank you for your understanding.


Please wait a while as we are going to check it.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。デオナチュレ ソフトストーンを購入しましたが、突然私の送付先住所が完全でないことに気がつきました。私の完全な送付住所は次の通りです。
222 Timber Hollow Court Apt #333, Chapel Hill, NC 99999

私に対する苦情申立てを取り下げて取下げていただくことが可能かどうかお伺いしたかったのです。あなたにどのような問題もかける意思は有りませんでした。申し訳ありません。
よろしくお願いします。

こんにちは。商品の期限切れが何時であるのか教えていただけませんか。また、小包に贈呈品と記載していただけませんか。有難うございます。良い日をお過ごしください。
よろしくお願いします。

修正後
こんにちは。デオナチュレ ソフトストーンを購入しましたが、突然私の送付先住所に不備がありました。正しい送付住所は次の通りです。
222 Timber Hollow Court Apt #333, Chapel Hill, NC 99999

今回の件については解決済みとおもわれるので、私に対する苦情申立てを取り下げて取下げていただくことが可能かどうかお伺いしたかったのです。あなたにこのようなご迷惑をかけるつもりは一切有りませんでした。申し訳ございません。
よろしくお願いします。

こんにちは。商品の期限切れの日時がいつになるのか教えていただけませんか。また、小包に贈呈品と記載していただけませんか。有難うございます。良い日をお過ごしください。
よろしくお願いします。