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元の翻訳
As I received the item I won in the bid the other day, I have tested its operation.
I found out one problem.
The "TREBLE" at the right channel is not working.
I though it might be caused by the loose wiper contact and rotated the volume back and forth many time, but it did not help anything.
I am very disappointed as I submitted the successful bit because I heard it was tested and its operation was confirmed.
The item cannot be used without repair.
Could you issue a partial refund as the repair expenses?
I look forward to hearing from you.

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As I received the item I won in the bid the other day, I have tested its operation.
I found out one problem.
The "TREBLE" at the right channel is not working.
I though it might be caused by the loose wiper contact and rotated the volume back and forth many times, but it did not help anything.
I am very disappointed as I submitted the successful bit because I heard it was tested and its operation was confirmed.
The item cannot be used without repair.
Could you issue a partial refund as the repair expenses?
I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
I can make payment since I have US address registered to the PayPal.
As I will inform you the shipping address after making the payment, could you change the shipping destination to Japan but not in US?

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I can make payment since I have US address registered with PayPal.
As I will inform you the shipping address after making the payment, could you change the shipping destination from the US to Japan?↵

元の翻訳
Please fill out necessary information and send to us. Our information center will contact you in return.
Please note that we may not be able to accept your reservation if your preferable date is within two weeks.
Please be assured as the reservation form is encrypted even though this form is shown in the frame and the browser is not shown with a key mark to indicate SSL (encryption).
The other examination(s) as an option is added if applicants desired to do so. (Please note that applicants are responsible for examination fee(s) including optional examination(s)

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Please fill out necessary information and send it to us. Our information center will contact you in return.
Please note that we may not be able to accept your reservation if your preferable date is within two weeks.
Please be assured as the reservation form is encrypted even though this form is shown in the frame and the browser is not shown with a key mark to indicate SSL (encryption).
The other examination(s) as an option is added if applicants desired to do so. (Please note that applicants are responsible for examination fee(s) including optional examination(s)

元の翻訳
· There appear an item subjected, delete the listing using "Delete product and listing" under "Action"

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· After the applicable item shows, delete the listing at "Delete product and listing" under "Action".

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Thank you for support the other day. I could not understand the details of support a bit, but it might be caused by me.
I have one request.
When the music name is long, the layout of AAA is deformed, so I would like to request you to correct it.
I thought I could correct it using CSS, but I could not do it by myself.

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Thank you for your support the other day. I could not understand the details of support very much, but it might be my personal issue.
I have one request for you.
When the song title is long, the layout of AAA is deformed, so I would like you to fix it.
I thought I could correct it using CSS, but I could not do it myself.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.

We only sell items only in the pdf data format.
The items purchased can be downloaded from the purchase record page.
(Reference: FAQ)↵
For the payment, we accept it through the PayPal.

If you have any inquiry, please feel free to contact us.
Thank you and regard.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

We only sell items only in the pdf data format.
The items purchased can be downloaded from the purchase record page.
(Please refer to FAQ page)↵
We accept payment through PayPal.

Please feel free to contact us should you have any questions.
Thank you and best regards.

元の翻訳
· Drag the function entered into the column B of GD to the bottom and check for the double entries. Those filled with "2" successively means to have enclosed, so it has no concern. Those filled with "2" are here and there should be highly careful because the other orders may be filled in again.

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· Drag the formula entered into the column B of GD to the bottom and check for the redundant entries. Those filled with "2" successively indicate that they have been enclosed, so it has no concern. You should pay special attention to those filled with "2" are here and there as they are the orders with higher possibility that they are the redundant entry of different orders.

元の翻訳
9. Search the cheapest price in Amazon and the other shops with the item name as a key word.
· Yahoo auction (If there is price difference of more than ¥3,000, do not use it except "Buy it Now" price.

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9. Search the cheapest price in Amazon and other shops with the item name as a key word.
· Yahoo auction (If the price difference does not exceed more than ¥3,000, do not use anything except "Buy it Now" price.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。貴店から購入したソニーのvx1000を手元においておく事を決めた事をお知らせしますが、レンズかビューファインダーに何か問題があるのではないかとおもっています。その理由は、何時使っても少しぼやけているように思えます。縮小や、縮小ときでさえもまだすこしぼやけているのが分かります。このことについて貴店は何か知っていますか。よろしくお願いします。

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こんにちは。貴店から購入したソニーのvx1000は手元においておくと［or返品しないと］決めましたのでご連絡いたします。しかし、レンズかビューファインダーに何か問題があるのではないかと思っています。なぜなら［orというのも］、使用するたび、いつも少し［orやや］ぼけが生じる［orぼやけている］からです。カメラをフォーカスアウトしたりフォーカスインしたりして（ピント調整を試）みましたが、まだ少し［orやや］ぼけて見えます［orぼやけて見えます］。このことについて何かご存知であれば教えてください。よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
We are very shocked about sudden news about him. It is very unfortunate for him, We will inform you including our stock within next week, we would like to ask you continuous support.

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We are very shocked about his sudden news. It is very unfortunate for him, We will inform you including our stock matter within next week, we would like to ask for your continuous support.

元の翻訳
According to the tracking history at the post office, the item was attempted to be delivered on Sept. 11, but there was no recipient, so they retained back the item to the post office.

I am sorry for taking up your time, but would you please get in touch with a local post office about the package using the tracking number?
Since we cannot inquire to your local post office from foreign country, I appreciate your cooperation.

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According to the tracking record at the post office, they have attempted to deliver it on Sept. 1st, but it was returned to the post office due to your absence.

I am sorry for taking up your time, but would you please get in touch with your local post office about the package using the tracking number?
Since we cannot inquire to your local post office from foreign country, I appreciate your cooperation.

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I would like to have the item A I ordered.
Make sure for not to ship the item B mistakenly in place of item A.
If you don't have the item A in your inventory, I will cancel this order.
I really expect that you would send me the item A.
Thank you for your understanding.

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I would like to have the item A that I ordered.
Make sure not to ship the item B in place of item A by mistake.
If you don't have the item A in your stock, I will cancel this order.
I really expect that you would ship me the item A.
Thank you for your understanding.

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I have requested by a customer for the specification sheet of AC cable, so please send it to me.
I attach a sample specification sheet received from the customer for your reference.

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Please forward me a spec sheet for AC cable that has been ordered, based on the request from our customer.
I am attaching a sample specification sheet received from the customer for your reference.

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I have received the package a while ago, but there was a shortfall in the following item.

· XXXXXXX

I ordered five pieces, but there were only four pieces packed in.
Would you send me one more piece immediately?
I am sorry for disturbing you, but thank you for your cooperation.

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I have received the package earlier, but the following item was missing:

· XXXXXXX

I ordered five pieces, but there were only four in the package.
Would you send me one more piece immediately?
I am sorry for disturbing you, but thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

We are afraid to inform you that this item is not with English subtitle.

Thank for the message.
We are sorry to inform you that this item is not shipped yet.

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Thank you for your message.

We are afraid to inform you that this item does not come with English subtitles.

Thank for the message.
We are sorry to inform you that this item is not shipped yet [tense confusion].

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We certainly understood
We are sorry for disturbing you many things.
And, sorry for taking up your time.
We are going to issue a refund at $100.00.

Please allow us to wait you for a short while, but we will get back to you when we will be ready to issue the refund.
Together with that occasion, we would like to request you to change your evaluation as we will send the evaluation change request.

We are sure to satisfy you with business if we will have an opportunity to have it in future.
We look forward to having business with you again.

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We certainly understood
We are sorry for the inconvenience caused.
And, sorry for taking up your time.
We are going to issue you a $100.00 refund.

Although it will take little longer, we will get back to you once the refund is completed.
We will then send you the change request for your evaluation, your kind revision is appreciated.

If we have another chance to serve you in the future, we will never disappoint you.
We look forward to having business with you again then.