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I have received the good with defects.
Therefore, I would like to return this product.
If there is a return label, please send me one.

You said that this product is new, but it is unreasonable. It would also not have been damaged by the delivery company. There are a lot of fine scratches to this product, it maybe due to your bad storage conditions. I also send you photos of the status when I received.

Please respond quickly.

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I have received the good with defects.
Therefore, I would like to return this product.
If there is a return label, please send me one.

You said that this product is new, but it is unreasonable. It would also not have been damaged by the delivery company. There are a lot of fine scratches on this product, it maybe due to your bad storage conditions. I also send you photos of the status of this products when I received.

Please respond quickly.

元の翻訳
I would like to purchase (商品名を入れてください ), but I still have no idea as to what is the size is like.
My built is standard, as my height is 158 cm (approx. 5.2 ft), and I weigh 48 kg (approx. 106 lbs).
Which size would make me look slim, given the sizes S and M, as I want to wear it with tight fit.
Also, I would like to see an image of the item without the fur trimming.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

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I would like to purchase (商品名を入れてください ), but I still have no idea as to what is the size is like.
My built is standard, as my height is 158 cm (approx. 5.2 ft), and I weigh 48 kg (approx. 106 lbs).
Which size would make me looks slim, given the sizes S and M, as I want to wear it with tight fit.
Also, I would like to see an image of the item without the fur trimming.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
How are you?
What time does the order in 2014 become?
Moreover, in Japan, breast putt is attached to tops(a camisole and a tank top) of yoga.
Can't I have breast putt attached also to your product for Japanese?

After placing an order as a backorder, you pass very much,what time does dispatch become possible?

Although I would like to order, please tell me password for going into a retail store-oriented page.

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How are you?
What is your plan of the next order in 2014?
Also, in Japan, breast putt is attached to tops(a camisole and a tank top) of yoga.
Can you put the breast putt attached to your products for Japan?

It's been awhile since I have placed an order, when can you ship them?

Also I would like to order, so please tell me the password for the retail store's account.

元の翻訳
In fact，It turned out that there is a crack small one place at the time of inspection of NS before dispatch.

It is a portion of a photograph.
Our policy is sending to you the goods with which a visitor can be satisfied.

There are three proposals.
1.I exchange for new VS of another color.
If it is same VS by a somewhat deep-colored, it is possible to send to United States in about three days.
2.Fix the crack of NS by the maker Y.
In this case,takes about one month.
3.Since it is in a state with a crack, I am allowed to cut a price $100, and I send NS immediately.
This case is the earliest.

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In fact，It turned out that there is a small crack at the time of inspection of NS before dispatch.

It is shown in a photograph.
Our policy is sending the satisfying goods to our customers.

There are three proposals.
1.I exchange it for new VS of another color.
It is the same VS of somewhat deep-colored, and it is possible to send to United States in about three days.
2.Fix the crack of NS by the maker Y.
In this case,it takes about one month.
3.Since it has a crack, I deduct $100 from its price and send it immediately.
This case is the earliest.

元の翻訳
The upper part of boots has discoloration.
Since there is also a crack on the whole, I wish to return the goods.
Since you are to blame for this, I also wish the refund of import duties, a mailing cost, and the mailing cost concerning returned goods besides commodity prices. Your prompt action is expected.

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The upper part of boots has discoloration.
Since there is also are cracks on the whole, I wish to return the goods.
Since you are to blame for this, I also wish the refund of import duties, a mailing cost, and the mailing cost concerning returned goods besides commodity prices. Your prompt action is expected.

元の翻訳
Hello:

Could you tell me if the product in the box is exactly same product as the package? If the product in the box is different, I don't need it, so please trash it and let me know what the product is . I have purchased two helmets, but I didn't purchase the ones we are discussing now, and I believe it came with the product as a service. I look forward to hearing from you.

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Hello:

Could you tell me if the product in the box is exactly same as the package? If the product in the box is different, I don't need it, so please trash it and let me know what the product is . I have purchased two helmets, but I didn't purchase the ones we are discussing now, and I believe it came with the product as a service. I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
His ability to become a giant is not innate. On a war he was eaten by a giant tring to rescue his friend. Then arousing wrath of him, he realized his ability to become a giant. He has such strong mentality to arouse wrath within the giant's stomach. I would obtain special capability arousing wrath within the giant's stomach too if I was eaten by him.

Do you know his another interesting episode, the phrase he said when he was grabbed by his collar in a fight?

"My shirts maybe ripped."

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His ability to become a titan is not innate. On a war he was eaten by a giant while trying to rescue his friend. Then arousing wrath of him, he realized his ability to become a giant. He has such strong mentality to arouse wrath within the giant's stomach. I would obtain special capability arousing wrath within the giant's stomach too if I was eaten by him.

Do you know his another interesting episode, the phrase he said when he was grabbed by his collar in a fight?

"My shirts may be ripped."

元の翻訳
Hello, I am Koji Nishi. I am running a store in Japan, selling American products at Amazon Japan. This is the link to my store.

I would like to start business with your company. I saw your products at Amazon, and I discovered your store. I am interested to the products in your great store. I would appreciate it if you could sell your products without commission of Amazon or with discount. I am looking forward to our future business. Please contact me if you are interested.

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Hello, I am Koji Nishi. I am running a store in Japan, selling American products at Amazon Japan. This is the link to my store.

I would like to start a business with your company. I saw your products at Amazon, and I discovered your store. I am interested in the products in your great store. I would appreciate it if you could sell your products without commission of Amazon or with discount. I am looking forward to our future business. Please contact me if you are interested.