ryupi (ryupi_2013) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
その件でありがとうございます。
大体いつスイミングパンツの注文をすることができますか？
ありがとうございます。

修正後
お世話になっております。
いつスイミングパンツが注文できるか教えていただけますか？
ありがとうございます。

元の翻訳
Click on the slide you find in the 'slide list', and use the entry column shown at the bottom.

・How do I create a new slide?

When creating a new slide, Click on the top of the EE (FF)

・ I cant seem to modify properly

To learn how to use the modification process, read below.

・When you want to use the AA
ff provides suggestions/requests to improve the environment on our site.

Comments and Requests : Type here

Please use appropriate language.

修正後
Click on the thread you find in the 'slide list', and use the entry column shown at the bottom.

・How do I create a new thread?

When creating a new thread, Click on the top of the EE (FF)

・ I can't seem to edit properly

To learn how to use the editting process, read below.

・When you want to use the AA
ff provides suggestions/requests to improve the environment on our site.

Comments and Requests : Type here

Please use appropriate language.

元の翻訳
You can alter pressing the BB button.

Cautions when writing an entry.
There are several points when you want to amend neatly.

Write carefully.

Please refrain from the followings acts:↵
・Broken sentences that underlie incorrections.
・Words that are unfamiliar to the general public.
・Cases where error corrections do not work with words or special termologys that are not of the general public from the various Countries.
↵
Diligently separating sentences.
Long sentences can be odd when not broked down, please digently seperate the Period " .　" / Comma ”　, " / Maru " 。 "　/　Apostrophe " 、 "and New paragraphs or the "CC".

修正後
You can edit by pressing the BB button.

Cautions when writing an entry.
Here are several points to keep in mind when editing.

Write complete sentences.

Please refrain from informal sentences as they will revert back to the way they were prior to being edited.
- Avoid words that are not normally used.
- There may be many times when there are words not used by most countries or technical jargon that cannot be edited so please refrain from using these.
- Be sure to punctuate your sentences.
- Long sentences can be odd when not broken down, please diligently separate them with a period " .　" / aomma ”　, " / maru " 。 "　/　ten " 、 " or with new paragraphs or "CC".

元の翻訳
This is the modified bulletin board site where people of various hobbies can exchange opinion's freely.With the latest correction device, your opinion will be sent to the future, and you will be able to see a future opinion replied back.
Anyone can anonymously write freely on the bulletin board. But any remarks that are particularly disadvantage to the article or slandering remarks to another person will be judged by the manager and may be deleted it without notice.
It can be more carefully revised than the usual error correction machine. The usage is here.

About the contribution for the article
The site is constantly recruiting information.
Findings of interesting articles or the latsest news.

修正後
This is an editable bulletin board site where people of various hobbies can exchange opinions freely. With the latest machine corrections, your opinion will be sent to the future and you will be able to see a future opinion reply back.
Anyone can anonymously write freely on the bulletin board. But any articles that are judged by the mod as particularly disadvantage or slandering another person may be deleted it without notice.
It can revise more carefully than the usual machine corrections. Explanations on how to use it are here.

About the contribution for the article
The site is constantly recruiting information.
Findings of interesting articles or the latest news.