翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: 外国の人に対して、英語学習とIT業界に興味を持った理由の説明をするために使用します

日本語

私は外国人が多く集まる〜という街で働いているので、英語が話せれば街にいる様々な人とコミュニケーションできるようになると考えたからです。あと映画が日本語字幕なしで観れるようになったら最高ですね。

IT業界に興味を持った最初のきっかけは、〜の知識さえあれば、全世界の人がみれるWebサイトを作れると知ったからです。実際試しに作ってみたのですが、楽しかったですね。

IT業界で働き始めて5年くらい経ちますが、自分に合った職業だなと思っています。
技術の進歩がはやくて勉強はとても大変ですけど。

英語

I am working in the town where many foreigners come.
I thought that I could communicate with a variety of people in the town if I can speak English.
In addition, I feel so happy if I can understand the foreign words in the movies without seeing the translation in Japanese.

The reason that I became interested in IT is that if I have the knowledge of ～, I can create a website where people all over the world can see. I tried to create it, and it was fun.

I have been working in IT industry for 5 years, and I found that it is an appropriate job for me. It is hard to study because the progress of technology is so fast, though.

レビュー ( 1 )

ozsamurai_69はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/10/16 16:56:22

元の翻訳
I am working in the town where many foreigners come.
I thought that I could communicate with a variety of people in the town if I can speak English.
In addition, I feel so happy if I can understand the foreign words in the movies without seeing the translation in Japanese.

The reason that I became interested in IT is that if I have the knowledge of ～, I can create a website where people all over the world can see. I tried to create it, and it was fun.

I have been working in IT industry for 5 years, and I found that it is an appropriate job for me. It is hard to study because the progress of technology is so fast, though.

修正後
I am working in the town where many foreigners come.
I thought that I could communicate with a variety of people in the town if I could speak English.
In addition, I feel so happy if I can understand the foreign words in the movies without seeing the translation in Japanese.

The reason that I became interested in IT is that if I have a knowledge of ～, I can create a website that people from all over the world can see. I tried to create it, and it was fun.

I have been working in IT industry for 5 years, and I found that it is an appropriate job for me. It is hard to study because the progress of technology is so fast, though.

pretty good, bit shaky grammar sometimes..