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ly77500

I hope you check it when you come to Japan! The local Hello Kitty! -Kyoto version-

The very popular tourist spot for foreigners and locals, Kyoto. There are a lot of various local products set as the motif for the local kitty!
Please enjoy Kyoto's specialties together with the local kitty ♪

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ly77500

I hope you check it out when you come to Japan! The local Hello Kitty! -Kyoto version-

A very popular tourist spot for foreigners and locals, Kyoto. There are a lot of various local products set as the motif for the local kitty!
Please enjoy Kyoto's specialties together with the local kitty ♪

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ly63600

It was unintentionally but you would also be trying it from tomorrow! Japan fashion girl nail art

Japanese women really loves fashion. With this, I will introduce Japan manicure. Manicure that considers the business etiquette of the workplace, fine decoration and cute character design that is unique to Japan.

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ly63600

It was unintentional but you would also be trying it from tomorrow! Japan fashion girl nail art

Japanese women really loves fashion. With this, I will introduce Japan manicure. Manicure that considers the business etiquette of the workplace, fine decoration and cute character design that is unique to Japan.

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Thank you very much as always oo. It is an excellent product (△△) and I am satisfied every time. However, it takes more time and expenses to purchase one at a time so is it possible to request for purchasing multiple items at the same time? If that's possible, please let me know how much will be the cost for 3 units, 5 units and 10 units. I apologize if I have mentioned something not possible but I ask for your kind support.

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Thank you very much as always. This is oo. △△ is an excellent product and I am satisfied every time. However, it takes more time and expenses to purchase one at a time, so may I order multiple items at the same time? If that's possible, please let me know how much 3 units, 5 units, and 10 units will cost. I apologize if I'm asking for something impossible but I ask for your kind support.

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This is an inquiry regarding the product I've ordered last October 29.

I have worn this product around 10 times in the two and a half month after I have purchased it. And I've spent 1 whole day and worn it as usual today and I noticed that there was a tear on the elbow when I took it off. I think that I was not careless to have pulled it when I wore it during the day. (Seems to be torn when it is extended when bending the elbow. But the way, it is just the correct size.)

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This is an inquiry regarding the product I ordered on October 29.

I have worn this product around 10 times in the two and a half month after I purchased it. And I spent a whole day and wore it as usual today and I noticed that there was a tear on the elbow when I took it off. I think that I was not careless to have pulled it when I wore it during the day. (Seems to be torn when it is extended when bending the elbow. By the way, it is just the correct size.)

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I have forgotten about the period for the amount you've presented that I have acknowledged have passed. I apologize for this but I will make an offer again.

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I forgot about accepting the amount you presented and the period has now expired. I apologize for this and will make an offer again.

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We are contacting you this time as you were referred by oo-san.

The contract on the delivery service of the maker has ended and we could not proceed with receiving the products.

I hope that we can have △△ help us by all means and pickup the products.

And we would like the product to be shipped via MyUs in Florida or directly to Japan after the pickup.

We would like to know the estimated amount for this.

We want to forever continue to patronize you and not just for the product this time.

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We are contacting you this time as you were referred by oo-san.

The contract on the delivery service of the maker has ended and we cannot proceed with receiving the products.

I hope that we can have △△ help us by all means and pick up the products.

And we would like the product to be shipped via MyUs in Florida or directly to Japan after the pickup.

We would like to know the estimated amount for this.

We want to forever continue to patronize you and not just for the product this time.

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1 Nice to meet you. I am oo who lives in Japan.
2 I am collecting Crepe books and I am looking in various bookstores within Germany.
3 Is it possible to look for cheap prices??
4 It is possible to pay using Paypal or through money transfer from my friend. If it is not possible to directly send to Japan, then it is possible to have a friend living in the country to receive it.
5 I am looking forward for a favorable response.

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1 Nice to meet you. I am oo who lives in Japan.
2 I am collecting Crepe books and I am looking in various bookstores within Germany.
3 Is it possible to look for cheap prices??
4 It is possible to pay using Paypal or through money transfer from my friend. If it is not possible to directly send to Japan, then it is possible to have a friend living in the country to receive it.
5 I am looking forward to your positive reply.

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Thank you for sincerely looking into this.
Please do not misunderstand as I have the utmost trust with you 〇〇-san.
I was just a bit worried on the thought that it was tough when there was a damage with the sample when it was returned at work previously (Smile)
I fully understand everything so I will provide all my support. It's a level that as if you could request to have me lol

The gold plated cage and the aluminum body panel production is being started after it was returned.
The production would take some time to complete so it would be alright to decide on purchasing it by that time. :)

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Thank you for sincerely looking into this.
Please do not misunderstand as I have the utmost trust with you 〇〇-san.
I was just a bit worried on the thought that it was tough when there was a damage with the sample when it was returned previously (Smile)
I fully understand everything so I will provide all my support. It's a level that as if you could request to have me lol

The metal cage and the aluminum body panel production is being started after it was returned.
The production would take some time to complete so it would be alright to decide on purchasing it by that time. :)

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1. I would be purchasing 〇〇 units of the product so can you give a △△% discount?
I would like to continue buying more from you once the deal has been established.
I will look forward for your response.

2. I am 〇〇 who purchased this product previously.
I thought of purchasing again but the product ran out of stock so I was not able to buy.
Is there a plan the re-stock?
Can you send an email on the product re-stocking to my mail address once you have confirmed the schedule?
I would also like to know the selling price once you have restock.

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1. I would be purchasing 〇〇 units of the product so can you give a △△% discount?
I would like to continue buying more from you once the deal has been established.
I will look forward to your response.

2. I am 〇〇 who purchased this product previously.
I thought of purchasing the product again but it ran out of stock so I was not able to buy it.
Is there a plan of re-stocking the tem?
If you plan to re-stock the item, would you please send an email to my mail address below once you receive it?
I would also like to know the selling price once you have restock.

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Thank you for replying to the email. The login information is still in it's default status.
I will send the FTP information so I request to be able to search in Japanese similar to the following.
However, I want the country selection area to be removed since it is not needed.
*There are some parts that were translated to Japanese but are okay to be deleted. Plus some parts of the MySQL are changed to UTF-8. Please let me know if there are problems.

Please let me know if you require any other information.

And there might be some other questions that would come out later so I ask for your support.

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Thank you for your reply. The login information is still in its default status.
I will send you the FTP information so I request to be able to search [revise] in Japanese similar to the following.
However, I want the country selection area to be removed since it is not needed.
*There are some parts that were translated to Japanese but are okay to be deleted. Plus some parts of the MySQL are changed to UTF-8. Please let me know if there are problems.

Please let me know if you require any other information.

And I may have some more questions later, so I ask for your support.

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I am contacting you on the current status of the problem.

There are changes in the rules of eBay wherein a limit has been set to prevent adding products to be displayed if you are selling 10 products or a total of 500 USD in a month's period.

My account started doing sales for 3 months and it is still a new one and is in this current type of state.

I will paying you for the completed work on the registration of the 12 products for the time being.
In addition, I would like to ask you to fix the font on the digital camera registration page before making the payment.

I will contact you after the removal of the restrictions for the remaining tasks.

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I am contacting you on the current status of the problem.

There are changes in the rules of eBay wherein a limit has been set to prevent adding products to be displayed if you are selling 10 products or a total of 500 USD in a month's period.

My account started doing sales for 3 months and it is still a new one and is in this current type of state.

I will be paying you for the completed work on the registration of the 12 products for the time being.
In addition, I would like to ask you to fix the font on the digital camera registration page before making the payment.

I will contact you about the remaining tasks after the removal of the restrictions.

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Good day!
Thank you very much for buying a product from our shop this time.

I will add a little bonus!
This is a tradition in the Japan culture.↵
It is called [Origami].
This origami was created by children with disabilities in Japan.
We are donating $0.3 to the disabled children center for each origami.
A little portion of your purchase was able to help the children in Japan!
Thank you very much!
And we are happy for your patronage!
Thank you!

Shop owner

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Good day!
Thank you very much for buying a product from our shop this time.

I will add a small gift to you!
This is a traditional Japanese culture which is called 'Origami'.
This origami was made by children with disabilities in Japan.
We are donating $0.3 for each origami to the support center for disabled children .
A little portion of your purchase can help the children in Japan!
Thank you very much!
And we are happy for your patronage!
Thank you!

Shop owner

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Please order with the specs on the file attachment. Can you send a softcopy of the order document with the digital signature from the maker once you make the order?
I have explained this to the customer and requested to wait until February for the delivery. And to avoid the customer from cancelling the order, we took $300 off (We almost reached the deficit value). It would be appreciated if you can possibly make it just enough to obtain your benefit.
What are the differences between the upped version of A compared to the previous A? Please let me know the specifics.

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Please order with the specs on the file attachment. Can you send a softcopy of the order document with the signature from the maker once you make the order?
I have explained this to the customer and requested to wait until February of next year for the delivery. And to avoid the customer from cancelling the order, we took $300 off (We almost reached the deficit value). It would be appreciated if you can possibly make it just enough to obtain your benefit.
What are the differences between the upped version of A compared to the previous A? Please let me know the specifics.

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We are discussing on buying the sample products.

We want to buy one of each of the following products.

Can we buy the following products?
If yes then we would also like to buy each of these.

11 and 22 is being sold in sets on eBay so
will we be able to use 22 with 11?

Can we use liquid with 11?

eBay is selling your products with less than $40.
Are these genuine?
Please let us know how to determine counterfeits.

It is being sold in Japan but there is a need to draw attention.

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We have discussed buying the sample products.

We want to buy one of each of the following products.

Can we buy the following products?
If yes, then we would also like to buy each of these.

11 and 22 are sold in sets on eBay, so
will we be able to use 22 with 11?

Can we use liquid with 11?

You sell your products on eBay for less than $40.
Are these genuine?
Please let us know how to distinguish counterfeits.

We need to bring this to customers' attention when we sell them in Japan.

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Good day

The product that has been returned to the US will take some time so please refund $40.

This Jacket is small so I am going to give it to the children.

Thank you.

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Good day

As returning this product to the US will take some time, please refund me $40.

This jacket is too small so I am going to give it to my child.

Thank you.