Samuel (naokiaoki2013) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
This product is Japanese specification of 100V.
Is it the voltage of your country?
Because this product is made very precisely, it’ll cause failure, fire and etc. for small change in voltage.

Please contact us early if you want to cancel the order.

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This product is specified for 100V in Japan.
Is this the voltage in your country?
Because this product is sensitive to voltage, it’ll cause failure, fire and etc. for any small changes in voltage.

Please contact us early if you want to cancel the order.

元の翻訳
Coplanarity inspection device which can measure the floatation volume of the work from the glass surface relative to the glass surface without contact.
As the small size of the basic structure and and optimum inspection program based on inspection algorithms, you can have a coplanarity inspection in-line.

● High-speed shape measurement using the phase shift method
● Swell and warp of the resin can’t be observed until now which can be measured at the same time
● Quickly understand the glass ground point
● Different materials (resin, metal, etc.) in the view field can be measured at the same time
● 2D tests such as lead pitch test can be measured at the same time

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The coplanarity inspection device is a device that can measure the flotation volume of work from the glass surface based on the glass surface without contact.
Miniaturizing basic structures, the inspection algorithms also use optimum inspection programs, making it possible to conduct coplanarity inspection in-line.

● High-speed shape measurement using the phase shift method
● Swell and warp of the resin which could not be observed until now is measured at the same time
● Quick understanding the glass ground point
● Different materials (resin, metal, etc.) in the field of view can be measured at the same time
● 2D tests such as the lead pitch test can be conducted at the same time

元の翻訳
Heat Tester is the shape inspection apparatus equipped with a heating device.

It is possible to perform heating simulating the reflow temperature based on the glass surface without contact and measure in terms of variation of the work due to the temperature.

Since the measurement results can be saved in 3D image data judged by sensation and numeric data, it could be used in solder failure during reflow and shape change measurement of parts used in high temperature places.

"surface measurement”— High-speed shape measurement overturns the common sense of the point measurement.

Swell and warp of the resin can’t be observed until now which can be measured at the same time.

Quickly understand the glass ground point

修正後
Heat Tester is the shape inspection apparatus equipped with heating device.

It is possible to perform heating simulating the re-flow temperature based on the glass surface without contact and measure in terms of variation of the work due to the temperature.

Since the measurement results can be saved in 3D image data judged by sensation and numeric data, it could be used in solder failure during re-flow and shape change measurement of parts used in high temperature places.

"surface measurement”— High-speed shape measurement overturns the common sense of the point measurement.

Swell and warp of the resin can’t be observed until now which can be measured at the same time.

Quickly understand the glass ground point

元の翻訳
災害時、iCalamity利用することで家族や友人を見つけます。

この前、フィリピンに襲った超台風海燕は誰にとっても教訓であった。多くのスタートアップや企業は、役に立つオンライン危機対応プラットフォームを作製しました。

将来の災害に備えて、ダバオに基づく開発者のたちは、携帯電話を使用して現在の場所や状況を愛する人たちに通知するアプリを作成しました。

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災害時、iCalamityを利用することで家族や友人を見つけます。

この前、フィリピンを襲った巨大台風海燕は誰にとっても教訓であった。多くのスタートアップや企業は、役に立つオンライン危機対応プラットフォームを作製しました。

将来の災害に備えて、ダバオを拠点とする開発者たちは、携帯電話を使用して現在の場所や状況を愛する人たちに通知するアプリを作成しました。

元の翻訳
こんにちは！
これは日本110Vのモデルですか？

修正後
こんにちは！
これは110Vの日本モデルですか？

元の翻訳
Hello

Thanks for the sharp photo.

Thank you for the sharp photo.↵
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I had check the wound of the items. I didn't find any problem, so I'll buy it.

Because the date has passed, could you send me the delivery in a hurry?

Regards

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Hello

Thanks for the sharp photo.

I had check the wound of the items. I didn't find any problem, so I'll buy it.

Because time has passed, could you send me the delivery as soon as possible?

Regards

元の翻訳
Since I can't wait any longer, please pay the refund. Please contact me if the refund is finished.

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Since I can't wait any longer, please pay the refund. Please contact me when the refund is finished.

元の翻訳
ご不便をかけまして申し訳ありませんが、お客様の配送先は弊社のところに届いてないです。また、荷物を出荷前に配送先もう一度確認したいです。もし、下の配送先を確認して、正しい配送先を教えて頂ければありがたいです。

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ご不便をかけまして申し訳ありませんが、残念ながらお客様の配送先は弊社に届いてないようです。荷物を出荷前に配送先をもう一度確認して頂けるでしょうか。もし、下記を確認して、正しい配送先を教えて頂ければありがたいです。