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元の翻訳
We will be purchasing 40 of the 〇〇 in June, so will you be able to secure the stock for us??
Also, do you still have a lot of stock for each color??

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We will be purchasing about 40 units of the 〇〇 in June, so will you secure the stock for us??
Also, do you still have a lot of stock for each color??

元の翻訳
We found your work through Instagram. We are a company residing in Tokyo, and are starting an online store geared towards cyclists in April. We are planning to sell documents, photojin, socks and water bottles for cyclists. We have great liking and interest in your work, and would like to request you to create our logo mark of "A". The "AB" of "A" comes from the professional road bicycle racer ABC. We would like the design to be a circular shape like the image on the link. Otherwise, we would like to make everything up to you.

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We found your work through Instagram. We are a company residing in Tokyo, and are starting an online store geared towards cyclists in April. We are planning to sell documents, photo magazines, socks and water bottles for cyclists. We have great liking and interest in your work, and would like to request you to create our logo mark of "A". The "AB" of "A" comes from the professional road bicycle racer ABC. We would like the design to be a circular shape like the image on the link. Otherwise, we would like to leave everything up to you.

元の翻訳
Hello! I'd like to ask you several questions.
Is this item usable inside Japan?
Also, are there equipment I must collect on my own, such as a SIM card contract?
Are the software compatible with Windows8?
Are there any power plugs that are compatible with 110v?
Do you have a description leaflet written in Japanese?

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Hello! I'd like to ask you several questions.
Is this item usable in Japan?
Also, is there any equipment I must collect on my own, such as a SIM card ?
Is the software compatible with Windows8?
Are there any power plugs that are compatible with 110v?
Do you have an instruction booklet written in Japanese?

元の翻訳
ヴェポライザー（気化器）がもっとコンパクトに控えめなデザインで登場。
どんな場面でも映え、耐久性のある設計。
バイクやスキーなど、アウトドア活動をするあなたに最適！
この上級ヴェポライザーはオイルを均等に芯の無いセラミックの密室でとかし、においを最小限に抑えます。
スターターキットは箱から取り出したらスグ使える！入れて、押して、吸い込んで、あとは味わうだけ。
AtmosNationより設計・デザイン、専売特許出願中

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ヴェポライザー（気化器）がもっとコンパクトに控えめなデザインで登場。
どんな場面でも映え、耐久性のある設計。
バイクやスキーなど、アウトドア活動をするあなたに最適！
この上級ヴェポライザーはオイルを均等に芯の無いセラミックの密室でとかし、においを最小限に抑えます。
スターターキットは箱から取り出したらスグ使える！入れて、押して、吸い込んで、あとは味わうだけ。
AtmosNationより設計・デザイン、特許出願中

元の翻訳
「ファーストクリック」アトリビューション（開始クリック帰属）：購入が購入者の最初のクリックにより確定
「ラストクリック」アトリビューション（最終クリック帰属）：購入が購入者の最後のクリックにより確定

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「ファーストクリック」アトリビューション（開始クリック帰属）：購入が購入者の最初のクリックにより確定
「ラストクリック」アトリビューション（最終クリック帰属）：購入が購入者の最後のクリックにより確定↵
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元の翻訳
I appears to be that products sold on eBay and Amazon are fake.

I believe that the items sold on the Japanese Amazon and Yahoo are also fake as well.
The Japanese sellers seem to be importing their items from eBay.

Once many fake items are distributed throughout the country, the items will heavily drop in value, influencing the price and trust of the original product which we handle.

There are some places in Japan that already sell this product at an impossibly low rate.

I am hoping that you will be able to tighten the terms and agreements of eBay and Amazon to remove the fake items.

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It appears to be that products sold on eBay and Amazon are fake.

I believe that the items sold on the Japanese Amazon and Yahoo are also fake as well.
The Japanese sellers seem to be importing their items from eBay.

Once many fake items are distributed throughout the country, the items will heavily drop in value, influencing the price and trust of the original product which we handle.

There are some places in Japan that already sell this product at an impossibly low rate.

I am hoping that you will be able to tighten the terms and agreements of eBay and Amazon to remove the fake items.