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元の翻訳
　もし返品された商品が使用済みであったり、摩耗の兆候が見られる場合は受け取り拒否されるか，最大25％の在庫補充手数料が課されます。
　弊社では次の商品，すなわち、イヤフォン、耳栓、ヘッドフォン、ヘッドセット、クリーナー、つや出し剤、研磨布、クリーニングキット、ペグ、弓、ブリッジ、肩がかかっている、ギターピックに対しては返金致しません。（これらの商品は欠陥がある場合は、同じ商品と交換いたします。）
標準返品ポリシーの詳細をご覧下さい。
　破損、欠品や遅延 に関しては、弊社では欠品、遅れ、弊社のコントロールの域を超えている破損状態で到着した場合は責任を負いません 。
　貴殿には到着次第検査し、欠品や破損があった場合は到着から２４時間以内に報告する責任があります。

修正後
　もし返品された商品が使用済みであったり、摩耗の兆候が見られる場合は受け取り拒否されるか，最大25％の在庫補充手数料が課されます。
　弊社では次の商品，すなわち、イヤフォン、耳栓、ヘッドフォン、ヘッドセット、クリーナー、つや出し剤、研磨布、クリーニングキット、ペグ、弓、ブリッジ、ショルダーレスト、ギターピックに対しては返金致しません。（これらの商品は欠陥がある場合は、同じ商品と交換いたします。）
標準返品ポリシーの詳細をご覧下さい。
　破損、欠品や遅延 に関しては、弊社では欠品、遅れ、弊社のコントロールの域を超えている破損状態で到着した場合は責任を負いません 。
　貴殿には到着次第検査し、欠品や破損があった場合は到着から２４時間以内に報告する責任があります。

元の翻訳
この記述を読みますと、あなたがEMS でこのアイテムを送るように勧めてくれたことがわかりました。なので、このアイテムは追跡可能なんでしょうか。
もし普通の国際便を利用した完全に追跡できないのですか？
これについてもっと詳しく説明してもらえますか。それに、EMS利用する場合の追加料金も聞かせてください。

これを明らかにする前にこのアイテムを出さないもらいたいです。

前もって助けてくれてありがとうございます。

よろしくお願いします。

修正後
この記述を拝見し、あなたがEMS でこのアイテムを送るようにおすすめ下さったことがわかりました。つまり、このアイテムは追跡可能なんでしょうか。
もし普通の国際便を利用したら完全に追跡できないのですか？
これについてもっと詳しく説明してもらえますか。また、EMS利用する場合の追加料金もお知らせください。

これを明らかにする前にこのアイテムを出さないもらいたいです。

前もってご助力下さりありがとうございます。

よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
"I feel sorry. You noticed it. No one tells you to live in a hurry.
Look at this blue sky, white cloud and happy school life.
I am sure that all of them will defeat your ambition slowly and comfortably.
What you need from now is desperation and impatience.
It is the best if you can live without knowing anything. Are you still coming here?"
Tetsujin Akuta (Heaven's door to G fighting place)

Extracted from "Heaven's door to G fighting place" by Yoko Nihombashi
This phrase changed my view for life.
I love Akuta.

修正後
"I feel sorry. You noticed it. No one tells you to live in a hurry.
Look at this blue sky, white clouds and happy school life.
I am sure that all of them will defeat your ambition slowly and comfortably.
What you need from now is desperation and impatience.
It is the best if you can live without knowing anything. Are you still coming here?"
Tetsujin Akuta (Heaven's door to G fighting place)

Extracted from "Heaven's door to G fighting place" by Yoko Nihombashi
This phrase changed my view for life.
I love Akuta.

元の翻訳
Don't worry about it, Kory, please. If your mom likes Japanese wasabi you can pay next time, this time please try it out as a present.
You are always helping me so I wanted to return the favor. This was the perfect occasion I think.
By the way, the wasabi your mom always uses, is it raw wasabi or is it wasabi from a tube? A few day ago I there was a coin in my doll's shoe. Is there any reason for this?

修正後
Don't worry about it, Kory, please. If your mom likes Japanese wasabi you can pay next time, this time please try it out as a present.
You are always helping me so I wanted to return the favor. This was the perfect occasion I think.
By the way, the wasabi your mom always uses, is it raw wasabi or is it wasabi from a tube? A few day ago there was a coin in my doll's shoe. Is there any reason for this?

元の翻訳
Hello
Thank you for using our shop.
I am afraid I have something tell you about shipping trouble.
The product I send by SAL registered mail has returned from Tokyo.
It seems SAL registered mail is not available in Denmark.
Therefore I will send it again by SAL next time.
Shipping date will be October 7,
Arrival date will be October 21 to November 4.
I am so sorry to keep you waiting.
I will be responsible for that to the end.
If you have any questions, please feel free to ask.

修正後
Hello
Thank you for using our shop.
I am afraid I have something to tell you about shipping trouble.
The product I sent by SAL registered mail has returned from Tokyo.
It seems SAL registered mail is not available in Denmark.
Therefore I will send it again by SAL next time.
Shipping date will be October 7,
Arrival date will be October 21 to November 4.
I am so sorry to keep you waiting.
I will be responsible for that to the end.
If you have any questions, please feel free to ask.

元の翻訳
親愛なるlunawavejpさま、

こんにちは、私の友よ。あなたの製品に興味があるのですが、それがきちんと成立する注文なのか確認する必要があります。100％の良い評価を得られているぐらいなので信頼のおけるセラーでいらっしゃることでしょう。私に国では中古品輸入が禁じられているため、商品は新品として梱包してください。2014年10月8日より税金が引き上げられるため、迅速な配送も希望します。ご連絡頂けますか？すぐに購入します。宜しくお願いします。

注意：英語を話せないのでGoogle翻訳を使っています。

修正後
親愛なるlunawavejpさま、

こんにちは、私の友よ。あなたの製品に興味があるのですが、それがきちんと成立する注文なのか確認する必要があります。100％の良い評価を得られているぐらいなので信頼のおけるセラーでいらっしゃることでしょう。私の国では中古品輸入が禁じられているため、商品は新品として梱包してください。2014年10月8日より税金が引き上げられるため、迅速な配送も希望します。ご連絡頂けますか？すぐに購入します。宜しくお願いします。

注意：英語を話せないのでGoogle翻訳を使っています。

元の翻訳
Select Phone Number (Q column) from the "Date Investigation" for the new order. And pasted in GD.

修正後
Select Phone Number (Q column) from the "Date Investigation" for the new order. And paste in GD.

元の翻訳
Biei Hill ( in Hokkaido )

Biei town is famous for representative touristic spots in Hokkaido together with neighboring Furano city. The landscape of its hill and flowers is very popular and lots of migrants from other prefectures come to the city.
Biei Hill has many touristic points which look like pictures, and those beautiful landscapes were used in TV commercial and drama.

Biei Hill looks like full-scale flower garden in the park, but most of the area are estates belonging to local farmers. To protect this agricultural landscape for long, please keep out from stepping into those farm and enjoy walking and taking photographs of these beautiful landscapes from paved roads.

修正後
Biei Hill ( in Hokkaido )

Biei town is famous for representative touristic spots in Hokkaido together with neighboring Furano city. The landscape of its hill and flowers is very popular and lots of migrants from other prefectures come to the city.
Biei Hill has many touristic points which look like pictures, and those beautiful landscapes were used in TV commercials and dramas.

Biei Hill looks like full-scale flower garden in the park, but most of the area are estates belonging to local farmers. To protect this agricultural landscape for long, please keep out from stepping into those farm and enjoy walking and taking photographs of these beautiful landscapes from paved roads.

元の翻訳
First, happy birthday! If the delibary method is EMS, it will take 2~4 days from Japan to France. So, I think it will reach by 15th in September. If you choose EMS, it will cost 15$.
Please take it consideration, thank you.

修正後
First, happy birthday! ↵
If the delivery method is EMS, it will take 2~4 days from Japan to France. So, I think it will reach by 15th in September. If you choose EMS, it will cost 15$.
Please take it into consideration. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Payment corresponding to two articles has not been confirmed, so it is not possible to make any purchase on your behalf.
If payment fails this time, I will have to stop any dealings with you.
I have been waiting for this payment for a long period of time.
I will auction the merchandise so please consider purchasing them there.

I will be able to wait for payment. Please make the purchase at the time more convenient for you. We will wait for the payment.

It is a seal with a rhinestone.
It is a seal that is a little thick.
Seal with the design of various sweets.

修正後
Payment corresponding to two articles has not been confirmed, so it is not possible to make any purchase on your behalf.
If payment fails this time, I will have to stop any dealings with you.
I have been waiting for this payment for a long period of time.
I will auction the merchandise so please consider purchasing them there.

I will be able to wait for your payment. Please make the purchase at the time more convenient for you. We will wait for the payment.

It is a sticker with a rhinestone.
It is a sticker that is a little thick.
Sticker with the design of various sweets.