Minami.O (miney) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
お返事ありがとうございます。すでに1988 LH 330 FG と two LH 12 string Rickysはこちらが所有しております。
現在私はただLH Jetglo short scale 325を探しております。残念なことに私の知っている限りですとRickenbackerは今まで左ハンドルの325C64 Miami を制作したことがありません。しかしながらLH 325V59 JG または325V63 JGは製造されていたようです。Rickenbackerが 左ハンドルのJetglo 325C58を作ったかは不明です。

この世界には約75億人が住んでいるというのに左ハンドルの325が販売されていないとは、信じられません。

次の高いハードルはGibson J160Eを灼熱の太陽の中探し出すことです。Gibsonが切に願っておりますが、どうなることやら。

なので、以上2点のうちのどちらかについて情報が入りましたら私に是非お知らせください。

修正後
お返事ありがとうございます。すでに1988 LH 330 FG と LH 12 string Rickysを2本、こちらが所有しております。
現在私はLH Jetglo short scale 325を探しております。残念なことに、私の知っている限りですとRickenbackerは今まで左利き用の325C64 Miami を製作したことがありません。しかしながらLH 325V59 JGや325V63 JGは製造されていたようです。Rickenbackerが 左利き用のJetglo 325C58を作ったかは不明です。

この世界には約75億人が住んでいるというのに左利き用の325が販売されていないとは、信じられません。

次の高いハードルはサンバーストのGibson J160Eを探し出すことです。GibsonがJ160Eを再度限定生産してくれることを切に願っておりますが、どうなることやら。

なので、以上2点のうちのどちらかについて情報が入りましたら私に是非お知らせください。

元の翻訳
With some experiences through tarveling, we can make more difference to other companies.
We shouldn't make travel plans of only tours or walking around tourist sites, but we should introduce some experience programs.
We can not only eat, but also with experiences. We can not only look around, but also we can experience by touching. This is a sightseeing that we want to suggest.
We made a plan of travel.
I think cycling is an item that we can sell to variety kinds of people.
I've heard that with Garuda Indonesia it is possible to use bicycles for free. It's going to be great if we can utilize it.

Hope we can start some businesses with your companies.

修正後
With some experiences through tarveling, we can make more difference to other companies.
We shouldn't make travel plans of only tours or walking around tourist sites, but we should introduce some experience programs.
We can not only eat, but also experience. We can not only look around, but also we can experience by touching. This is a sightseeing that we want to suggest.
We made a plan of travel.
I think cycling is an item that we can sell to many kinds of people.
I've heard that with Garuda Indonesia it is possible to use bicycles for free. It's going to be great if we can utilize it.

Hope we can start some businesses with your companies.

元の翻訳
The performance of DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2015 ”FEVER” in Ichikawa City Cultural Hall was finished.

DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2015 ”FEVER”
Thanks to all, I could do hot and comfortable FEVER in the performance of Ichikawa City Cultural Hall, too.

I was really happy to see each of you swinging your body as you like by tha stage.
Thank you so much

So, today Shizuoka
We are heading to perform in Act City Hamamatsu

Looking forward to seeing you all in the hall ^_^

修正後
The performance of DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2015 ”FEVER” at Ichikawa City Cultural Hall was finished.

DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2015 ”FEVER”
Thanks to all, I could do hot and comfortable FEVER in the performance of Ichikawa City Cultural Hall, too.

I was really happy to see each of you swinging your body as you liked by tha stage.
Thank you so much

So, today Shizuoka
We are heading to perform at Act City Hamamatsu

Looking forward to seeing you all in the hall ^_^

元の翻訳
AAA was selected as a first artist in a service we can make photo albums freely "a-PRESSO"!

"a-PRESSO" is a service that you can make your own photo albums in the world by selecting official photos of the private site and writing what you want to do. In this service AAA was selected as a first artist!

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AAA was selected as the first artist in a service we can make photo albums freely "a-PRESSO"!

"a-PRESSO" is the only service that you can make your own photo albums in the world by selecting official photos of the special site and writing what you want. In this service AAA was selected as the first artist!

元の翻訳
サンプルテストの結果をお客様からまだ頂いておりません。以前には10日ほどかかるとお聞きしていました。
以前メールを送りましたが、再度申し上げますとちぢれる点についてはご心配には及びません。製品を作る際にその件については処理いたします。

もし現時点で結果が出ていない場合、お手数いりますがいつ頃こちらに伝えて頂けることができるか教えていただけますか。

修正後
サンプルテストの結果をお客様からまだ頂いておりません。以前には10日ほどかかるとお聞きしていました。
以前メールを送りましたが、再度申し上げますとちぢれる点についてはご心配には及びません。製品を作る際にその件については処理いたします。

もし現時点で結果が出ていない場合、お手数いりますがいつこちらに伝えて頂けることができるか教えていただけますか。

元の翻訳
He went back alone to the room. When on earth? Well, we also have to go to bed. It's late.
Help! He used a knife to A to...
Are you still in the dream, too?
No way! I did see with my eyes!
I'll sneak into his room and try to take a picture when he sleeps. You should be here. No worries, I'll be back soon.
He haven't come back yet... What happened...
That was true what they said.
・Submitted videos are in the favourites (twitter)

修正後
He went back alone to the room. When on earth? Well, we also have to go to bed. It's late.
Help! He used a knife to A to...
Are you still in the dream, too?
No way! I did see with my eyes!
I'll sneak into his room and try to take a picture when he sleeps. You should be here. No worries, I'll be back soon.
He hasn't come back yet... What happened...
That was true what they said.
・Submitted videos are in the favourites (twitter)