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Dear Amazon,
Since I received your email last time, I made a contact with Payonia. I asked Payonia to check if the money has transferred to my card, but they said it had not yet.
They said that money will not be transferred if an incorrect account number is registered. I wonder where my proceeds from sales are. Will the money be transferred to my correct account?

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Dear Amazon,
Since I received your email last time, I made a contact with Payonia. I asked Payonia to check if the money had been transferred to my card, but they said it had not yet.
They said that the money would not be transferred if an incorrect account number was registered. I wonder where my proceeds from sales are now. Will the money be transferred to my correct account?

元の翻訳
Thank you for your immediate reply.
I know I am asking a big favor but I want a detail quote by during tomorrow.

Since our client has not organized pipes that is going to be used, at the moment we are not sure about the inside diameter of the pipe. But it is more likely than 27.6mm, so　I want inside diameter of plumbing pipes to be 27.6mm when you select a model.

Let's say the inside diameter of plumbing pipe is 27.6mm, please give us the quote for A type and B type for the following model.
640i…...

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Thank you for your immediate reply.
I know I am asking a big favor but I want a detailEd quote by tomorrow.

Since our client has not organized pipes that is going to be used, at the moment we are not sure about the inside diameter of the pipe. But it is more likely as 27.6mm, so　I want inside diameter of plumbing pipes to be 27.6mm when you select a model.

Let's say the inside diameter of plumbing pipe is 27.6mm, please give us the quote for A type and B type for the following model.
640i…...

元の翻訳
あなたのオーダー6 #8341 Cookbooksを、＊＊Houseに発送する際の輸送費（見積もり送り状に同封できます）と、＊＊HouseがPleasant Prairie, Wisconsin USA倉庫で受け取る場合の輸送費、どちらの見積もりが必要であるかをお知らせください。

Focusは、Alice Houseへの輸送費見積もりをお取りになることをお勧めします。

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あなたのオーダー6 #8341 Cookbooksを、＊＊Houseに発送する際の輸送費（見積送り状に記載可能）の見積もり、または＊＊Houseが弊社Pleasant PrairieのWisconsin USA倉庫で受け取る場合の輸送費の見積もりの、どちらをFocusに渡すのかに関してもお知らせください。

FocusがAlice Houseへの輸送費見積もりを受け取る方をお勧めします。

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Jan 22 and Jan 26-29 in 2015, we visited you for our honeymoon and had a great time. We are writing to you since there is something that we need to tell you. During our stay, we bought two sets of lighting stands, however, one of them does not work. purchase information is as follow and we are wondering if you could replace it to a new one for us. That would be really appreciate it! Thank you for your consideration.
We look forward to hearing from you.

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Jan 22 and Jan 26-29 in 2015, we visited you for our honeymoon and had a great time. We are writing to you since there is something that we need to tell you. During our stay, we bought two sets of desk lamps. However, one of them does not work. The purchase information is as follow and we are wondering if you could replace it with a new one. That would be really appreciated! Thank you for your consideration.
We look forward to hearing from you.