Makoto Mori (makotomori26) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
mugendai1様、
もしもあなたが購入なさりたくないということであればそれでも結構ですが、ebayより5ドルほど請求がされますので、こちらをなんとかしなければなりません。

aural-sect

mugendai1様、
Gerry Anderson Thunderbirds "Excavator/Mini X Car" Japan IMAI モデルキットにつきまして、このほど当方で取り消し処理をしました。
取り消し処理理由につきましては、間違いにより商品を購入されたためです。Respond Nowをクリックして、この処理を受け入れるかキャンセルするかを選んでください。2013年10月27日までにお返事がいただけない場合、あなたの同意なしに取り消し処理を行うことが出きるようになります。この件につきましてはResolution Center にて、いつでもご確認いただけます。

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mugendai1様、
もしもあなたが購入なさりたくないということであればそれでも構いませんが、ebayから約5ドル請求されますので、こちらをなんとかしなければなりません。

aural-sect

mugendai1様、
Gerry Anderson Thunderbirds "Excavator/Mini X Car" Japan IMAI モデルキットにつきまして、このたび当方で取り消し処理を行いました。
取り消し処理の理由につきましては、間違って商品を購入されたためです。Respond Nowをクリックして、この処理を受け入れるかキャンセルするかを選んでください。2013年10月27日までにお返事がいただけない場合、あなたの同意なしに取り消し処理を行うことが出来るようになります。この件につきましてはResolution Center にて、いつでもご確認いただけます。

元の翻訳
Do you know the Shisa?
People in Okinawa place shisa on their rooftops or flanking the gates to their houses.
Shisa are wards, believed to protect from some evils.

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Do you know Shisa?
People in Okinawa put Shisa on their rooftops or flanking the gates to their houses.
Shisa are wards, believed to protect from some evils.

元の翻訳
今までにフィリピンに輸送出来た実績はありますか。
つまり、フィリピンの買い手が、そちらのお店から郵送で購入したものを、きちんと受け取れたかどうかということです。
私はその点に不安があります。
私はフィリピンにいるのですが、いくつか商品を購入したいと思っています。
どんなお返事でもお待ちしています。

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今までにフィリピンに輸送した実績はありますか。
つまり、フィリピンの買い手が、そちらのお店から郵送で購入したものを、きちんと受け取れたかどうかということです。
私はその点に不安があります。
私はフィリピンにいるのですが、いくつか商品を購入したいと思っています。
どんなお返事でもお待ちしています。

元の翻訳
Thanks for your notification despite holiday.

This EMS delivery item is hold at customs in China. This is result from investgation by Paypal.
Can you send item as quickly as possible.
Please let us know shipping date and tracking number.

We have long relationship over two years, so I believe we can resolve this issue soon.

Regards,

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Thanks for your contact even in a holiday.

This EMS delivery item was hold at customs in China. This is the result from investgation by Paypal.
Can you send item as quickly as possible.
Please let us know shipping date and tracking number.

We have long relationship over two years, so I believe we can resolve this issue soon.

Regards,

元の翻訳
Good afternoon
Thank you for your contact
Last time i already 2 pieces
But I don't want to ship together at this time
If you ship together, shipping by vessel is too many
Is it possible
I'm looking forward to hearing from you

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Good afternoon.
Thank you for your contact .
Last time i ordered 2 pieces .
But I don't want to ship together at this time.
If you ship together, shipping by vessel is too many.
Is it possible?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
I am surprised that there were a substantial difference between the quantity of products I had delivered in the past and the quantity the receipt had actually been confirmed.
I believe that it is too critical to ignore the difference to have been occurred almost every time other than particular shipments.
Our company confirms the quantity of products 3 times before it is shipped out.
As you know, we requested an investigation for the difference of products this time. Some of the difference has been confirmed, but some of rejected.
What approach would you take for this matter? It is a huge matter for us that expensive products are have been lost, not those affordable ones.

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I am surprised that there was a big difference between the quantity of products I had delivered before and the quantity the receipt had actually been confirmed.
I believe that it is too critical to ignore the difference to have been occurred almost every time other than particular shipments.
Our company confirms the quantity of products 3 times before it is shipped out.
As you know, we requested an investigation for the difference of products this time. Some of the difference has been confirmed, but some of rejected.
What approach would you take for this matter? It is a huge matter for us that expensive products are have been lost, not those affordable ones.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.

When you ship items abroad, you usually have to be responsible for custom duties.

Fortunately, your first order was not caught for duties, however a second order was charged for it as regulations applies

Custom Duties regulations are strict especially in Canada and Europe.

We are sorry but as the URL page explains, a buyer is responsible for any custom duties.

We apologize any inconvenience that may have caused you.

Thank you.

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Thank you for contacting us.

When you ship items abroad, you sometimes have to be responsible for custom duties.

Fortunately, in your first order there was no need to pay for duties, however a second order was charged for it as regulations applies

Custom Duties regulations are strict especially in Canada and Europe.

We are sorry but as the URL page explains, a buyer is responsible for any custom duties.↵
↵
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We apologize any inconvenience that may have caused you.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Eddy Finn hippie gig bag、またの名をhippie bag、もしくはhootenanny bag。
こちらはかっこいいレトロな雰囲気のギグバッグで、あなたのウクレレをどこへでも持ち運ぶのに最適です。

Eddy Finn Ukulele Companyはただの素晴らしいウクレレとその関連商品を作るだけではなく、とてもユニークな会社です。
私たちは演奏者やコレクター向けの高品質のウクレレを、様々な種類の木から、求めやすい価格にて制作することにプライドを持っています。
また、長年標準的とされてきたウクレレ用木材も各種取り揃えています。
多くの種類の木材を提供できるため、とてもユニークなルックスとトーンをもつモデルをデザインすることができます。

私たちはEddy Finn will totallyを使うことが、あなたの生活を完璧に変えてしまうとは言っていません。

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Eddy Finn hippie gig bag、またの名をhippie bag、もしくはhootenanny bag。
こちらはかっこいいレトロな雰囲気のギグバッグで、あなたのウクレレをどこへでも持ち運ぶのに最適です。

Eddy Finn Ukulele Companyはただの素晴らしいウクレレとその関連商品を作るだけではなく、とてもユニークな会社です。
私たちは演奏者やコレクター向けの高品質のウクレレを、様々な種類の木から、お求めいただきやすい価格にて制作することにプライドを持っています。
また、長年標準的とされてきたウクレレ用木材も各種取り揃えています。
多くの種類の木材を提供できるため、とてもユニークなルックスとトーンをもつモデルをデザインすることができます。

私たちはEddy Finn will totallyを使うことが、あなたの生活を完璧に変えてしまうとは言っていません。

元の翻訳
You said that the product delivered to me was new. However, CD for demonstration use had been already opened. Actually, I intended to the CD for a gift and bought another new one. Could you kindly refund me $20 as the penalty? Otherwise, I will have to put a negative evaluation message to you.

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You said that the product delivered to me was new. However, CD for demonstration use had been already opened. Actually, I intended to use the CD for a gift. So I had to buy another new one. Could you kindly refund me $20 as the penalty? Otherwise, I will have to put a negative evaluation message to you.

元の翻訳
Could you appear on stage, playing the song A? Could we do brief session of the song smoothly after his appearance? Could you inform me of his recent music activity? Although we would like to realize his stage in Japan in X (Month), we are now searching condition of mass media during X season. which has Japanese long vacation. If it is realized, could we set some event to meet his fan and radio appearance? How many people in total will come if realized? Could we arrange his stage in XX(Month) if it cannot be arranged in X? Will you come directly from Paris, if realized?

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Could you appear on stage with playing the song A? Could we play a brief session of the song smoothly after his appearance? Could you inform me of his recent music activity? Although we would like to realize his stage in Japan in X (Month), we are now searching condition of mass media during X season. which has Japanese long vacation. If it is realized, could we set some event to meet his fan and radio appearance? How many people in total will come if realized? Could we arrange his stage in XX(Month) if it cannot be arranged in X? Will you come directly from Paris, if realized?

元の翻訳
You are supposed to puddle together with the first partner whom you are unfamiliar with, so you will naturally get along well.

The course is set to compete the finish time for each team.

You should think about the combination and something else, and meanwhile you will find your personality or character through the process.

You are seen to be on the frozen ground.

Wearing a helmet with a headlight on the forehead, you are planned to escape from the cave bravely.

Work out in the dark cave to communicate with each other, where you can't see anything.

You should rely on each other during the hard experience, so you will begin to consider what you can do on such occasions.

In a group race this competition can make your union power tight and strong.

Later on comes the mountain　bike race around Lake Kawaguchi in each team. Hang on!!!↵

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You are supposed to puddle together with the first partner whom you are unfamiliar with, so you will naturally get along well.

The course is set to compete the finish time for each team.

You should think about the combination and something else, and meanwhile you will find your personality or character through the process.

The ground below your foot would be frozen.

Wearing a helmet with a headlight on the forehead, you will escape from the cave bravely.

Work out in the dark cave to communicate with each other, where you can't see anything.

You should rely on each other during the hard experience, so you will begin to consider what you can do on such occasions.

In a group race this competition can make your union power tight and strong.

Later on comes the mountain　bike race around Lake Kawaguchi in each team. Hang on!!!