翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2013/10/05 21:07:11

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日本語

Aの曲を弾きながらステージに登場可能ですか?その流れでBの曲とは別に、彼とその曲の短いセッションをすることは可能ですか?彼の最近の活動を教えてくれませんか?こちらとしても是非○月に来日を実現したいのですが、その時期は大型連休と重なっているため、今メディアの状況を探ってます。実現した場合、ファンとのイベントやラジオ出演ができればと思ってますが問題ないですか?来日する場合は合計何人になりますか?○月が難しい場合、○月でも調整可能ですか?来日する場合はパリから直接ですか?

英語

Could you appear on stage, playing the song A? Could we do brief session of the song smoothly after his appearance? Could you inform me of his recent music activity? Although we would like to realize his stage in Japan in X (Month), we are now searching condition of mass media during X season. which has Japanese long vacation. If it is realized, could we set some event to meet his fan and radio appearance? How many people in total will come if realized? Could we arrange his stage in XX(Month) if it cannot be arranged in X? Will you come directly from Paris, if realized?

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makotomori26 45 京都大学の学生です。英語を話すのが好きで、翻訳という作業にも大変魅力を感じ...
makotomori26はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/10/07 00:55:15

元の翻訳
Could you appear on stage, playing the song A? Could we do brief session of the song smoothly after his appearance? Could you inform me of his recent music activity? Although we would like to realize his stage in Japan in X (Month), we are now searching condition of mass media during X season. which has Japanese long vacation. If it is realized, could we set some event to meet his fan and radio appearance? How many people in total will come if realized? Could we arrange his stage in XX(Month) if it cannot be arranged in X? Will you come directly from Paris, if realized?

修正後
Could you appear on stage with playing the song A? Could we play a brief session of the song smoothly after his appearance? Could you inform me of his recent music activity? Although we would like to realize his stage in Japan in X (Month), we are now searching condition of mass media during X season. which has Japanese long vacation. If it is realized, could we set some event to meet his fan and radio appearance? How many people in total will come if realized? Could we arrange his stage in XX(Month) if it cannot be arranged in X? Will you come directly from Paris, if realized?

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