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Cycling around Fuji-Goko (Five lakes in Fuji) is also recommended. You can enjoy 40km ride from the eastern lake, Yamanakako, to western lake, Motosuuko. There is various type of rental bike ready and you can select what you like.
There is four lakes of five in Fuji-Kawaguchiko area and you can enjoy water activity such as fishing and boat. Especially, Kawaguchiko (Kaguchi Lake) is highly recommended because you can rent and/or receive a lesson of a canoe there and enjoy the view of Mt. Fuji from the lake surface as much as you want.

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Cycling around Fuji-Goko (Five lakes in Fuji) is also recommended. You can enjoy a 40km ride from the eastern lake, Yamanakako, to the western lake, Motosuuko. There are various types of rental bikes ready and you can select what you like.
There are four out of the five lakes in the Fuji-Kawaguchiko area and you can enjoy water activities such as fishing and boating. In particular, Kawaguchiko (Kaguchi Lake) is highly recommended because you can rent and/or receive a canoing lesson there and enjoy the view of Mt. Fuji from the lake surface as much as you want.

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The path, called Ochudo, encircles the halfway point of Mt. Fuji. You must watch open-eyed when you look up Mt. Fuji and get a view of the surrounding area of Kawaguchiko form the path. However, it used to be a path for those who could not go for the top of Mt. Fuji. We are going to see plants there through the narrow forest line.

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The path, called Ochudo, encircles the halfway point of Mt. Fuji. You will be astonished when you look up at Mt. Fuji and get a view of the surrounding area of Lake Kawaguchi from the path down below. However, this used to be a path for those who could not go for the top of Mt. Fuji. You will see plants there through the narrow forest line.

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"Ochudo" is a trail lapping around the middle of Mt. Fuji.
Mt. Fuji that you can look up from there and the view around Lake Kawaguchi below your eyes are spectacular sights.
However, long time ago, this trail was for the people who could not aim to go to the top.
While you walk along the forest limit, you can also see the plants living in Mt. Fuji.

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"Ochudo" is a trail lapping around the middle of Mt. Fuji.
From there you will see spectacular sights. You can look up to Mt. Fuji and down below to the view around Lake Kawaguchi.
However, a long time ago, this trail was for the people who could not aim to go to the top.
While you walk along the forest boundaries you can also see the plants living on Mt. Fuji.

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I make invoices through the menu that I always use, however, it cannot process the payment that is made through your credit card.
I sent an email that contains two invoices created through another menu named "Request Money".
I tried it myself before, and it works, so I would like to ask you to do the payment through the above-mentioned.

Yes, I can do the arrangement for this base now. Delivery to US via EMS costs $*.
The ash body has a walnut colored finish, and it has black parts and black pick guard which makes the model look very cool!!

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I made the invoices through the menu that I always use, however, I cannot process the payment that was made through your credit card.
I sent an email that contains two invoices created through another menu called "Request Money".
I tried it myself before, and it works, so I would like to ask you to do the payment through the above-mentioned method.

Yes, I can do the arrangement for this base now. Delivery to the US via EMS costs $*.
The ash body has a walnut-colored finish, and it has black parts and a black pick guard that makes the model look very cool!!

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It is the first "inflatable concert hall" in the world that appeared in the park of Matsushima-town, Miyagi prefecture where heavily damage by the Great East Japan Earthquake. It is said that this structure is made from balloons coated with polyester materials. It is produced by an architect A and a British sculptor B. When blown up to the maximum, it boasts 18 m in height, 35 m in width, and accommodates 500 audiences. As a grand opening events, performances such as Kabuki will be held for two weeks from 27th of this month. Since it is movable, it can go around all over Japan and various events can be held in it.

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The first "inflatable concert hall" in the world appeared in a park in Matsushima, Miyagi Prefecture, which was heavily damaged by the Great East Japan Earthquake. It is said that this structure is made from balloons coated with polyester materials. It is produced by the architect A and the British sculptor B. When blown up to the maximum, it boasts 18 m in height, 35 m in width, and accommodates 500 guests. As a grand opening event, performances such as Kabuki will be held for two weeks from the 27th of this month. Since it is movable, it can go around all over Japan and various events can be held in it.

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Dear Mr. Troy Garretty,

How do you do?

I'm sorry this doesn't make clear sense.

What I wanted ask from you, is that I couldn't find a product called LR Baggs M1A Active, but I could only check LR Baggs M1 Active on the maker's homepage.
The items that Mr. Troy Garretty is selling is written LR Baggs M1A Active, and is this the same product as LR Baggs M1 Active?
Or is it totally different product?

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Dear Mr. Troy Garretty,

How do you do?

I'm sorry this doesn't make clear sense.

What I wanted ask from you is that I couldn't find a product called LR Baggs M1A Active and I could only find LR Baggs M1 Active on the maker's homepage.
The items that you are selling is written as LR Baggs M1A Active, but is this the same product as LR Baggs M1 Active?
Or is it a totally different product?

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Good Day. I am Tanaka who bought this product from you last time. I appreciate your support as I would like to but additional products this time.
I have completed the payment so please ship the products once you have completed the confirmation
In addition , it will greatly be appreciated if you can ensure that the products won't be damage.
Until then , I am looking forward for the arrival of the products.

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Good Day. I am Tanaka, I bought this product from you last time. I appreciate your support as I would like to buy additional products this time.
I have completed the payment so please ship the products once you have completed the confirmation.
In addition, it will greatly be appreciated if you can ensure that the products won't be damaged.
Until then, I am looking forward for the arrival of the products.

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At the night of 2nd, the teacher is going to tell me what Ranny discussed about.
Please wait for me to send you a message on 3rd.

I told the teachers that Ranny wants to invite them to Philippines.
They were very happy to hear that and would like to be there.

If they could, it is going to be for about a week from November 4th.
Do you think you can help them then?
If you will invite the teachers, they are going to arrange their schedule.

The teacher said you and your brother is going to be an important person for development in the future.
They are looking forward to see you next time.

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On the night of the 2nd, the teacher is going to tell me what Ranny discussed about.
Please wait for me to send you a message on the 3rd.

I told the teachers that Ranny wants to invite them to the Philippines.
They were very happy to hear that and would like to be there.

If they can, it is going to be for about a week from November 4th.
Do you think you can help them then?
If you will invite the teachers, they are going to arrange their schedule.

The teacher said you and your brother are going to be important people for development in the future.
They are looking forward to seeing you next time.

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I am sorry but I do not understand what you are trying to tell me.

Isn't the tracking number for one of your other items?

I did an investigation on my end and the tracking number i provided the other day was correct.

I have arranged for the shipment to be sent to the address you have posted in Amazon.

If the address is not correct, we won't be able to resolve it here

And as of now , the package seems to have arrived in Berlin.

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I am sorry but I do not understand what you are trying to tell me.

Do you mean to say that the tracking number isn't for one of your items?

I did an investigation on my end and the tracking number I provided the other day was correct.

I have arranged for the shipment to be sent to the address you have posted on Amazon.

If the address is not correct, we won't be able to resolve it here

And as of now , the package seems to have arrived in Berlin.

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My apologies, but I'm not quite sure I understand correctly what you are saying.

Do you mean to say that the tracking number we informed you is not for your package ?

After investigation we Are sure that this is the tracking number for your package.

I am now making arrangements for delivery to the address you registered in Amazon.

If this address is not the place where you want the product to be delivered, I regret to say that there is nothing we can do on our end.
As of now, it seems that the package is in Berlin.

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My apologies, but I'm not quite sure I understand correctly what you are saying.

Do you mean to say that the tracking number we told you is not for your package?

After investigation we are sure that this is the tracking number for your package.

I am now making arrangements for delivery to the address you registered on Amazon.

If this address is not the place where you want the product to be delivered, I regret to say that there is nothing we can do on our end.
As of now, it seems that the package is in Berlin.

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Thank you for the invoice. I will finalize everything and do the money transfer at the end of the month.

Were the items already shipped?

If it has yet to be shipped, I was hoping if you could send it together with the attached items
I think it won't be possible today right? If that's the case then we can do it next time.
I am thinking of prioritizing the selling of the following products this time. I've also posted a lot of information on the page.
I have also included an introduction for your company's brand.
(The Japanese people wants detailed information.)

It would be difficult to accept various opinions at the start
so we would like to ask you to please bear with us for the meantime.
The sales volume will definitely increase.
I would also like to ask for the sample price listing.

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Thank you for the invoice. I will finalize everything and do the money transfer at the end of the month.

Were the items already shipped?

If they have yet to be shipped, I was wondering if you could send them together with the attached items.
I think it won't be possible today, right? If that's the case then we can do it next time.
I am thinking of prioritizing the selling of the following products this time. I've also posted a lot of information on the page.
I have also included an introduction for your company's brand.
( Japanese people want detailed information.)

It would be difficult to accept various opinions at the start
so we would like to ask you to please bear with us for the meantime.
The sales volume will definitely increase.
I would also like to ask for a sample price listing.

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How was the stated amount displayed in the inbox calculated? This is the case for a few of the items and they vary greatly. I think these numbers are completely unreliable. I would like you to be more careful in writing these numbers. Also the displayed prices have clearly risen compared to your company's usual prices.

I would like you to correct the invoice as outlined below.

Regards,

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How was the stated amount displayed in the inbox calculated? A few of the items vary greatly. I think these numbers are completely unreliable. I would like you to be more careful in writing these numbers. Also the displayed prices have clearly risen compared to your company's usual prices.

I would like you to correct the invoice as outlined below.

Regards,

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All images and videos displayed on this page come under either of the following:
Media taken as personal recordings
Media under the Creative Commons licence
Media released with permission from the copyright holder

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All images and videos displayed on this page come under either one of the following:
Media taken as personal recordings
Media under the Creative Commons license
Media released with permission from the copyright holder

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I and Noboru Ueda and World GP Gp3 champion Kazuto Sakata↵
Used to be competing riders in Japan. Now I retired already, so I work in sales sector in Japan.
A company. There is an inquiry about products for sales.
I would like to direct business with your company.
The benefit is your company will get paid 15% commission. And 3% surcharge to pay the cash back site is no longer required.
Also, I hope to get a better discount because I purchase from your company more than 10 months.
I want to know the discount rate for the quantity of sales.↵

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Noboru Ueda and I, the World GP Gp3 Champion, Kazuto Sakata, used to be competing riders in Japan. Now we're already retired so we work in the sales sector in Japan.
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I have an inquiry about the products your company sells at O.
I would like to do direct business with your company, rather than going through O.
The benefits to this is the 15% commission paid to O and the 3% surcharge paid to cashback sites like △ would no longer be required.
Also, I hope to get a better discount because I purchase over 10 items per month from your company.
I would also like to know if there is a discount rate for purchasing a large quantity.

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I am sorry that there was a mistake this time. Also, thank you for getting in contact.
Tomorrow we will once again send your order.
Please keep the mistaken product as an apology.
If there is another person's order form attached, please destroy it.
I will contact you once we have sent the goods.

Thank you for your purchase the other day.
We feel that there has been a mistake with the product that has been delivered to you.
If you could please confirm this then we will send your order.
Thank you and sorry for an inconvenience this may have caused.

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I am sorry that there was a mistake this time. Also, thank you for getting in contact with me.
Tomorrow we will once again send your order.
Please keep the mistaken product as an apology.
If there is another person's order form attached, please destroy it.
I will contact you once we have sent the goods.

Thank you for your purchase from the other day.
We feel that there has been a mistake with the product that has been delivered to you.
If you could please confirm this then we will send your order.
Thank you and sorry for an inconvenience this may have caused.

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We can advertise your lessons directly to students for free.
Today, T7 released a feature where students can receive an alert email for lessons which corresponds with a train station. Will you register this lesson with T7?

If you register your lesson with T7, T7 will find students automatically which suit your lesson criteria.
This is how we can advertise your lesson directly.

There is a summary of the alert email for lessons feature listed below.

Students will register stations they wish to have lessons at through T7.

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We can advertise your lessons directly to students for free.
Today, T7 released a feature where students can receive an alert email for lessons which corresponds with a train station. Will you register this lesson with T7?

If you register your lesson with T7, T7 will find students automatically who suit your lesson criteria.
This is how we can advertise your lesson directly.

There is a summary of the alert email feature for lessons listed below.

Students will register stations they wish to have lessons at through T7.

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If you register your lesson with T7, it will automatically search for stations that are close where you are giving a lesson.
Stations will be organized to how close they are to the students preferences and if there is a match, students will receive an email about your lesson.
Just by registering your lesson with T7, you can gather students to your lessons for free.
It will also be able to tell you the aspirations of students who are interested in your lessons.
It is easy to gather students as you can organize a lesson while looking at the students preferences, such as what day and what time.

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If you register your lesson with T7, it will automatically search for stations that are close to where you are giving a lesson.
Stations will be organized by how close they are to the students preferences and, if there is a match, students will receive an email about your lesson.
Just by registering your lesson with T7, you can gather students to your lessons for free.
It will also be able to tell you the aspirations of students who are interested in your lessons.
It is easy to gather students as you can organize a lesson while looking at the students preferences, such as what day and what time they want.

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"Sweet" illumination filled in a jar.
These are lights.
Candy-shaped lights have been filled in a jar.
LED lights have been used so that they don't become hot.
AAA batteries are needed. The switch is on the lid.
Hanging types are also available.

A white bear having a soak in Japanese sake.
This is a cup.
Inside the cup is the white bear Kumagoro.
He lives in this cup.
He seems to want to bathe....so you fill the cup up with Sake.
A version where he is showing his tummy is also available.

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"Sweet" illumination filled in a jar.
These are lights.
Candy-shaped lights have been filled in a jar.
LED lights have been used so that they don't become hot.
AAA batteries are needed. The switch is on the lid.
Hanging types are also available.

A white bear having a soak in Japanese sake.
This is a cup.
Inside the cup is the white bear Kumagoro.
He lives in this cup.
He seems to want to bathe....so you fill the cup up with sake.
A version where he is showing his tummy is also available.

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This is a bag that stretches.
This is a bag.
Usually it is thin.
When you put things into it, it stretches.
It is made from material that stretches moderately well.
What you put in the bag is not limited by the shape of the bag as the bag changes its shape in accordance with what you put into it.

Fragrance trapped into a milk bottle.
This is an air freshener.
We have put the air freshener liquid into a milk bottle.
Its smells of flowers.
It is closed with a lid.
The scent lasts for 2 months and then gradually the air freshener inside becomes less and less.
After use, you can use the bottle as a vars or a pen stand.

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This is a bag that stretches.
This is a bag.
Usually it is thin.
When you put things into it, it stretches.
It is made from material that stretches moderately well.
What you put in the bag is not limited by the shape of the bag as the bag changes its shape in accordance with what you put into it.

Fragrance trapped into a milk bottle.
This is an air freshener.
We have put the air freshener liquid into a milk bottle.
It smells of flowers.
It is closed with a lid.
The scent lasts for 2 months and then gradually the air freshener inside becomes less and less.
After use, you can use the bottle as a vase or a pen stand.

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I understand how you feel, however this item as written on the item page is a Japanese product. Therefore there is only a Japanese user's manual provided. I hope for your understanding.

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I understand how you feel, however this item is written on the item page as a Japanese product. Therefore, there is only a Japanese user's manual provided. I hope for your understanding.

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Do I need to pay keeping charge? I ask you to disposal the item.

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Do I need to pay for a storage fee? I'm only asking for you to dispose of the item.

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Your company sells many catching and high-quality products. We will consider measurements which don't bother you, so we appreciate it if you could keep trading with us.
If you happen to know any contact information about tour department, it would help us a lot.
Thank you very much for your time.

Than you for your response.
We are now contacting to our supplier.
We are sorry to have bothered you.

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Your company sells many eye-catching and high-quality products. We will consider methods which don't cause you any trouble, so we would appreciate it if you could keep trading with us.
If you happen to know of the contact information for the tour department, it would help us a lot if you could pass that along.
Thank you very much for your time.

Than you for your response.
We are now contacting our supplier.
We are sorry to have caused you any inconvenience.