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評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2013/09/09 21:46:09

413kiraline_
413kiraline_ 50 Am a bilingual Japanese, fluent in En...
日本語

のびるバッグ。
これはバッグです。
普段は薄いです。
物を入れると伸びます。
ほどよくのびる素材でできています。
バッグありきではなく、入れるものにバッグが合わせてくれます。


牛乳瓶に香りを閉じ込めた。
これは芳香剤です。
牛乳瓶に入っています。
花の香りがします。
フタがしてあります。
香りは2ヶ月ほどもちます。だんだんと芳香剤が減っていきます。
使用後のビンは、花器やペン立てとして使えます。

英語

This is a bag that stretches.
This is a bag.
Usually it is thin.
When you put things into it, it stretches.
It is made from material that stretches moderately well.
What you put in the bag is not limited by the shape of the bag as the bag changes its shape in accordance with what you put into it.

Fragrance trapped into a milk bottle.
This is an air freshener.
We have put the air freshener liquid into a milk bottle.
Its smells of flowers.
It is closed with a lid.
The scent lasts for 2 months and then gradually the air freshener inside becomes less and less.
After use, you can use the bottle as a vars or a pen stand.

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katrina_z 68 こんにちは!はじめまして、チェコ在住のアメリカ英語のネイティブです。 日...
katrina_zはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/26 05:41:39

元の翻訳
This is a bag that stretches.
This is a bag.
Usually it is thin.
When you put things into it, it stretches.
It is made from material that stretches moderately well.
What you put in the bag is not limited by the shape of the bag as the bag changes its shape in accordance with what you put into it.

Fragrance trapped into a milk bottle.
This is an air freshener.
We have put the air freshener liquid into a milk bottle.
Its smells of flowers.
It is closed with a lid.
The scent lasts for 2 months and then gradually the air freshener inside becomes less and less.
After use, you can use the bottle as a vars or a pen stand.

修正後
This is a bag that stretches.
This is a bag.
Usually it is thin.
When you put things into it, it stretches.
It is made from material that stretches moderately well.
What you put in the bag is not limited by the shape of the bag as the bag changes its shape in accordance with what you put into it.

Fragrance trapped into a milk bottle.
This is an air freshener.
We have put the air freshener liquid into a milk bottle.
It smells of flowers.
It is closed with a lid.
The scent lasts for 2 months and then gradually the air freshener inside becomes less and less.
After use, you can use the bottle as a vase or a pen stand.

Very minimal errors.

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