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元の翻訳
純羊皮大衣（含藏羊毛）

飽含空氣的羊毛皮具有優秀的隔熱性，保暖程度大到連極寒地區的居民也在使用！衣襟周圍使用具有可愛捲毛的藏羊毛。我們因與製造商合作才能以這個價格為客戶提供這個商品！

質地＝［整體］羊皮　［衣襟周圍及前方豎起部分］毛皮（藏羊毛）　［襯裡］無　前方開有拉鍊及兩個口袋

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純羊皮大衣（含藏羊毛）

飽含空氣的羊毛皮具有優良的隔熱性，其優良的保暖程度讓極寒地帶的居民也使用！衣襟周圍使用具有可愛捲毛的藏羊毛。我們因與製造商合作才能以這個價格為客戶提供這個商品！

材質＝［整體］羊皮　［衣襟周圍及前方豎起部分］毛皮（藏羊毛）　［襯裡］無　前方開有拉鍊及兩個口袋

元の翻訳
It may be difficult for the parcel to reach you on the designated date if you want to receive the product as soon as possible.

I will be on a business trip from tomorrow so the shipping will be later than it usually be. Moreover, because it is Christmas season, it is expected that the delivery time would be longer than it usually takes.

The scheduled shipping date is December 16. If it does not suit you, may I aske to to cancel this order please?

If you order again after you come back from the trip, I can promise you that I will ship the product as soon as I receive the order.

Thank you very much.

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It may be difficult for the parcel to reach you on the designated date if you want to receive the product as soon as possible.

I will be on a business trip from tomorrow so the shipping will be later than it usually is. Moreover, because it is Christmas season, it is expected that the delivery time would be longer than it usually takes.

The scheduled shipping date is December 16. If it does not suit you, may I ask to cancel this order please?

If you order again after you come back from the trip, I can promise you that I will ship the product as soon as I receive the order.

Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
I have understood the situation. Our purchasing personnel for China will contact you tomorrow. I have informed that personnel on all necessary information so please wait for his contact.

Thank you very much.

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I understand the situation. Our purchasing personnel for China will contact you tomorrow. I have informed that personnel on all necessary information so please wait for his contact.

Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
This product is designed to be used within Japan. Depends on the user's location, a plug adapter and a transformer may be necessary. I can send out the plug adapter and the transformer together with the product if you include the extra costs for them in the payment. If you have any question on the power please inquire before bidding.

In addition, the manual for this product is written in Japanese and other features such as operation buttons are also written in Japanese. Please take this into consideration before bidding. Thank you very much.

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This product is designed to be used within Japan. Depending on the user's location, a plug adapter and a transformer may be necessary. I can send out the plug adapter and the transformer together with the product if you include the extra costs for them in the payment. If you have any questions on the power please inquire before bidding.

In addition, the manual for this product is written in Japanese and other features such as operation buttons are also written in Japanese. Please take this into consideration before bidding. Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
How long will you keep the products?
In order to reduce the delivery costs, could you please pack them together and send it in one box?

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How long will you keep the products?
In order to reduce the delivery costs, could you please pack them together and send them in one box?