JungYeon Jang (jungyeon_92) — もらったレビュー

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Is this translation task different from "MASCHINE 2.2" received from Agito?

Also, can we delay the deadline of "MACHINE 2.2" of Agito and "Firmware 20.11.2014" to 26?

If "141121_NI_Maschine_2_2_Press_Release_wmdoc" is a different translation task from Agito, we can manage then if you delay the deadline to 27.

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Is this translation task different from "MASCHINE 2.2" received from Agito?

Also, can we delay the deadline of "MACHINE 2.2" of Agito and "Firmware 20.11.2014" to 26?

If "141121_NI_Maschine_2_2_Press_Release_wmdoc" is a different translation task from Agito, we can manage if you delay the deadline to 27.

元の翻訳
The special acoustic session movie of track 3 "Fureau dakede ~Always with you~/ IT'S THE RIGHT TIME / Bring It Down" has been confirmed to be included.

Exclusive acoustic sessions from DM Band to Sho Kamijo, Gakushi and Yoshio Kishida will perform.

Please enjoy!

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The special acoustic session movie of track 3 "Fureau dakede ~Always with you~/ IT'S THE RIGHT TIME / Bring It Down" has been confirmed to be included.

Exclusive acoustic sessions from DM Band to Sho Kamijo, Gakushi and Yoshio Kishida will perform.

Don't miss it!

元の翻訳
● Please bring your identification card on which your photo is attached and membership card for entrance.
※ Entrance can be rejected if you come without both of the cards.

Additionally, we will inform you the details about information including ticket booking from midday of November 12 (Wed).

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● Please bring your identification card with your photo attached and a membership card for entrance.
※ Entrance will be rejected if you come without both cards.

Additionally, we will inform you the details about information including ticket booking from midday of November 12 (Wed).

元の翻訳
[What is "Himitsu no Jyoshiryoku?"]

Inviting diverse guests, Urata and Shigeru share their opinions regarding themes such as fashion, make-up, gourmet, daily life, dating.

Also, this internet broadcasting program exposes the secret of woman power with much wit and impression which is uncommon in TV programs.

As a guest, AAA Chiaki Ito will appear on the first show.

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[What is "Himitsu no Jyoshiryoku?"]

Inviting diverse guests, Urata and Shigeru share their opinions regarding themes such as fashion, make-up, gourmet, daily life, dating.

Also, this internet broadcasting program exposes the secret of woman power with much wit and impression which are uncommon in TV programs.

As a guest, AAA Chiaki Ito will appear on the first show.

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Is it true that if I purchase 10 items at once, the total price is discounted to $340? $340 for 10 items? Not $680?

If I purchase 10 items, are they packaged divided into two boxes (5 items for each) or just in one box? I prefer to get the items divided into two boxes. Could you do that for me?

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Is it true that if I purchase 10 items at once, the total price is discounted to $340? $340 for 10 items? Not $680?

If I purchase 10 items, are they packaged divided into two boxes (5 items for each) or 10 items all in one box? I prefer to get the items divided into two boxes of 5 items each. Could you do that for me?