Jasmine (jasmine_66) — 付けたレビュー

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Thank you for your inquiry.
The comic shares 44.00$ of the price of this set so the price of remaining items is 76.00$ which is the subtraction of 44.00$ from the total price of 120.00$.
The shipping charge becomes cheaper for weight of the comic. If you would accept this, I will close the bidding earlier and send you the invoice of the 76.00$ with the shipping charge, but how would you think about it.
Please be informed that I will not be able to close the bidding earlier if there is a bid.
I will be waiting for your replay. Thank you for your consideration.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
The comic shares $44.00 of the total price of $120.00 in this set so the remaining price is $76.00 which you can get after subtracting $44.00 from the total price of $120.00.
The shipping charge becomes cheaper if it is only for the comic. If you would accept this, I will close the bidding earlier and send you the invoice of $76.00 and also the shipping charge. What do you think about it?
Please be informed that I will not be able to close the bidding earlier if there is a bid.
I will be waiting for your replay. Thank you for your consideration.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
The comic in this set accounts for 44 dollars of the total value. So if you subtract the 44 dollars from the 120 dollar total, the price will be 76 dollars. The shipping costs will go down based on the weight of that comic. If that's ok, then I'll close the auction early and send you an invoice for 76 dollars plus shipping. What do you think?
Please understand that I cannot close auction early in the case that a bid comes in.
I'm looking forward to your response.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
The comic in this set is 44 dollars of the total value. So if you subtract 44 dollars from the total value of 120 dollars, there will be 76 dollars left. The shipping costs will be less if it is only for the comic. If that's ok, then I'll close the auction early and send you an invoice of 76 dollars plus shipping costs. What do you think?
Please understand that I cannot close auction early in the case that a bid comes in.
I'm looking forward to your response.

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This is early morning here in Japan. Yes, I do love furoshiki,too. They are wrapping cloths and very cute. The one in the photo is rather pale in color but it is very hard to capture its purplish tone.

I only have on-line shop right now and some day, I'm looking forward to opening a store.
I have lots of things I want to challenge but I'm busy with taking care of my baby now. I would love to visit Rome one day. Every time I watch a travel channel, I feel like visiting there.

As for the care, they can be washed in a washing machine. You may iron them, too, but do not bleach them. Do not tumble dry or leave them soaked in water for a long time.

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it is early morning here in Japan. Yes, I do love furoshiki too. They are very cute wrapping cloths. The one in the photo is rather pale in color because it was very hard to capture its purplish tone.

I only do business on my on-line shop right now but some day I want to open my own store.
I have lots of things I want to challenge but I'm busy with taking care of my baby now. I would love to visit Rome one day. Every time I watch a travel channel, I feel like visiting there.

As for the laundry instruction, the clothes can be washed in a washing machine. You may iron them, too, but do not bleach them. Do not tumble dry or leave them soaked in water for a long time.

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Why don't you think about it once xx's product is on sale?

Do you mean my part list? Sorry if I misunderstood.
I post the following parts, just in case. I put ★ for parts I highly recommend
(Only ones available on the market).

I saw the video. It's great that you have friends who enjoy the same hobby!
Please check out my videos as I have uploaded under the same ID.

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Why don't you think about it once xx's product is on sale?

Did you mean my machine parts list when you mentioned a parts list? I am sorry if I misunderstood.
I list the parts I am using at the moment as below, just in case. I put ★ for parts I highly recommend.
(Only the ones available on the market).

I saw the video. It's great that you have friends who enjoy the same hobby as you!
Please check out my videos as I have uploaded them under the same ID.

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Why don't you think about it again after the product has been released from ()?

When you say the list of parts, do you mean the one for my machine? I'm sorry if I misunderstood you.
I will list the parts I've used below, just in case.
I 'll have a ★ next to the parts I really recommend.
(They are all commercial products.)

I have seen the video! I envy that you have so many friends to enjoy your hobby with !!!
If you have the time, please check my videos too, I've uploaded them using the same ID.

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Why don't you think about it again after the product has been released from ()?

When you mentioned the list of parts, did you mean the one for my machine? I'm sorry if I misunderstood you.
I will list the parts I've used below, just in case.
I 'll mark a ★ on the parts I really recommend.
(They are all commercial products.)

I have seen the video! It is great that you have so many friends to enjoy your hobby with !!!
If you have time, please check my videos too, I've uploaded them under the same ID.

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Why don't you think about it again once (manufacturer's name) puts the product on the market?

When you say the parts list, do you mean the parts list of my machine? Sorry if I am wrong, but I am attaching below the list of the parts that are used just in case. I have "starred" the parts that I particularly recommend. (Just note that those listed are only parts that are available on the market.)

I saw the video! Its great to have many friends to share the same hobby with!!!! I also have some videos uploaded under the same ID, so please take a look at them if you'd like.

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Why don't you think about it again once (manufacturer's name) puts the product on the market?

When you mentioned the parts list, did you mean the parts list of my machine? I am sorry if I made any mistake and caused you inconvenience. I am attaching the list of the parts that are used at the moment just in case. I have marked stars on the parts that I particularly recommend. (Just note that those listed are only parts that are available on the market.)

I saw the video! It is great to have many friends to share the same hobby with!!!! I also have some videos uploaded under the same ID, so please take a look at them if you'd like to.

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5 translators have voted for this translation.

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I completed the return item procedure at Amazon.
As I have attached a return label, please ask UPS to pick up the return item.
If there is anything not clear, please let me know.

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I have completed the return procedure on Amazon.
As I have attached a return label to the email, please ask UPS to pick up the returned item.
If there is anything unclear, please let me know.

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I have finished the procedure for returning on Amazon.
A label for the return is attached to the email, so please ask UPS to pick up the product.
If you have any questions please feel free to contact us.

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I have finished the return procedure on Amazon.
A label for the return is attached to the email, so please ask UPS to pick up the product.
If you have any questions please feel free to contact us.

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1.Magnex 公司是亚洲区Microgen外商公司的供应商，是世界上最大食品防腐剂制造商，并且获得专业处理新型流感丶爱滋病丶肝炎丶和142种超级细菌的美国EPA的认可，目前正与北京科技公司协商商业合作协定，内容有关在中国的贩售丶行销和广告业务。协定由双方拟定。

2.合作协定细节必须各自协商。

3.协议文件地须由双方面拟订且各自拥有其副本。

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1.Magnex 公司是亚洲区Microgen外商公司的供应商，是世界上第一间食品消毒剂制造商，并且获得专业处理猪流感丶爱滋病丶肝炎丶和142种超级细菌的美国EPA的认可，目前正与北京科技公司协商商业合作协定，内容有关在中国的贩售丶行销和广告业务。协定由双方拟定。

2.合作协定细节必须各自协商。

3.协议文件地须由双方面拟订且各自拥有其副本。

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I think that the package has been lost in the mail. I received a message from DHL saying that they hadn't received it.

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I think that the package has been lost in the mail because I received a message from DHL saying that they haven't received it.

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Do you mean you lost the baggage?
I got the message from DHL that they didn't get the baggage itself.

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Is it true that you lost the baggage?
I got the message from DHL that they didn't get the baggage itself.

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I tried to ship the items which I had purchased from your company the day before to Japan through a transportation company in U.S.

But the process needs documents due to importation control in U.S.

The following content is written in the e-mail from the transportation company.

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I provided the document in the attached file against the content.

Then I received the reply as following.

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There are more needed documents.

If the items continue to be kept more, they will be shipped back to your company.

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I tried to ship the items which I had purchased from your company before to Japan through a forwarding company in U.S.

But I need documents for the process due to export controls in U.S.

The following content is written in the e-mail from the forwarding company.

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I provided the document as an attached file to the email.

Then I received the reply as following.

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There are more documents required for the process.

If the items continue to be kept longer, they will be shipped back to your company.

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I was thinking about sending the item I bought from you the other day via US forwarding company.
However, due to US export regulation I need documents.

Below is the email sent from the forwarding company.

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I submitted the documents in the attached file for this.
Then there was a reply as below.

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It looks like I still need further documents.
If it's kept longer, it will be returned to your company.

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I was thinking about sending the item I bought from you the other day to Japan via a forwarding company in the US.
However, due to US export regulations I need documents to send it.

The text below is the email sent from the forwarding company.

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For reply, I attached the documents required to the email.
Then there was a reply as below.

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It looks like I still need further documents for it.
If it's kept longer, it will be returned to your company.

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Healing the trauma needs doctors help. The child who is damaged from divorce of their parents has a very complex emotion and pain which he or she can not express to their friends or others.
Doctor should be able to open up their mind, really listen to the child's pain and thoughts,and give him or her advise to support their life, so that the child could help themselves more.
If doctor notice the changes of the child's behavior, such as being neglectful for homework or also being disobedient, doctor needs to inform that immediately to the child's parents. ↵
Doctor and parents need to help each other to heal the child's wound.
They can ask for help to administration that assists financial problem if they need to do so.
Divorce of a couple who has a child have to be prudent and they should ask advice from not only friends but administrations and organizations so that they can avoid their child have deep wound. ↵

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A support from a teacher is very important for a child who is traumatized by parents' divorce. The child who is traumatized by the divorce of his/her parents usually has a very complex feeling and emotional pain which he or she can not express to his/her friends.
Teachers should be able to help the child to recover from the trauma by really listening to the child's feelings and thoughts and by giving him or her advise to support their life so that the child could pull themselves together and get better.
If teachers notice some changes of the child's behaviors, such as neglecting homework or being disobedient, they need to contact the child's parents and try to deal with the problems with the parents.
Parents can ask some administration agencies that assist financial problem for help if they are suffering from financial problems.
Parents should deal with their divorce carefully especially if they have children. It is important that they ask some advice from not only friends but professional organizations to minimize the negative effects of a divorce to their children.

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It is necessary for the PTSD an assistance of the teachers. The thought of the separation of the parents is complicated for the children and it is so difficult to talk about it with his friends. They can bear up if the teachers often hear his worries and give him advises. If the teaches notice changes such as the children don't do their homework or they take disobedient attitude, the teachers tell their parents about that and get over the problems with both the teachers and the parents.
They can ask the Civil Service for an aid if they are in economic troubles. The divorce must be careful if they have children and it is important that they must ask people as much as possible and the agency for cooperation so that the bruises of their children get less.

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It is important for a child who has PTSD to get an assistance from the teachers. The parents' divorce may bring about complicate feelings for the child and he/ she usually will have a hard time talking about it with friends. However, if teachers could listen to the child's feelings and give him/her some advice, the child would be able to get better and overcome it. If the teaches notice some changes of the child such as neglecting his/her homework or showing disobedient attitude, the teachers should contact the parents and try to deal with the problems with together.
The parents can ask the government agency for help if they are in economic troubles. A divorce must be carefully dealt with especially if the parents have children and it is important that they ask other people as well as some professional organizations for help to minimize the negative effects of divorce for children.

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Teachers should help the student overcome emotional trauma. The child has very comlicating feeling about her parents' divorce, and she would never be able to talk about it with her friends. If teachers listen to their students' distress, and give her an advice, the student would be able to do her best. If the student stops submitting homowork, or gets aggresive, teachers should tell her parents, and deal with her problems with her parents. If they are suffering economically, they could also ask help to a government agency. If you get divorce, and you have children, you should be very careful for doing it, and ask help to as many people and organizations as possible in order to minimize children's trauma.

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Teachers should help the student overcome emotional trauma. The child usually has very complicate feelings about her/his parents' divorce, and usually she/he won't be able to talk about it with her friends. If teachers could listen to the student's distress, and give her/him some advice, the student would be able to overcome it and get better. If the student started to stop submitting homework or started to get aggressive, teachers should contact the parents, and deal with the problems with the parents. If they are suffering economically, they could also ask a government agency for help. It is important to deal with a divorce carefully since the trauma it causes for a child is enormous and in order to minimize the negative effects of divorce on a child, it is also important to ask for help from many people and as well as some professional organizations.

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