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評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2013/11/21 21:52:24

topolino
topolino 50 大学で5年間イタリア語を学びました。 現在は仕事の関係でオーストラリアに...
日本語

心的外傷には先生の助けが必要です。両親の離別に対する子どもの思いは複雑で、友達にはとても相談で きません。先生が日頃から子どもの悩みを聞き、助言すれば子どもも頑張れるはず。宿題を出さなくなった、反抗的な態度になった、などの変化があれば親に知 らせ、先生と親が一緒に手を組んで乗り越えていくのです。
 経済的に困った時には行政機関に頼ることもできます。子どもがいる場合の離婚は慎重に、そしてできるだけ多くの人や機関に協力を求め、子どもの受ける傷を少なくすることが大切です。

英語

It is necessary for the PTSD an assistance of the teachers. The thought of the separation of the parents is complicated for the children and it is so difficult to talk about it with his friends. They can bear up if the teachers often hear his worries and give him advises. If the teaches notice changes such as the children don't do their homework or they take disobedient attitude, the teachers tell their parents about that and get over the problems with both the teachers and the parents.
They can ask the Civil Service for an aid if they are in economic troubles. The divorce must be careful if they have children and it is important that they must ask people as much as possible and the agency for cooperation so that the bruises of their children get less.

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jasmine_66はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/12/18 16:47:10

元の翻訳
It is necessary for the PTSD an assistance of the teachers. The thought of the separation of the parents is complicated for the children and it is so difficult to talk about it with his friends. They can bear up if the teachers often hear his worries and give him advises. If the teaches notice changes such as the children don't do their homework or they take disobedient attitude, the teachers tell their parents about that and get over the problems with both the teachers and the parents.
They can ask the Civil Service for an aid if they are in economic troubles. The divorce must be careful if they have children and it is important that they must ask people as much as possible and the agency for cooperation so that the bruises of their children get less.

修正後
It is important for a child who has PTSD to get an assistance from the teachers. The parents' divorce may bring about complicate feelings for the child and he/ she usually will have a hard time talking about it with friends. However, if teachers could listen to the child's feelings and give him/her some advice, the child would be able to get better and overcome it. If the teaches notice some changes of the child such as neglecting his/her homework or showing disobedient attitude, the teachers should contact the parents and try to deal with the problems with together.
The parents can ask the government agency for help if they are in economic troubles. A divorce must be carefully dealt with especially if the parents have children and it is important that they ask other people as well as some professional organizations for help to minimize the negative effects of divorce for children.

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