Khanh (huuhung) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
1. Today, I shipped the product. I shipped Japanese candy which foreigner is interested in. I think it will arrive within 10 days. I also sent a sticker of AAA of bicycle shop of my resorting. When looking at the Western style clothes I can see that there is colder than Tokyo.
2. This week, Is the owner of BBB? I will go to Japan from US because of the business trip. I also came the cafe of my friendly neighbor.

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1. Today, I shipped the product. I shipped Japanese candy which foreigner is interested in. I think it will arrive within 10 days. I also sent a sticker of AAA of bicycle shop of my resorting. When looking at the Western style clothes I can see that there is colder than Tokyo.
2. This week, The owner of BBB? arrived I will go to Japan from US because of the business trip. He also came the cafe of my friendly neighbor.

元の翻訳
1.
There are 2 kinds of wireless module zigbee edition and wifi edition
It is said that Gateway is required using zigbee only.
When using wifi edition, Gateway is not necessary, it is connected to the access point directly.
At present condition, It is prerequisite to set up the password and SSID of access point to the software of Module
Therefore, I have taken the method of installing a set of paired wireless router in advanced
I am checking the simpler method than WPS for the next Module.

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1.
There are 2 kinds of wireless module: zigbee edition and wifi edition
It is said that Gateway is required only when you use zigbee.
When you use wifi edition, Gateway is not necessary, it is connected to the access point directly.
At present condition, It is prerequisite to set up the password and SSID of access point to the software of Module
Therefore, I have taken the method of installing a set of paired wireless router in advanced
I am thinking about a better and simpler method than WPS for the next Module.

元の翻訳
Thank you for buying A
I am very sorry , but today We shipped on SAL flight by Japan post.
The customer has paid the postage for option that selected EMS
We will refund immediately 23 USD for postage option
It takes around 2 weeks to arrive Australia by SAL flight so please keep patient more for the item arrival
Tracking number is AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa
Sorry for bothering you so much

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Thank you for buying A
I am very sorry , but today We shipped on SAL flight by Japan post.
The customer has paid the postage for option that selected EMS
We will refund immediately 23 USD for postage option
It takes around 2 weeks to arrive Australia by SAL flight, so please keep patient more for the item arrival
Tracking number is AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa
Sorry for bothering you so much

元の翻訳
Hello, I am very happy because I can buy such a wonderful product.
Please send me the total amount
Please describe 100 Euro in the Invoice for shipping
It is just for tariff counter-plan
Thank you and best regards

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Hello, I am very happy because I can buy such a wonderful product.
Please send me the total amount
Please describe 100 Euro in the shipping invoice
It is just for tariff counter-plan
Thank you and best regards

元の翻訳
Regarding to the order,I am so sorry but I can not accompany your request
I will contact you when it was able to deliver rose earlier than December 11.
Regarding to the order on 1st Dec, I heard that it is canceled once.
sincerely, I am so sorry for bothering you thing time
From now on, hope to receive your support
Kind regards

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Regarding to the order,I am so sorry but I can not accompany your request
I will contact you when it was able to deliver rose earlier than December 11.
Regarding to the order on 1st Dec, I heard that it is canceled once.
Sincerely, I am so sorry for bothering you this time
From now on, I hope to receive your support
Kind regards

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact.
I understand the contents you told me.
In case the product arrive to me after you deal with the refund you made, I will contact you as soon as possible when I receive the product.
Then, I promise to you about giving back the refunded amount

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Thank you for your contact.
I understand the contents you told me.
In case the product arrives to me after you deal with the refund you made, I will contact you as soon as possible when I receive the product.
Then, I promise to you about giving back the refunded amount

元の翻訳
I want to confirm about one thing in hurry.
It is about the life of the battery.
When I assume the resistance of the skin with 1MΩ, set the volume at the MAX and use continuously (Summary, Until it it no battery anymore), How long the battery last?

I am waiting for your prompt action

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I want to confirm about one thing in hurry.
It is about the life of the battery.
When I assume the resistance of the skin with 1MΩ, set the volume at the MAX and use continuously (Summary, Until it it no battery anymore), How long does the battery last?

I am waiting for your prompt action

元の翻訳
thank you for sending me the invoice
I have checked the contents.
The product of 1 which have color of.. on the website.
Could I purchase it?
If it is possible, I want to buy 1 item
I wanted to buy the product of **which have color of cartridge and the color of body *** 1 item per kind of product of 2 &3 but could I change them?
The amount in the invoice you sent me and in the invoice which recorded when log in the web is different, So which is the correct? I want to pay as soon as possible
Thank you and best regards

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Thank you for sending me the invoice.
I have checked the contents.
The product 1 comes in ＊＊color on the website.
Could I purchase it?
If it is possible, I want to buy one.
As for the items 2 & 3, I would like to buy one of each in **for the main body and **for the cartridge but could I change my order?
The amount in the invoice you sent me and that on the invoice which I got by logging in the website are different. So which is correct? I want to pay as soon as possible.
Thank you and best regards,

元の翻訳
Hello
Thank you for your purchasing
Has the goods arrived?↵
It seems that it has arrived when you check the tracking number which has been sent to you.
I will send the tracking number again so please check at your nearly office.
Thank you for your contact.
My products is all sent from Japan.
Do you interest in any items

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Hello,
Thank you for purchasing. [or "Thank you for your purchase"]
Has the goods arrived? [S-V agreement]↵
I checked the tracking number I sent you, and
I will send the tracking number again so please check at your nearly office [nearly office?].
Thank you for contacting.
My products is all sent from Japan. [S-V agreement]
Do you interest in any items? [Ungrammatical]