Khanh (huuhung) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for your cooperation.
How about the condition of the Mayones Guitar you bought last day?
Is there any guitar that you are looking for or interested in?
We will also find the product which not be displayed on eBay.
It's sure that it does not matter even just talking so we will be happy if you could call us.
So, have a great day!

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Thank you for your cooperation.
How about the condition of the Mayones Guitar you bought the other day?
Is there any guitar that you are looking for or interested in?
We will also find products, which are not listed on eBay.
It's sure that it does not matter even just talking so we will be happy if you could call us [unclear].
So, have a great day!

元の翻訳
You called because you want to do something, don't you?
What is the main product?
Where is these product mainly purchased?
How to ship?
How long does it take until shipping?
How much is the average price of the product?

I called becasue I want to sell a lot of Japan good prodcut.
The main product of my business are camera, home appliances.
These products are mainly purchased from home appliances stores in Japan.
About the shipment, because there is one employee so the emplyoee will ship via Japan post.
About the day until the shipping, I am planing around 3-5 days.
The average price of product is planned 20.000-30.000 JPY

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You called because you want to do something, don't you?
What is the main product?
Where is the product mainly purchased from?
How to ship?
How long does it take until dispatching?
How much is the average price of the product?

I called becasue I want to sell a lot of Japanese good prodcuts.
The main product of my business are cameras, and home appliances.
These products are mainly purchased from home appliances stores in Japan.
About the shipment, because there is one employee so the emplyoee will ship via the Japan post.
About the day until the dispatching, I am planing for around 3-5 days.
The average price of the product is planned at 20.000-30.000 JPY

元の翻訳
Did you check the email I sent to you last day regarding to the request materials?
I will be waiting for reply about the offer when you check the email.
Thank you and best regards.

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Have you checked the email I sent you the other day regarding the requested materials?
I will be waiting for a reply about the quote when you check the email.
Thank you and best regards.

元の翻訳
I sent email to you on FEB 2nd, but I have not received your reply yet so I send again. Please until this weekend, please cancel the order via Paypal on 2015 JAN 6th and make a refund. I am waiting for your reply.

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I sent an email to you on Feb. 2nd, but since I have not received your reply yet I am sending it again. Please cancel the order, made via Paypal on Jan. 6, 2015, and issue a refund by this weekend. I am waiting for your reply.

元の翻訳
貴方の長い賞味一番良い期限のグーズをプチプチで梱包して私のEbay住所に発送いただけましょうか？
そのグーズは３－４年間に要ります。ありがとうございます！お気軽に無料ギフトを追加してください。

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賞味期限までの期間が長くて一番良い品物をプチプチで梱包して私のEbay住所に発送いただけましょうか？
それは３－４年間必要です。ありがとうございます！お気軽に無料ギフトを追加してください。

元の翻訳
I found the ticket of the departure from Osaka on Wednesday. but it costs double than usual.
I want to travel as the following schedule if it is possible. Then, Brand research is difficult in this trip so I will afford ticket price myself.
If it is possible, I want to talk with you at the hotel you booked at the night I arrive.
I think you can arrange a appointment with the existing customer on your free time on Tuesday.

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I found [mistranslation] the ticket from Osaka on Wednesday. but it costs double than usual.
I want to travel as the following schedule if it is possible. Then, Brand research is difficult in this trip [mistranslation] so I will afford [usage] ticket price myself.
If it is possible, I want to talk with you at the hotel you booked [usage] at the night I arrive.
I think you can arrange an appointment with the existing customer on [wrong preposition] your free time on Tuesday.

元の翻訳
Today we made a payment for the volume we had ordered so please check it and ship the goods.
Did you ship the goods we ordered on 8/5 and 8/15?
We want to know delivery status so please show me the tracking number of the goods. If you shipped the goods we ordered today, please show me the tracking number of the goods.
Thank you and best regards.

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Today we made a payment for the volume we had ordered so please check it and ship the goods.
Have you shipped the goods we ordered on 8/5 and 8/15?
We want to know the delivery status so please notify us their tracking numbers. If you have also shipped the goods we ordered today, please let us know the tracking number of the goods.
Thank you and best regards.

元の翻訳
Today we made a payment for the volume we had ordered so please check it and ship the goods.
Did you ship the goods we ordered on 8/5 and 8/15?
We want to know delivery status so please show me the tracking number of the goods. If you shipped the goods we ordered today, please show me the tracking number of the goods.
Thank you and best regards.

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Today we made a payment for the order so please check it and ship the goods.
Did you ship the goods we ordered on August 5 and 15?
We would like to know delivery status so please show me the tracking number of the goods. If you shipped the goods we ordered today, please show me the tracking number of the goods, too.
Thank you and best regards.

元の翻訳
For various procedures in Japan, I will fill in to complete the documents, Please let me know the date of birth of Male &Female.
Please attach invoice also.
Thank you for your prompt action.

P/S
Did you confirm the document I ask you many time?
We are in hurry.
I will ask again.
This is very important thing. I am looking forward to your quick reply.

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I would like to begin working on the documents required for various procedures in Japan. Please let me know the date of birth of Male &Female.
Please attach the invoice also.
Thank you for your quick work.

P/S
Did you confirm the matter regarding the documents that I have asked you several times about?
We are in hurry.
Please email me if you have not received them.↵
I will apply again.
This is very important, so I would appreciate it if you could reply as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your bidding recently.
About the shipment, I can write as a gift to the shipping label and 「used camera lens」to the product name, but describing the price down conflicts with the Ebay policy so I can do it. Please understand for me.

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Thank you for your bidding recently [this is not what the original says].
About the shipment, I can write as a gift to the shipping label and 「used camera lens」to the product name, but describing the price down conflicts with the eBay policy so I can do it [mistranslation]. Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact.
August is too hot, going outside is very hard. So, I think it is better when it becomes cool (From October)
Please feel free to contact me if you have any trouble.
I am looking forward to the day we can meet.
I will contact again.
Please take care of yourself.

P/S: Regarding to the document you attached in the last EMAIL, I have not received yet. Please check it again.

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Thank you for contacting me.
August is too hot, and going out might be too hard for you. So, I think it would be better if you come after it has cooled down a little bit (After October)
Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
I am looking forward to the day when we can meet.
I will contact you again.
Please take care of yourself.

P/S: Regarding the document you attached in the last email, I have not received it yet. Please check it again.

元の翻訳
Sorry for the late responding. From last week to this weekend two storms have been passing to Japan. According to the shipper, the influence of these storms has disturbed considerably to the schedule of shipping since last week. In next two days, the storm will landfall in Japan and after that the shipping will be conducted sequentially. In addition, it will not disturb more than above because this storm is predicted not strong as leaving a major disaster for now.
We are going to receive new information from shipper on Monday.
Sorry for causing uncomfortable but please understand for us.

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Sorry for the late responding [parts of speech]. From last week to this weekend two storms have been passing to [wrong proposition] Japan. According to the shipper, the influence of these storms has disturbed considerably to [proposition] the schedule of shipping since last week. In next two days, the storm will landfall [parts of speech confusion] in Japan and after that the shipping will be conducted [word choice] sequentially. In addition, it will not disturb more than above because this storm is predicted not strong as leaving a major disaster for now.
We are going to receive new information from [article] shipper on Monday.
Sorry for causing uncomfortable [parts of speech confusion] but please understand for [proposition] us.

元の翻訳
Good afternoon,↵

Do you have this item in stock?
Would you like to ship it to Japan?
I look forward to hearing from you.

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Hello,
Do you have this item in stock?
Would you please ship it to Japan?
I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
I would like to apologize for responding lately.
About the items you had ordered, unfortunately but they can not be shipped by air.
I am sending to you regarding the decision of impossibility of shipment,
I am very sorry for the late reply.

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I would like to apologize for my late responding.
About the items you have ordered, unfortunately, I could not ship them due to the Civil Aeronautics Law.
↵
I am sending this notice to you after the above judgment was made,
I am very sorry for the late reply.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I've tried to look by the GLS that you had taught me.
On 22nd July, Did your company send to our company the ordered items on 8th July?↵
From order to delivery, it takes some days, What does it mean? Could you explain it?
This issue is happening many times and we are getting troubles for this.
Anyway, please ship the items we ordered on 8th and 11th July quickly.

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Thank you for your reply.
I've tried to look by the GLS that you had taught me.
Are you saying that the item we ordered on 8th of July was actually shipped out on 22nd of July?From order to delivery, it takes some days, so tell us what is taking you this long? You had better have some good explanations to it.
This issue is happening many times and we are getting troubles for this.
Anyway, you have got to ship the items we ordered on 8th and 11th July quickly.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
Regarding to the items, I will contact when I send them.
Best regards,

Thank you for your message.
I'm sorry but regarding to the items, I cancelled them.

I will pay back all the amount.

Thank you for your message
I got it.
Regarding to the high price items, It is high possible to be caught by the tariff.
So I think that it will take time to be held in there.

Thank you for your message.
I got it.
I will make the refund procedures when this problem is solved.

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Thank you for your message.
Regarding to the items, I will contact you when I send them.
Best regards,

Thank you for your message.
I'm sorry but regarding to the items, I cancelled them.

I will pay back all the amount.

Thank you for your message.
I got it.
Regarding to the high price items, It is high possible to be caught by the tariff inspection.
So I think that it will take time to be held in there.

Thank you for your message.
I got it.
I will make the refund procedures when the settlement is cleared.

元の翻訳
#habit
I've checked the change of USPS tracking information.
Thank you for your prompt procedures.
With your help, sales in Japan is very favorable.
Exhibition on ebay has been reduced, so Do you wait the product arrival from the maker
#Amazon.
Today, I contact you because I have make the return goods document .
Name of goods.
Quantity.
Method of transport.
Tracking number.
Fee of return goods.
Sorry for troubling you but please pay back to me the fee of return goods.

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#habit
I've checked the updated USPS tracking information.
Thank you for your prompt processing.
With your help, sales in Japan is very favorable.
The number of listings on ebay has decreased. Is it because you are waiting for the products from the manufacturer?
↵
#Amazon.
I am contacting you to inform you that I have processed the return today.
Name of goods.
Quantity.
Method of transport.
Tracking number.
Fee of return goods.
Sorry for troubling you but please refund the shipping cost for the return.

元の翻訳
Hello,
Did you receive my message last time?
Does your company have any plan to expand in Japan?
I am almost getting impression with your company products.
Please think about expanding in Japan.
I'm waiting for good news from you.

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Hello,
Did you receive my message last time?
Does your company have any plans to expand to Japan?
I am deeply impressed with your company and your companies products.
Please think about expanding to Japan.
I'm waiting for good news from you.

元の翻訳
Many thanks to your contacting about purchasing when you are busy.
There is no change to credit card.
Please help me about order of Cemetery ring size.
If delivery is finished by Fedex, please let me know the tracking number and finishing of delivery.
I am looking forward to receive a nice situation link next time.

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Many thanks to your contacting about purchasing [awkward] when you are busy.
There is no change to credit card [awkward].
Please help me about order of Cemetery ring size [different from the original].
If delivery is finished by FedEx, please let me know the tracking number and finishing of delivery [awkward].
I look forward to receiving a nice situation link [incomprehensible] next time.