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元の翻訳
Contents:
SUEYOSHI SHUTA provides pictures with theme of red, blue, yellow and black in his first photo collection.
He tried what he had always wanted to do in this book.
Feel inside of his mind with colorful 96 page which will change the image you had for him.

The location and the time for the book release commemorating hand shake event have been decided.

Booking procedure differs from each book store so please confirm from the URL below.

Special URL
http://www.shufu.co.jp/topics/

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Contents:
SUEYOSHI SHUTA provides pictures with theme of red, blue, yellow and black in his first photo collection.
He tried what he had always wanted to do in this book.
Feel inside of his mind with colorful 96 page which will change the image you had for him!

The location and the time for the book release commemorating hand shake event have been decided!

Booking procedure differs from each book store so please confirm from the URL below.

Special URL
http://www.shufu.co.jp/topics/

元の翻訳
こんにちは。もう少し良い保証カードの写真、またケースに記載されているシリアル番号を送ってくれませんか。

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こんにちは。もう少し写りの良い保証書カードの写真、またケースとムーブメントに記載されているシリアル番号を送ってくれませんか。

元の翻訳
こんにちは。

私は返品しようとしているのですが、私が地元の郵便局にアカウントを持たない限り彼らはCOD出荷を提供してくれません。

唯一私が送付できる道は私が発送費用を負担した航空便のみです。(トラッキング無し)

他にあなたが荷物を回収する手段をお持ちでないかぎりですが。もしくは私のアカウントを使って貨物出荷のもとUPSを利用して送付することもできますがこちらのオプションはお高くなります。

ご確認ください。

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こんにちは。

私は返品しようとしているのですが、私が地元の郵便局にアカウントを持たない限り彼らはCOD出荷を提供してくれません。

唯一私が送付できる道は私が発送費用を負担した航空便のみです。(トラッキング無し)

他にあなたが荷物を回収する手段をお持ちでないかぎりですが。もしくは私のアカウントを使ってUPSを利用して着払いで送付することもできますがこちらのオプションはお高くなります。

ご確認ください。

元の翻訳
#disneyparkslink

この人形の値段は私が決めさせていただくことをお伝えいたします。
他の購入者の方のために誤ってたくさんの人形をかってしまい、注文がキャンセルされました。
コストは$129.95 + 9% 税金 = $141.64　でした。
この価格は私のebay手数料と送料は含めません。
あなたにとっていい取引だと思います。
ご連絡ください。
ちなみに王子エリックとマレフィセントも扱ってます。

#Golf Xcess
すべて予定通りに進めば、木曜日に注文を受けるはずです。↵
21.5*は手に入らないと連絡を受けました。次に入荷された時のために発注をかけることができます。
ほかに必要なものがあればご連絡ください。

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#disneyparkslink

参考までに、私はこの人形の値段を仕入れ値以下で販売しています。
他の購入者の方のためにたくさんの人形を買ったのが間違いでした。彼らに注文をキャンセルされました。
コストは$129.95 + 9% 税金 = $141.64　でした。
この価格は私のebay手数料と送料は含みません。
あなたにとっていい取引だと思います。
ご連絡ください。
ちなみに王子エリックとマレフィセントも扱ってます。

#Golf Xcess
すべて予定通りに進めば、木曜日に注文品の納品となります。21.5*は手に入らないと連絡を受けました。入荷されれば、次回の発注に含めることができます。
ほかに必要なものがあればご連絡ください。

元の翻訳
I'm sorry that I made you misunderstand.
Please ship the package for cash on delivery as planned.
Thank you.

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I'm sorry that I made you misunderstood.
Please ship the package for cash on delivery as planned.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
The value of the comments on demo site is referencing Views value.
Also each category page has currently uses its category name for URL but it would be better if we had options such as to designate POST ID. (Because otherwise, it cannot be used outside of English-speaking countries.)

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The value of the comments on demo site is referencing the Views value.
Also each category page has currently uses its category name for URL but it would be better if we had options such as to designate POST ID. (Otherwise, it cannot be used outside of English-speaking countries.)

元の翻訳
I got a good seat again.
I purchased Broadway ticket from West End and the seat was really good so I decided to purchase the ticket from West End again.
It's really reassuring to be able to make a reservation in Japan and the seat this time was around the center of row M which you can just see the whole stage without trying. I'm not sure how they get the seat but I am now certain that you can get the ticket from West End and you won't regret it.
It was really a nice trip. Thank you very much.

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I got a good seat again.
I purchased Broadway ticket from West End last year and the seat was really good so I decided to purchase the ticket from West End again.
It's really reassuring to be able to make a reservation in Japan and the seat this time was around the center of row M which you can just see the whole stage without trying. I'm not sure how they get the seat but I am now certain that you can get the ticket from West End and you won't regret it.
It was really a nice trip. Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
This product is still in the middle of the transportation.
The formal return request has not been made yet.

You contacted us to cancel the product because you have found the same product cheaper in the another shop. However, since it had been couple days after your order, we are afraid we had already shipped the product to your place. Therefore if you would like to return the item, please contact us after you received your product.

Below is the return procedure.
Please confirm.

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This product is still in the middle of the transportation.
The formal return request has not been made yet.

You contacted us to cancel the product because you have found the same product cheaper in the another shop. However, since it had been a couple days days after your order, we are afraid we had already shipped the product to your place. Therefore if you would like to return the item, please contact us after you received your product.

Below is the return procedure.
Please confirm.

元の翻訳
I have never seen the musical that makes me this happy. Young performers' dynamic performance and singing are of course (Female audience loved how young performers striped themselves.) , Veteran performers' sophisticated performance and singing are fantastic! Story is simple (But I recommend you to watch a movie first.) and it uses well-known song, Hit Dance Number from ABBA, so there's no awkward feeling unlike some historical musical. At the finale, all the performers come out and everyone stands up and go crazy with ABBA's Number. I will go again on my next business trip.

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I have never seen a musical that makes me this happy. Young performers' dynamic performance and singing are of course (Female audience loved how young male performers stripped themselves.) , Veteran performers' sophisticated performance and singing are fantastic! Story is simple (But I recommend you to watch a movie first.) and it uses well-known song, Hit Dance Number from ABBA, so there's no awkward feeling unlike some historical musical. At the finale, all the performers come out and everyone stands up and go crazy with ABBA's Number. I will go again on my next business trip to London.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your e-mail.
I'm relieved to hear that the package had reached you safely.
If you have any question, please feel free to contact us.

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Thank you for your e-mail.
I'm relieved to hear that the package has reached you safely.
If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us.

元の翻訳
国際ブローカーにクレームを届ける必要があると思います。彼らに確認してください。私は確実に彼らの元に届くようにし、そこからは彼らが引き継ぎました。以前はこのような仕組みでしたのでもし異なればご連絡ください。また、あなたの送付した写真はピンクのカップのものでしたが私がお売りしたのは白でした。こちらはどういうことでしょうか。

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国際ブローカーにクレームを届ける必要があると思います。彼らに確認してください。私は確実に彼らの元に届くようにしたのみで、そこからは彼らが引き継ぐのです。以前はこのような仕組みでしたのでもし異なればご連絡ください。また、あなたの送付した写真はピンクのカップのものでしたが私がお売りしたのは白でした。こちらはどういうことでしょうか。

元の翻訳
あなたのリスト素敵ですね。
どうやってあんな大きな写真をe-bayの説明欄に追加したのか気になってたんですよ。なんのプログラムを使ったのですか。もしくはどのような方法を使ったのですか。
また、何のプログラムを使えば文章をあのようにフォーマットできるのでしょうか。
以上です。

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あなたの出品素敵ですね。
どうやってあんな大きな写真をe-bayの説明欄に追加したのか気になってたんですよ。なんのプログラムを使ったのですか。もしくはどのような方法を使ったのですか。
また、何のプログラムを使えば文章をあのようにフォーマットできるのでしょうか。
以上です。

元の翻訳
Hello. I received your products today.
They are in good condition so I like them, but two cups were broken.
(I'm attaching the image.)
Can you compensate those cups?
I'm looking forward to your response.
Thank you.

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Hello. I received your products today.
They are in good condition so I like them, but two cups were broken.
(I'm attaching the image.)
Can you compensate me for those cups?
I'm looking forward to your response.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Hello. I received your products today.
They are in good condition so I like them, but two cups were broken.
(I'm attaching the image.)
Can you compensate those cups?
I'm looking forward to your response.
Thank you.

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Hello. I received your products today.
They are in good condition so I like them, but two cups were broken.
(I attached the image.)
Can you compensate those cups?
I'm looking forward to your response.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
The product has not been arrived yet. The package from America should arrive in 10 days at the latest. There's a possibility that the product has been lost. Can you make a refund? I'm looking forward to your response.

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The product has not arrived yet. The package from America should arrive in 10 days at the latest. There's a possibility that the product has been lost. Can you make a refund? I'm looking forward to your response.

元の翻訳
The product has not been arrived yet. The package from America should arrive in 10 days at the latest. There's a possibility that the product has been lost. Can you make a refund? I'm looking forward to your response.

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The product has not arrived yet. The packages from the U.S. should arrive within 10 days at the latest. There's a possibility that the product has been lost. Can you issue a refund? I'm looking forward to your response.

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I am Yamada. I reserved SPEEDI SHUTTLE at 8:35 a.m. on February 3rd.
On February 3rd, I waited for the bus until 10 a.m. but it never arrived.
Since the departure time of my flight was closing, I had to take a taxi to get to the airport.
I could not get the bus because of your fault so please make a refund for $27.86.

When I received this game, it had no plastic packing and was already open.
Do you have product code?
If I could not install the game software, I would like to get a refund.

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I am Yamada. I reserved SPEEDI SHUTTLE at 8:35 a.m. on February 3rd.
On February 3rd, I waited for the bus until 10 a.m. but it never arrived.
Since the departure time of my flight was closing, I had to take a taxi to get to the airport.
I could not get the bus because of your fault so please make a refund for $27.86.

When I received this game, it had no plastic packing and was already open.
Do you have product code?
If I can not install the game software, I would like to get a refund.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your e-mail.

I have many items I would like to add to this manual to make it up-to-date. I will let you know the details later.

I'm not good with English. I use translation web site such as Google Translator to communicate with everyone. So I do not use Skype. The communication method would be by e-mail.

We will use Drop Box for exchanging data with you from next time. Please let me know of your e-mail address.

I hope to establish a long working relationship with you.

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Thank you for your e-mail.

I have many items I would like to add to this manual to make it up-to-date. I will let you know the details later.

I'm not good at English. I use a translation website such as Google Translator to communicate with everyone. So I do not use Skype. The communication method would be by e-mail.

We will use Drop Box for exchanging data with you from next time. Please let me know of your e-mail address.

I hope to establish a long working relationship with you.