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メールありがとうございます。書類をうけとってくれるかについて担当者へ訪尋ねます。まず、メールに添付して厚生の証明を４枚送っていただけますか。貴方のメールのリンクにある書類は不鮮明です。その上、サービス会社へ送った際、開けなかったそうです。

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メールありがとうございます。書類をうけとってくれるかについて担当者へ尋ねます。まず、メールに添付して健康診断書を４枚送っていただけますか。貴方のメールのリンクにある書類は不鮮明です。その上、サービス会社へ送った際、開けなかったそうです。

元の翻訳
メールの方ありがとうございました。書類が受領されているかどうか、幹部役員に聞いてみます。しかし、メールに添付された初めの4つの衛生証明書を送ってもらうことはできますか？あなたからのメールの書類内のリンクは、よくわかりません。また、それをサービス会社へ送りましたが、彼らはそれを開くことができないのです。

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メールの方ありがとうございました。書類が受領されているかどうか、幹部役員に聞いてみます。しかし、メールに添付された初めの4つの健康診断書を送ってもらうことはできますか？あなたからのメールの書類内のリンクは、よくわかりません。また、それをサービス会社へ送りましたが、彼らはそれを開くことができないのです。

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A totally white ring with gems made of glass covered with white coating.
The more you use it, the more the coating will peel off, revealing the bright gems. It is a "peeling" series where you can enjoy two types of images.
*The ring is the adjuster

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A totally white ring with gems made of glass covered with white coating.
The more you use it, the more the coating will peel off, revealing the bright gems. It is a "peeling" series where you can enjoy two types of images.
*The ring is the adjuster.

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Thank you for contacting us and letting us know of your visit to Japan.
We look forward to meeting you and please introduce us your new works.
We are fine with the date of July 1st, either 2PM or 3 PM.
The place is the same one as before, the address indicated as follows.

And please check the stocks of the items shown as bellow.

How long it takes if we order this quantity?
Please inform us the due date in case of putting embroidery on all items.

How can we make a payment?
And is it possible to get some discount?

Please give us reply as soon as possible.

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Thank you for contacting us and letting us know of your visit to Japan.
We look forward to meeting you and please introduce us your new works.
We are fine with the date of July 1st, either 2PM or 3 PM.
The place is the same one as before, the address indicated as follows.
Can an interpreter come with you this time, too?↵

And please check the stocks of the items shown as bellow.

How long it takes if we order this quantity?
Please inform us the due date in case of putting embroidery on all items.

How can we make a payment?
And is it possible to get some discount?

Please give us reply as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
Beginning to sell the Kumi Koda 15th Anniversary memorial jewelry!
The Kumi Koda debut 15th anniversary memorial jewelry was decided sales during the tour period !
「The unnatural pearl 2way pierced earrings」and 「The unnatural pearl necklace」are the point putting casually "K"mark in each large [small] pearls.
It will be the limited products that be available at only the concert hall
of Kumi koda 15th Anniversary Live Tour 2015 beginning from tomorrow.

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Started to sell the Kumi Koda 15th Anniversary memorial jewelry!
The Kumi Koda debut 15th anniversary memorial jewelry was decided to be on sale during the tour period !
"The unnatural pearl 2way pierced earrings" and "The unnatural pearl necklace"'s selling point is "K"mark put casually in each large and small pearls.
It will be the limited products that are available at only the concert hall
of Kumi koda 15th Anniversary Live Tour 2015 beginning from tomorrow.

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(KODA KUMI LIVE TOUR 2015～WALK OF MY LIFE～supported by Mercedes-Benz) We decided to hold a campaign for joining the club as a new member, continuing the member, coming back as a member and introducing a friend. We also hold it for W member with the playroom.

In such as case, we do not accept the item being returned from you and refunding . We appreciate your understanding in advance.
*You have to pay for the expenses for transportation, staying at a hotel and others. We cannot compensate for the travel expense if the event is stopped or postponed.

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(KODA KUMI LIVE TOUR 2015～WALK OF MY LIFE～supported by Mercedes-Benz) We decided to hold a campaign for joining the club as a new member, continuing the member and coming back as a member and introducing a friend. We also hold it for W member with the playroom.

In such a case, please understand that we do not accept your returning the items and issue a refund for them.
*You have to pay for the expenses for transportation, staying at a hotel and so on. We cannot compensate for the travel expense if the event is cancelled or postponed.

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http://kodakumi.net/
3. Click the top page or W (double) membership certificate on special page of the tour.
4. Insert membership number and password of Kodakumi and click send.
5. Show the page of QR code of your W membership certificate on the event venue, and get the original money clip!

For you who plan to go, don't miss it!

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http://kodakumi.net/
3. Click the top page or W (double) membership certificate on special page of the tour.
4. Insert membership number and password of Kodakumi and click send.
5. Show the page of QR code of your W membership certificate on the event venue, and get the original money clip!

For those who plan to go, don't miss it!

元の翻訳
※Please listen to the staffs. You will be forced to leave if you do not abide to the rules.
You will not be able to participate if you do not listen to instructions. The organizer will not be responsible for chaos or accidents caused because of your bad behavior.
After entry, do not enter other areas aside from the designated space.
※Children under 5 years old will not be allowed to enter.
※Please understand that there is a possibility that it might take a long time to enter depending on the situation.

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※Please listen to staffs. You will be forced to leave if you do not abide by the rules.
You will not be able to participate if you do not listen to instructions. The organizer will not be responsible for chaos or accidents caused because of your bad behavior.
After entry, do not enter other areas aside from the designated space.
※Children under 5 years old will not be allowed to enter.
※Please understand that there is a possibility that it might take a long time to enter depending on the situation.

元の翻訳
FM Nagasaki "KEMURI presents Noise for the Radio" blog of radio program has started!

The blog of the radio program that is KEMURI's first regular program "KEMURI presents Noise for the Radio" began on Saturday, April 4 in FM Nagasaki has opened.

http://www.fmnagasaki.co.jp/program/noise/

This program links to the application forms such as a message and a request to the program, so please check these out!

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FM Nagasaki "KEMURI presents Noise for the Radio" blog of radio program has started!

The blog of the radio program that is KEMURI's first regular program "KEMURI presents Noise for the Radio" began on Saturday, April 4 (Sat.) in FM Nagasaki has opened.

http://www.fmnagasaki.co.jp/program/noise/

This program links to the application forms such as a message and a request to the program, so please check these out!

元の翻訳
KODA KUMI VISA CARD has got renewed! Advance reservation at the venue has got strarted!

KODA KUMI VISA CARD has appeared with renewing the design!

At all venue of Koda Kumi 15th Anniversary Live Tour 2015 -WALK OF MY LIFE- supported by Mercedes-Benz,
advance reservation will be held!

All customers who apply KODA KUMI VISA CARD will get "Original post card" as a present!

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KODA KUMI VISA CARD has got renewed! Advance reservation at the venue has got strarted!

KODA KUMI VISA CARD has appeared with renewing the design!

At all venue of Koda Kumi 15th Anniversary Live Tour 2015 -WALK OF MY LIFE- supported by Mercedes-Benz,
advance reservation will be held only for visitors!

All customers who apply KODA KUMI VISA CARD will get "Original post card" as a present!