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IGI9524
配達会社のサイトでスペースを入れずに追跡番号を入力すると有効な番号ではありませんというメッセージが出ます。
今家にいないのですが、彼らはメッセージを残しているべきではないのですか？
正しい追跡番号無しにイギリスに電話をかけるのは得策ではないと思うので、
荷物が現在どこにあるのかと、私は誰に連絡すれば良いか教えていただけますか？

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IGI9524
配達会社のサイトでスペースを入れずに追跡番号を入力すると有効な番号ではありませんというメッセージが出ます。
不在時についてですが、不在通知を残しているべきではないのですか？
正しい追跡番号無しにイギリスに電話をかけるのは得策ではないと思うので、
荷物が現在どこにあるのかと、私は誰に連絡すれば良いか教えていただけますか？

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IGI 1918
お返事と再送ありがとうございます。
ですがあなたから知らせて頂いた追跡番号RR905094225JPは間違っているようです。日本郵便サイト上で確認できませんでした。
ご確認の上ご連絡ください。

IGI 9149
私が注文した商品は4月10日までに届くとのことでした。いったいどこにあるのでしょうか？日本からの船便で本当に届くのでしょうか？これは私の孫息子へのバースデーギフトなんです！非常に残念です！「Eメールアドレス」宛せめてお返事をください。

IGI 5532
それらのカードは英語で、日本語ではないですよね？

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IGI 1918
お返事と再送ありがとうございます。
ですがあなたから知らせて頂いた追跡番号RR905094225JPは間違っているようです。日本郵便サイト上で確認できませんでした。
ご確認の上ご連絡ください。

IGI 9149
私が注文した商品は4月10日までに届くとのことでした。いったいどこにあるのでしょうか？日本からの船便で本当に届くのでしょうか？これは私の孫への誕生日のプレゼントなんです！非常に残念です！「Eメールアドレス」宛せめてお返事をください。

IGI 5532
それらのカードは英語で、日本語ではないですよね？

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As much as 98.3% of the Japan coal production was categorized as bituminous coal, which was difficult to use for household furnaces or stoves. Regarding the cost per heating value, the coal price in urban areas was approximately 50% of firewood, and 30% of charcoal, thus coal was economical. However, coal was difficult to use in a kitchen due to the problems of smokes and quality of fire, and a large stove with a chimney was necessary to use coal for indoor heating, therefore except in Hokkaido, coal was not used for household heating. For these reasons, in a Japanese household, coal was mostly used at a bath.

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As much as 98.3% of the coals produced in Japan was categorized as bituminous coal, which was difficult to use for household furnaces or stoves. Regarding the cost per heating value, the coal price in urban areas was approximately 50% of firewood, and 30% of charcoal, thus coal was economical. However, coal was difficult to use in a kitchen due to the problems of smokes and quality of fire, and a large stove with a chimney was necessary to use coal for indoor heating, therefore except in Hokkaido, coal was not used for household heating. For these reasons, in a Japanese household, coal was mostly used at a bath.

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貿易製造者（2つは同一業者から、2つは要求されている与信限度と同じ価値のものでなければならない）

必要とされる発注書とは？

契約：私（私達）は、この情報が真実かつ​​正確であると証明し、このアプリケーションが提供された情報の検証のために信用調査局と呼ばれることがあることに同意し、
信用延長がなされた場合はさらにそのような拡張信用以下の条件に従うものとする。

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貿易製造者（両者は同一業者から、また、両者は要求されている与信限度と同等である必要がある）

必要とされる発注書とは？

契約：私（私達）は、この情報が真実かつ​​正確であると証明し、この申請が提供された情報の検証のために信用調査局により紹介されることがあることに同意し、
信用が供与された場合はさらに当該の信用供与に関し、以下の諸条件に従うものとする。

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I apologize to reply you late.
I am sorry that arrival of the package is late unfortunately.

I checked the situation of mail in Singapore.
Even if it is delivered when a person who receives is not at home,
nofice of delivery must be left at the home since it is a registered mail.

You have to go to post office that is indicated in the notice of delivery to pick it up,
or request them to deliver it again.

In this case, due to delay, the package has not been transported to Singapore yet.
What I can do is to ask Japan Post to track the situation, but it seems that it takes
time to track the packages, which have already been sent from Japan.

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I apologize to reply you late.
I am sorry to hear that the belated arrival of the package.

I checked the situation of postal services in Singapore.
Even if it is delivered when a person who receives is not at home,
nofice of delivery must be left at the home since it is a registered mail.

You have to go to post office that is indicated in the notice of delivery to pick it up,
or request them to deliver it again.

In this case, it appears that there was a delay, and the package has not been transported to Singapore yet.
What I can do is to ask Japan Post to track the situation, but it seems that it takes
time to track the packages, which have already been sent from Japan.

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I’m sorry for the last reply.
I’m sorry that it’s been taking a long time to deliver the product.
I checked Singapore’s postal service, and if the package is delivered during your absence, they would leave you a note as it’s registered mail.
You need to go to the post office mentioned in the note or arrange for redelivery.
In this case, there has been a delay, and it hasn’t arrived in Singapore yet.
The only thing I can do is ask Japan Post to investigate, but it takes time as the package has left Japan.

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I’m sorry for the belated reply.
I’m sorry to hear that it’s been taking a long time to deliver the product.
I checked Singapore’s postal service, and if the package is delivered during your absence, they would leave you a note as it’s a registered mail.
You need to go to the post office mentioned in the note to pick it up or arrange for redelivery.
In this case, it appears that there has been a delay, and it hasn’t arrived in Singapore yet.
The only thing I can do is to ask Japan Post to investigate, but it takes time as the package has left Japan.

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As for the quotation for ●●● which I asked you for the other day, I do not yet received your reply.

Sorry to take your precious time, but please kindly give me a reply.

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I still have not heard from you regarding the quotation for the repair for ●●● which I asked you for the other day.

Sorry to take your precious time, but please kindly give me a reply.

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A customer of mine returned a heater with a claim that the temperature controller doesn’t work.
How would you deal with this defective product?
Could you exchange it? Or could you issue a refund?

Also, I need 2 new products. Could you inspect them carefully to make sure they are not defective?
Please send them to my address below, not to my client.
XXX Setagaya-ku, Tokyo-to

Please give me your return address.

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A customer of mine returned a heater with a complaint that the temperature controller doesn't work.
How would you deal with this defective product?
Could you exchange it? Or could you issue a refund?

Also, I need 2 new products. Could you ship them to me after thoroughly inspecting them to make sure they are not defective?
Please send them to my address below, not to my client.
XXX Setagaya-ku, Tokyo-to

Please give me your return address.

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Thank you so much for purchacing bunch of products.
The products wll send by EMS today to pack heavily-secured.
The total account will be ○○.Does it ok with you?

Please tell me if you want other products that I put on.
If you can deal with me directly, I can discount 10%.
Also, if you can purchase multiple products, I can consider more discount.

And, if you are lookng for another Japanese products, please tell me.
I would like to make good relationship with you.
thank you.

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Thank you so much for purchacing bunch of products.
The products will be packed securely and be shipped to you via EMS today.
The total amount on the bill will be ○○.Is it ok with you?

Please let me know if you want other products that I have listed.
If you can deal with me directly, I can discount 10%.
Also, if you can purchase multiple products, I can consider more discount.

And, if you are lookng for other Japanese products, please tell me.
I would like to make good relationship with you.
thank you.

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One of the products your company forwarded to Japan arrived broken.
I will return the product to the seller and he will reimburse the product cost.
I am thinking of using your service to return the product to the seller.
I will send it to you from Japan. Could you put a return label and ship it?
Could you tell me how much the cost is?
Thank you in advance.

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Some of the products your company forwarded to Japan arrived broken.
I will return the product to the seller and he will reimburse the product cost.
I am thinking of using your service to return the product to the seller.
I will send it to you from Japan. Could you put a return label and ship it?
Could you tell me how much the cost is?
Thank you in advance.

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The extent of responsibility you have been pointing is that the item condition is different upon receiving from the time of shipping such as damage to the item during the shipment. It is an accident. The damage like scratches of lens I have been pin pointing is not that of damage caused during the shipment.↵
The lens should have had very many scratches, fungus, and haze even before it was shipped. This is obviously different from the condition what you explained in the item description. Therefore, I demand to return the item to you.

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The extent of responsibility you have been pointing is that the item condition is different upon receiving from the time of shipping such as damage to the item during the transportation.. And that constitutes an accident. The damage like scratches on the lens I have been pin pointing is not that of damage caused during the shipment. In fact, the lens had very many scratches, fungus, and haze even before it was shipped. This is obviously different from the condition what you explained in the item description. Therefore, I demand to return the item to you.

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Robert氏とMatthew氏が東京で初めて出会ったときはそれぞれがウェブの代理店を営んでいた。Robert氏は当時日本語を勉強していたが、オンラインのクラウドソースを使用して翻訳システムを構築することは素晴らしいと考えた。Matthew氏は日本語に堪能であり、売り込みをかけていた。2009年に両者は合意した。

「東京ではこのアイデアを理解する人がたくさんいました」とRobert氏は言いました。

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Robert氏とMatthew氏が東京で初めて出会ったときはそれぞれがウェブの代理店を営んでいた。Robert氏は当時日本語を勉強していたが、オンラインのクラウドソースを使用して翻訳のスタートアップを起業することは素晴らしいと考えた。Matthew氏は日本語に堪能であり、（そのアイディアの売り込みを）受け入れた。2009年に両者は一緒に取り組むことに合意した。

「東京にはこのアイデアに理解を示してくれる人がたくさんいました」とRobert氏は言う。

元の翻訳
なぜスタートアップはシリコンバレーよりも東京の方が適している？

Gengo’s Robert Laing（最高経営責任者、写真左側）とMatthew Romaine （最高技術責任者、写真右側）の物語は、日本で技術系スタートアップを試みる多くの外国人のインスピレーションの源になっている。私が緑茶をすすっているうちに、Laing氏とRomaine氏はGengoがどうやって始まったのかを私に語った。この話は東京を拠点としたスタートアップ企業についてであるが、お見事としか言いようがない。シリコンバレーは素晴らしいけれど、東京だって結局のところそれほど悪くないのだ。

「もし我々がシリコンバレーにいたら、そのアイディアは思い浮かばなかっただろう。」Robertは言った。

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このスタートアップがシリコンバレーよりも東京の方が適している理由

Gengo’s Robert Laing（最高経営責任者、写真左側）とMatthew Romaine （最高技術責任者、写真右側）の物語は、日本で技術系スタートアップを試みる多くの外国人のインスピレーションの源になっている。私が緑茶をすすっているうちに、Laing氏とRomaine氏はGengoがどうやって始まったのかを私に語った。この話は東京を拠点としたスタートアップ企業についてであるが、お見事としか言いようがない。シリコンバレーは素晴らしいけれど、東京だって結局のところそれほど悪くないのだ。

「もし我々がシリコンバレーにいたら、そのアイディアは思い浮かばなかっただろう。」Robertは言った。

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Thank you for the instruction of the illustration.
I am so glad that you requested the cloth that I like the most. when the rough is completed,I will send it to you with the profile.
It would be next week or 2weeks later, would it be okay with you?

Also Heisuke and I have been knowing each other since long time ago, and he is fluent in English, so he tells me about the details from Sara.
He showed me the first illustration too.
I am looking forward to it complete.

I will do my best.

Thank you.

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Thank you for providing me the description for the rough illustration.
I am so glad that you requested the drawing of the fabric that I like the most. when the rough is completed, I will send it to you with the profile.
I hope it would be OK with you as I will be able to send it to you next week or 2 weeks later.

In addition, Heisuke and I have been knowing each other since long time ago, and he is fluent in English, so he has told me about the details from Sara.
He showed me the first illustration too.
I am looking forward to the completion.

I will do my best.

Thank you.

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Can I change breast of baby doll that Kory to baby doll that breathes?
The other day I found a baby which smells milk.
Was that smell of powder?
It is not the smell of cosmetics such as baby colon and baby powder,
but is truly the smell of milk felt from the baby who drank milk.
The baby doll of Coroller had the smell I was looking for.
I would like to have this smell.
I am sorry to interrupt you while you are busy.
I can ask only Kory whom I trust.
Thank you.

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Kory, could you make the chest of the baby doll to breathe?
The other day I found a baby who smells like milk.
Was that smell of powder?
It is not the smell of cosmetics such as baby colon and baby powder,
but is truly the scent of milk coming from the baby who just finished drinking milk.
The baby doll from Coroller had the scent I was looking for.
I would like to have this scent.
I am sorry to interrupt you while you are busy.
Kory, you are the only one I trust enough to ask questions.
Thank you in advance.

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I found the book cover you were looking for the other day so I bid on it.
The winning bid was 1000JPY (+postage) do you still want it?
If you would like I can send the book cover with your art book would that be ok?
If you don't want it, do not worry as I will use it myself.

Is Paris hot at the moment? The weather in Japan is very changeable, not good for my health, I'm getting a little tired of it...and would like to get rid of my cold....
I also don't feel like getting out and about if I could, but the less I work the less I get paid. I'm just getting on with my mundane work.

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I found the book cover you said you wanted the other day so I bid on it.
The winning bid was 1000JPY (+postage) do you still want it?
If you would like, I can send the book cover with your art book. Would that be ok?
If you don't want it, do not worry as I will use it myself.

Is Paris hot at the moment? The weather in Japan is very unstable, not good for my health, I'm getting a little tired of it...and would like to get rid of my cold....
I also don't feel like getting out and about if I could, but the less I work the less I get paid. I'm just getting on with my mundane work.

元の翻訳
Welcome!
I handle Japanese beautiful antiques.
I will do my best to make your life better.

I will pack the product carefully, and send it by EMS.
I have traded on ebay so far.↵
I am good at feedbacking very much. Please do not worry about it.

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Welcome!
I handle Japanese beautiful antiques.
I will do my best to make your life better.

I will pack the product carefully, and send it by EMS.
I have traded on ebay, and I have been receiving great feedback.↵
So, please do not worry about it.

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I would like to purchase one more of the same product that i bought from you today.
If it is able to purchase, please send me the invoice by email. Also, please include in the same shipment that I bought from you today.
I will be looking forward to hear from you.

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I would like to purchase one more of the same product that i bought from you today.
If it is available for purchase, please send me the invoice by email. Also, please include in the same package as the item that I bought from you today.
I will be looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
I told about the text that you requested to be translated to a person in charge of translation.
However, the person in charge is going to take a vacation for 1.5 months, and you
might have to wait for a little while. We apologize that you have to wait.

If you find further questions, please do not hesitate to ask us.
We will be waiting that you visit us.

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Thank you for contacting us.
I have notified of our translator tegarding the text that you requested to be translated.
However, the translator is going to take a vacation for 1.5 months, and you
might have to wait for a little while. We apologize that you have to wait.

If you find further questions, please do not hesitate to contact us.
We will be waiting for your visit.

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AME6234

教えてくれてありがとう。しかし私はIMをアマゾンで行なおうと思います。牛を購入しようとしてきたのはこれで三回目ですが、彼らはキャンセルしています。

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AME6234

教えてくれてありがとう。しかし私はアマゾンとの取引は止めようと思います。牛の購入を試みたのは今回で三回目ですが、またキャンセルされました。

元の翻訳
■ I do not use SAL since there are cases of losses.
I want to be able to deliver securely to the client so I do not use delivery services without a tracking number.
I request for your kind understanding for this.

■ The electrical products support the power voltage of Japan. Due to this, there will be a need for a plug or an transformer for some cases.
You can buy the transformer from me.

■ The user manual only comes in Japanese so please kindly understand this.
Please do not hesitate to contact if you have any questions.

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■ I do not use SAL since parcels sometimes get lost .
I want to be able to deliver the shipments securely to the client so I do not use delivery services without a tracking number.
I request for your kind understanding for this.

■ The electrical appliances support the voltage for Japan. Due to this reason, you may need a plug or a transformer in some cases.
You can buy the transformer from me.

■ Please be aware that there may be some cases where instruction manuals are only available in Japanese.
Please do not hesitate to contact us if you have any questions.

元の翻訳
なぜだかは分かりませんが、これらの時計は入手可能ですのでカナダとアメリカに輸出することができます。
全額返金をし再開始するか、あなたの提示する価格でカナダに郵送するか、どちらの手続きをご希望がご連絡ください。
価値の低下は避けたいので、定期的にご連絡をくださいませ。

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どうするのかは分かりませんが、これらの時計は入手可能ですのでカナダとアメリカに輸出することができます。
全額返金させていただいた上で再度(お取引を開始するか、お客様の送料ご負担でカナダに発送するか、どちらの手続きをご希望がご連絡ください。
こんなに高価なものになにかあるという事態は避けたいので、定期的にご連絡をくださいませ。

元の翻訳
Also, the inbox of some-mail adresses can not accept excel files.

Please use an e-mail adress that can take a big file.

Upgrading to the premium version, which is a bargain with lots of functions, comes without monthly costs!
We have a campaign going, that current users of the free version can upgrade for 400円 instead of the normal 700円.
(October 7th, 2013, the price was changed at the same time as the price change in the APP Store)

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Also, the inboxes for some-mail addresses may not accept excel files.

Please use an e-mail address that can take files with large volume of data.

Upgrading to the premium version, which is a bargain with lots of functions, comes without monthly costs!
We have a campaign going, that current users of the free version can upgrade for 400円 instead of the normal 700円.
(October 7th, 2013, the price was changed at the same time as the price change in the APP Store)

元の翻訳
Exporting into excel funtion
The data can be transferred to the excel fromat, so it is really easy to check it on your computer!
(Exporting into CVS is possible as well)

Press the output button
Then press ok.
Select the exporting format. (When using a software or application, that is compatible with Excel, you should select CVS here)

Select if the picture should be exported as well.

It will be sent as an e-mail attachement, so you will have to input your e-mail adress!

Exporting know-how
Sometimes the exporting is not possible, because the inbox of your e-mail is too small.

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Output in Excel Format Function
The data can be output in Excel format, which can lets you check the data on your computer!
(Output in CVS format is also available)

Press the Output button
Then press OK.
Select the output format. (When using a software or application compatible with Excel, you should select CVS here)

Select if the picture should be output as well.

It will be sent as an e-mail attachment, so you will have to input your e-mail address!

Output Tip
Sometimes the exporting is not possible, because the inbox of your e-mail is too small.