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評価: 60 / ネイティブ 英語 / 1 Review / 2014/04/08 23:56:18

ozsamurai_69
ozsamurai_69 60 ー　日本語能力試験１級合格 ー　翻訳・通訳　英和＜－＞和英　７年本田株式...
日本語

この間貴方が欲しいと言っていたブックカバーを見つけたので落札しました。
落札額は1000円(＋送料)でしたが、貴方はまだこれを希望するでしょうか？
もし良ければこのブックカバーが届いてからアートブックと一緒に発送出来ますがどうしましょう？
もし要らなければ、私は自分で使うので気にしないで下さい。

パリは気温が高いの？日本が天候がよく変わるから、体調がすぐ悪くなってウンザリする。早く風邪を治したいよ…。

私も出来るなら働きたくない。休んだら貰えるお金が減るのが嫌で働いてるだけだな。

英語

I found the book cover you were looking for the other day so I bid on it.
The winning bid was 1000JPY (+postage) do you still want it?
If you would like I can send the book cover with your art book would that be ok?
If you don't want it, do not worry as I will use it myself.

Is Paris hot at the moment? The weather in Japan is very changeable, not good for my health, I'm getting a little tired of it...and would like to get rid of my cold....
I also don't feel like getting out and about if I could, but the less I work the less I get paid. I'm just getting on with my mundane work.

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chee_madam 52 留学、就労と英語圏で15年生活してまいりました。実務翻訳に従事しています。...
chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/04/09 00:55:03

元の翻訳
I found the book cover you were looking for the other day so I bid on it.
The winning bid was 1000JPY (+postage) do you still want it?
If you would like I can send the book cover with your art book would that be ok?
If you don't want it, do not worry as I will use it myself.

Is Paris hot at the moment? The weather in Japan is very changeable, not good for my health, I'm getting a little tired of it...and would like to get rid of my cold....
I also don't feel like getting out and about if I could, but the less I work the less I get paid. I'm just getting on with my mundane work.

修正後
I found the book cover you said you wanted the other day so I bid on it.
The winning bid was 1000JPY (+postage) do you still want it?
If you would like, I can send the book cover with your art book. Would that be ok?
If you don't want it, do not worry as I will use it myself.

Is Paris hot at the moment? The weather in Japan is very unstable, not good for my health, I'm getting a little tired of it...and would like to get rid of my cold....
I also don't feel like getting out and about if I could, but the less I work the less I get paid. I'm just getting on with my mundane work.

貴方が欲しいと言っていた does not match with "you were looking for"

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