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元の翻訳
When leaving dormitory, please make sure you leave nothing behind.
Please resume the room condition as the same as the one when you started to use.
Do not also forget to settle and cancel your contract of gas, water and electricity.
Finally, drop the key to the post at room 105 when you are leaving this weekend.

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When leaving dormitory, please make sure you leave nothing behind.
Please restore the condition of the room to its original state.
Do not also forget to settle and cancel your contract for the gas, water and electricity services.
Finally, drop the key to the post at room 105 when you are leaving this weekend.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your massage.
We have this product in stock.
We can ship it to China by EMS.

We would be grateful if you could order.


Thank you for your massage.

It was our fault for this product.
We are sorry for the evaluation. What can we do for you now?

We are afraid, but we can not cancel the shipment of the product.
Please return it to us after arrival.

We have received the cancellation email.
We will proceed to cancel.

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Thank you for your massage.
We have this product in stock.
We can ship it to China by EMS.

We would be grateful if you would order this product.


Thank you for your massage.

It was our fault for this product.
We are sorry for the evaluation. What can we do for you now?

We are afraid, but we can not cancel the shipment of the product.
Please return it to us after arrival.

We have received the cancellation email.
We will proceed to cancel.

元の翻訳
In the 3rd year in elementary school. I encountered programming, and worked on creating software enthusiastically from BASIC, assembly and C.

While I was studying at Technical Vocational School of Fukui, I was involved in development↵
of software in study group and part-time job, and found how satisfied I was that people used the works that I had develped. After graduating from the school, I considered starting my company by working as a freelance programmer.

After starting 2 companies, I established the company jig.jp that I work for now. I developed↵
the download style full browser that was developed for the first time in the world, which enabled people to see the site for personal computer for cellular phone where people saw only mobile site.

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When I was a third grader, I encountered programming, and worked on creating software enthusiastically from BASIC, assembly and C.

While I was studying at the Fukui National College of Technology, I was involved in the development of software in the study group and part-time job, and found how satisfied I was that people used the works that I had developed. After graduating from the school, I considered starting my company by working as a freelance programmer.

After starting 2 companies, I established my current company, jig.jp. I developed the world's first download-style full browser, which enabled people to see the site for personal computer on cellular phone where people saw only mobile site.

元の翻訳
I created a PC for programming beginners, "Ichigojam" which is cheap and can be easily used by children.
You individually have to prepare, TV with video input terminal, keyboard that is connectable to PS/2, and a power source with micro USB terminal.

It is a soldered version of Ichigojam with round shape and compact hand made codes.

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I created a PC for programming beginners (novice programmers), "Ichigojam" which is inexpensive and can easily be used by children.
You are required to prepare a TV with video input terminal, a keyboard that is connectable to PS/2, and a power source with micro USB terminal.

It is a soldered version of Ichigojam with round shape and compact hand made cords.

元の翻訳
コンパクトなスチール製スタンド
頑強なスチール製で、道具を使わず数分で組み立てが可能
ハンモックは大人二人に対応（最高450ポンド）
キャリーケース付き
綿製ハンモック
100パーセント綿製
ベッド部は63×94インチ、全長130インチ
色はデザートムーン、オアシス、トロピカル縞模様をご用意

箱に含まれている物
Vivere社製UHSDO9ダブルハンモックコンボ（9フィートのスチール製スタンド付き）、ハンモック（綿またはサンブレラ製生地）、キャリーケース、使用説明書。

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コンパクトなスチール製スタンド
頑強なスチール製で、道具を使わず数分で組み立てが可能
ハンモックは大人二人に対応（最大450ポンド）
キャリーケース付き
綿製ハンモック
綿100パーセント
ベッド部は63×94インチ、全長130インチ
色はデザートムーン、オアシス、トロピカル縞模様をご用意

同梱物
Vivere社製UHSDO9ダブルハンモックコンボ（9フィートのスチール製スタンド付き）、ハンモック（綿またはサンブレラ製生地）、キャリーケース、使用説明書。

元の翻訳
I will make an inquiry about the availability if you could tell me the product name.

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I will make an inquiry on the stock availability to the manufacturer or the supplier, if you could tell me the product name.

元の翻訳
Please let me know the product name, so that I can inquire the stock availability to supplier.

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Please let me know the product name, so that I can inquire the stock availability to the manufacturer or the supplier.

元の翻訳
I'm considering the purchase.

Will you be able to install the log in function that allows me to log in with my Twitter in the next update?
(I'm worried because it seems to be very hard.)
Also, please let me know if you know approximately when the next update will be.

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I'm considering to purchase the product. (購入の後に目的語がないので不自然な気がしました）

Will you be able to install the login function that allows me to log in with my Twitter in the next update?（←このようなWill you be able toとなると、個人的なFavorをお願いしているような雰囲気になると思うので、Are you planning to implement the function that would enable users to login with their Twitter account with the next update? のようにされたほうがいいかもしれません）
(I'm worried because the implementation of the function seems to be hard.)
Also, please let me know if you know approximately when the next update will be.

元の翻訳
Amazon saids the reasoning behind a full payment refund to the buyer is because there is no proof of delivery. I am currently demanding a certification of the delivery to USPS and the Japan Post. I should be able to send this over to you in a few days.
This certification will have the recipient's signature, so this would be solid evidence.

However I have contacted Amazon with the information above and they have told me something different again. They said that they made refunds because delay in delivery goes against their policies. But again, another department within Amazon had replied that this actually does NOT go against their policy. [Case 201941761]

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Amazon said the reasoning behind a full payment refund to the buyer is because there is no proof of delivery. I am currently demanding a certification of the delivery to USPS and the Japan Post. I should be able to send this over to you in a few days.
This certification will have the recipient's signature, so this would be a solid evidence.

However, I have contacted Amazon with the information above and they have told me something different again. They once said that they made a refund because the delay in delivery goes against their policies. But again, another department within Amazon had replied that this actually does NOT go against their policy. [Case 201941761]

元の翻訳
Amazon said the reason for full refund was not having a proof of delivery.
I am working on requesting them to UPS and Japan Post and sure it will be sent to you later.
As the signature of recipient is attached, it can be a perfect proof of delivery.

However when I told that to Amazon, they said the delivery late was against the company's policy and ↵
the refund was already done. Another department of Amazon answered it was not against the policy. [Case 201941761]

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Amazon said the reason for a full refund to the buyer was that we did not have proof of delivery.
I am working on requesting them to UPS and Japan Post, and I'm sure it will be sent to you later as an attachment.
As the signature of recipient is attached, it can be a perfect proof of delivery.

However, when I told that to Amazon, they said the delivery delay was against the company's policy and the refund was already done. Another department of Amazon, however, answered it was not against the policy. [Case 201941761]

元の翻訳
Good work at Internship.

We thank you for your work.

The transportation expense(4,30 yen ) will be transferred to your bank account with your May's saraly at 30th May.
You must return PC and security card that we lend you.
Can you bring them to our office whenever you can?
If you could, please tell us when you come to our office.

In addiction to this, we want to know the schedule that you out your dormitory.
Please let us know your schedule.

Thank you.

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Good work at Internship.

We thank you for your work.

The transportation expense (4,300 yen) will be transferred to your bank account with your salary for May to be paid on 30th May.
You must return the company PC and security card that we lend you.
Can you bring them to our office whenever you can?
If you could, please tell us when you come to our office.

In addition to this, we want to know when you schedule to move out of the dormitory.
Please let us know your schedule.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
M said he loves sushi so A took M out to revolving sushi bar for dinner. However, M doesn't want to eat sushi even though he loves it. This sushi bar only had the sushi that he doesn't like, and he was not satisfied. So A asked him to go to another restaurant, but he disagreed since he can't eat beef because of his religious reason. We found out that the stakehouse nearby didn't have menu that will not contain beef, so they went to that restaurant. A suggested the menu that does not contain beef to M. But M is worried that the food contains beef.

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A heard that M loves sushi so A took M out to revolving sushi bar for dinner. However, M doesn't want to eat sushi, his favorite. It turns out that this sushi bar only had the sushi toppings that he doesn't like, and he was not satisfied. So A asked him out to go to another restaurant, but he disagreed since he can't eat beef because of his religious reason. They found out that the steakhouse nearby served the dishes that do not contain beef, so they went to that restaurant. A suggested the menu that does not contain beef to M. But M is worried that the food contains beef.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry but I couldn't conduct the process. Please enter again.

I'm sorry but there is the place incorrectly entered. Please enter again.

"E mail address reentry" In order to confirm, Please enter again.

○○　is mandatory item.

Please enter ○○ less than △△ charcters.

○○ is not correct.

It didn't accord with confirmation.

I failed to upload,

File format is not correct.

File size is too big,

Breadwidth or heightwidth of picture is too big.

Please check above items with confirmation.

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I'm sorry, but I couldn't conduct the process. Please enter again.

I'm sorry, but there is the place incorrectly entered. Please enter again.

"Email address reentry" In order to confirm, Please enter again.

○○　is the mandatory item.

Please enter ○○ with less than △△ characters.

○○ is not correct.

It didn't match with confirmed entries.

Upload unsuccessful.

File format is not correct.

File size is too big,

Width or height of the picture is too big.

Please check after confirming the above items.

元の翻訳
Sorry for contact so many times.
After typing the non-alphabet letters in the username of Sign up page and log in user, the top page didn't appear. Instead, the URL beneath showed up. At the mean time, neither the profile icon appeared.
I tried to change the txt code of Username of data base into UTF-8, yet it ended in the same way.
Type Japanese in the First name column can log in normally.
(Top page appeared)
I would be happy if the next upgrade could fix this problem.

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Sorry for contacting you so many times.
After typing the non-alphabet letters in the username on the Sign up page for user registration, the URL below is displayed instead of the top page. At the mean time, neither the profile icon appeared.
I tried to change the txt code of Username of data base into UTF-8, yet it ended in the same way.
When I typed in Japanese for the First name column, I was able to proceed with user registration without any problem.
(Top page was displayed)
I would be happy if you can fix this problem with the next upgrade.

元の翻訳
以下の商品がAmazon.co.ukのサイトから削除されましたのでお知らせいたします。
ASIN: ●●
この商品が権利を侵害しているという権利所有者の方からの申し立てがありましたので、このような措置を取りました。当社の記録によれば、このカテゴリーで苦情をいただいたのは今回が2回目となります。
2回続けて苦情を受けた場合は販売の権利を失います。
当社のポリシーでは、他人の権利を侵害するのは禁じられています。このポリシーに関する詳細につきましては、セラーのヘルプにて「Prohibited Content」で検索してみてください。
この紛争を解決するためには、セラーの方から直接権利の所有者の方に連絡を取ってみてください。

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以下の商品がAmazon.co.ukのサイトから削除されましたのでお知らせいたします。
ASIN: ●●
この商品が権利を侵害しているという権利所有者の方からの申し立てがありましたので、このような措置を取りました。当社の記録によれば、このカテゴリーで苦情をいただいたのは今回が2回目となります。
今後また苦情を受けた場合にはあなたは販売権を失います。
当社のポリシーでは、他人の権利を侵害することは禁じられています。このポリシーに関する詳細につきましては、セラーのヘルプにて「Prohibited Content」で検索してみてください。
この紛争を解決するためには、セラーの方から直接権利の所有者の方に連絡を取ってみてください。

元の翻訳
ＩＧ7901
Thank you for contacting.
Circumstances has been investigated.
It seems the item is stuck at the outward office of exchange of Japan.
Yet the reason is about to be confirmed, it seems the knife is judged as a dangerous object.
We are now negotiating.
If it turns out difficult to ship the item we will repay you all the money,Please don't worry.
We will do our best.
Have a good day.

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ＩＧ7901
Thank you for contacting us.
We have investigated the circumstances (shipping status).
It seems that the item is stuck at the outward office of exchange in Japan.
Although the reason is yet to be confirmed, it seems that the knife is considered as a dangerous object.
We are now negotiating.
If it turns out the shipment of the item is difficult, we will give you a full refund, so please don't worry.
We will do our best.
Have a good day.

元の翻訳
素敵な手紙を同封していただきそれにも感謝いたします。

質問なんですが、フィルムを使うために箱の背後に記載してある使用方法だけでも英語に翻訳していただけませんか。
最も重要な事の例としては時間と温度の一覧表だと思っています。

環境温度は摂氏にしてください。

時間は秒単位にしてください。

他に絶対に従わなければいけない使用方法はありませんか。

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素敵な手紙を同封していただきそれにも感謝いたします。

質問なんですが、箱の裏面に記載のフィルムの使用方法だけでも英語に翻訳していただけませんか。
最も重要な点としては時間と温度の一覧表だと思っています。

環境温度は摂氏にしてください。

時間は秒単位にしてください。

他に絶対に従わなければいけない使用方法はありませんか。

元の翻訳
I just figured out that the application has a problem.
I'm very sorry for any inconvenience this may cause.
The cause of the problem is still unknown.
I plan to release the most upgraded version very soon.
I hope it will solve the problem.

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I just figured out that the app has a problem.
I'm very sorry for any inconvenience this may (have) caused you.
The cause of the problem is still unknown.
I plan to release the most upgraded version very soon.
I hope it will solve the problem.

元の翻訳
“I have understood that there was an issue with the application.
I am really sorry about it.
The cause of issue has not been found yet.
However, I am scheduling to release the latest version in a few days.
I hope the issue will be resolved by the latest version”

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“I have understood that there was an issue with the application（アプリはApp(s)と訳すのが一般的です。）.
I am really sorry about it.
The cause of the issue has not been identified yet.
However, I am scheduling to release the latest version in a few days.
I hope the issue will be resolved by the latest version”

元の翻訳
Thank you for you message.

The function of the item is stated below.
According to the content it does not have an alarm function.
Specs: White lettering, tough solar,10bar waterproof, neon light, radio receiver, automatic compensation of hand position, world timer, stopwatch, day/date calendar, white pearl (lettering color), silver (strap color).

Thank you for your message.
I would like to cancel the item please.

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Thank you for your message.

The function of the item is stated below.
According to the details, it does not have an alarm function.
Specs: White mother of peral dials, tough solar, 10bar waterproof, neon light, radio receiver, automatic compensation of hand position, world timer, stopwatch, day/date calendar, white pearl (dial color), silver (strap color).

Thank you for your message.
I would like to cancel the item please.

元の翻訳
This minicar has tape attached in the bonnet, but will it remain open when the tape is peeled off? Or is it possible to close the bonnet? So won't you be able to close the bonnet if there is no tape attached? Sorry to bother you, but please kindly let me know.

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This minicar has tape attached to the bonnet (hood), but will it remain open when the tape is peeled off? Or is it possible to close the bonnet? So won't you be able to close the bonnet(hood) if there is no tape attached? Sorry to bother you, but please kindly let me know.

元の翻訳
あなたは私がなにかぼったくろうとしていると思っているのでしょうがそれは違います。全部にロックがかかってしまったとき、私はカメラを箱に入れる準備をしながらシャッタースピードをチェックしていました。Ebayに連絡をしてカメラのシャッターが壊れたのでオークションを終了したいと申し出ました。すると終了時間までもうすぐなので入札を取り下げるようにといわれたのでそのようにしました。あなたは5秒以内に入札するように設定しましたが、私はそんなに早く対応できません。その結果私の手元にはシャッターが壊れた素敵なRolleiが残り、私はそれを修理に持っていって修復できるかどうか今日見てもらう予定です。私は何か手立てが見つかるまでは支払いをしないでほしいといったはずですよ。もし修理のほうが入札より高くつくようであればあなたに連絡しますからね。

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あなたは私がなにかぼったくろうとしていると思っているのでしょうがそれは違います。全部にロックがかかってしまったとき、私はカメラを箱に入れる準備をしながらシャッタースピードをチェックしている際にカメラがロックアップしてしまいました。Ebayにカメラのシャッターが壊れたのでオークションを終了したいと申し出ました。すると終了時間までもうすぐなので入札を取り下げるようにといわれたのでそのようにしました。あなたは5秒以内に入札するように設定しましたが、私はそんなに早く対応できません。その結果私の手元にはシャッターが壊れた素敵なRolleiが残り、私はそれを修理に持っていって修復できるかどうか今日見てもらう予定です。私は何か手立てが見つかるまでは支払いをしないでほしいといったはずですよ。もし修理のほうが入札より高くつくようであればあなたに連絡しますからね。

元の翻訳
メールありがとうございます。間違った商品をお送りしてしまい大変申し訳ありません。私は貴方が受け取った物品すべてに対して払い戻しを要求しています。この方法で、貴方の支払ったものが正しく配送されるまでに2－4日容赦ください。貴方にとって不便なことをお許しください。

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メールありがとうございます。間違った商品をお送りしてしまい大変申し訳ありません。私は貴方が受け取った物品すべてに対して払い戻しを要求しています。お客様のお支払い口座への返金が反映には2－4日ご容赦ください。今回お客様にご不便をおかけして申し訳ございません。

元の翻訳
あなたのメールをありがとうございました。私はあなたが間違った商品を受け取ったことを非常に残念と思っています。私はあなたが受け取った項目については全額を返金することを要求しました。お支払先に返金をするには2〜4日かかります。私はこれがあなたを起こしていることをご迷惑をおかけして申し訳ございません。

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メールをご送信いただきありがとうございました。間違った商品が届いたのこと、非常に申し訳ございません。お客様が受け取られた商品については全額返金を手配いたしました。お支払方法に返金をするには2〜4日かかります。私はこれがあなたを起こしていることをご迷惑をおかけして申し訳ございません。

元の翻訳
The problem this time is that the explanation was different from your fact.
If you listed a correct explanation, I did not purchase it.
In other words, the cause of the problem is you.
For this reason, I insist that you should pay the returning shipping charge.

If you do not pay this shipping charge, i propose that you refund part of the price↵
↵
without returning the item. In case of returning part of the price, it is dollars that is half of the price.

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The problem this time is that the description was different from fact provided by you.
If you listed a correct explanation, I would not have purchased it.
In other words, the cause of the problem is you.
For this reason, I demand that you should pay the returning shipping charge.

If you do not agree to pay this shipping charge, I propose that you give me a partial refund while I keep the item without returning. In case you choose to give me a partial refund, the amount should be XXdollars, which is a half of the total amount that I have paid.