Chris Ishii　 (bluejeans71) — 付けたレビュー

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I am so sorry for the sudden email. I have something to apologise for.
On that day, despite having a promise to meet the two of us, I met you with other fans. She spoke to me as if she knew me. Though I was pleased, as I have a promise that I meet you, I tried to keep myself away from her but I couldn't make it. I am sorry if I made you an unpleasant feeling. That is a thing that I mind, so I dm you. I hope you could have wonderful shows until the end.↵

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I am so sorry for the sudden email. I have something to apologise (apologize) for.
On that day, I was supposed to meet the two of us, I met you with other fans. She spoke to me as if she knew me. Though I was pleased, I had an appointment with you, so I tried to be away from her but I couldn't make it. I am sorry if it made you unpleasant. That is a thing that I mind, so I dm you. I hope your remaining performances will be over safe and sound.

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こんにちは。私の名前はシン・アニュです。このメッセージを読むための時間をお取りくださりありがとうございまう。

貴方がヤフーにおいて販売しているこのカセットについて質問があります。
現在私は海外にいます。日本のクレジットカードで正当にお支払いできると思います。
このカセットを受け取るためのメールボックスを日本に持っております。

ヤフーが私の支払いを拒絶した場合、友人がコンビニにおいて支払ってくれます。

入札に先立ちこの方法が良いかどうかを知りたいです。その理由は、これにより1日または2日の遅れが出るかもしれないからです。
これが奏功した場合、今後、多くの商品を貴方から購入します。

よろしくお願いします。
シン

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こんにちは。私の名前はショーン•アグニューです。このメッセージを読むための時間をお取りくださりありがとうございます。

貴方がヤフーにおいて販売しているこのカセットについて質問があります。
現在私は海外にいます。日本のクレジットカードで問題なくお支払いできると思います。
私はこのカセットを受け取る私書箱を日本に所有して↵
おります。

ヤフーが私の支払いを拒絶した場合、友人がコンビニにおいて支払ってくれます。

入札に先立ちこの方法が良いかどうかを知りたいです。その理由は、これにより1日または2日の遅れが出るかもしれないからです。
問題なければ今後、多くの商品を貴方に注文します。

よろしくお願いします。
ショーン

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There are two pieces of PO. But as item is packed for shipment, our invoice number is the same. The same number is no problem.

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There are two pieces of PO. But as the item is packed for shipment, our invoice number is the same. So there is no problem with having the same number for these two.

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I have reported this to eBay's office.
If it is not solved, eBay has told me to report to the police in my country.
Selling a fake is a real fraud.
Your store may not be able to open.
Please refund the amount I told you in my previous email via PayPal.
We will return the remaining items if you wish.
I don't need a fake.
Please pay for the return shipping cost.
I do not need any fakes.
You are responsible for return shipping.

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I have reported this to eBay's office.
If it is not solved, eBay has told me to report to the police in my country.
Selling a fake is a real fraud.
Your store may not be able to open.
Please refund the amount I told you in my previous email via PayPal.
We will return the remaining items if you wish.
I don't need a fake.
Please pay for the return shipping cost.
I do not need any fakes.
You are responsible for the return shipping.

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Please do not break the ice in the cave.
If you do, that makes damage to property. You will be fined 300,000 yen for that.
There used to be three huts in this cave about 300 years ago.
Since the temperature was low here, even in summer, early people used the cave as a refrigerator.
They kept the eggs of silkworms in the cave
Since silkworms are larvae of insects, they create cocoons only once a year.
People controlled the timing for making cocoons by artificially making the silkworms hibernate in the cave in winter to produce cocoons in a mass.
Eggs of silkworms were sent here from all over the country and were stored frozen.
I have my tour guide history of 12 years.

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Please do not break the ice in the cave.
If you do, that makes damage to property. You will be fined 300,000 yen for that.
There used to be three huts in this cave about 100 years ago.
Since the temperature was low here, even in summer, people in those days used the cave as a refrigerator.
They kept the eggs of silkworms in the cave
Since silkworms are larvae of insects, they create cocoons only once a year.
People controlled the timing for making cocoons by artificially making the silkworms hibernate in the cave in winter to produce cocoons in a mass.
Eggs of silkworms were sent here from all over the country and were stored frozen here inside the cave.
I have been a tour guide for 12 years.

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Please do not break the ice in the cave.

It will result in damage to property. If you break it, you will be fined 300,000 yen.

About 100 years ago, three cabins used to exist in this cave.

The temperature is low even in summer, so the old people utilized the cave as a substitute for a refrigerator.

People used to store silkworm eggs in the caves.

Since silkworms are insects, they make cocoons only once a year.

By artificially hibernating them in the caves, the timing of cocoon production was controlled to mass-produce silkworms.

Silkworm eggs were sent from all over the country and were frozen and stored in this cave.

I have been a guide of this cave for 12 years.

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Please do not break the ice in the cave.

It will result in damage to property. If you break it, you will be fined 300,000 yen.

About 100 years ago, three cabins used to exist in this cave.

The temperature is low even in summer, so people used to utilize the cave as a substitute for a refrigerator.

People used to store silkworm eggs in the caves.

Since silkworms are insects, they make cocoons only once a year.

By artificially hibernating them in the caves, the timing of cocoon production was controlled to mass-produce silkworms.

Silkworm eggs were sent from all over the country and were frozen and stored in this cave.

I have been a guide of this cave for 12 years.

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Our company deleted AMS sent by us because MOL LOGISTICS issued HBL and sent AMS. We would like to handle it if we can resolve any problems by resending AMS.

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We deleted the AMS we had sent earlier because MOL LOGISTICS issued HBL and sent AMS. We would like to handle it if we can resolve any problem by resending AMS.

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I am sorry for the delay in replying.
This fountain pen does not have the year of manufacture or any other marking engraved on the nib, so I cannot determine the exact year it was manufactured.
However, this model was manufactured for several years after its release in 1971.
I hope this helps and you would take it into positive consideration.

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I am sorry for the delay in replying.
This fountain pen does not have the year of manufacture or any other marking engraved on the nib, so I cannot determine when it was manufactured.
However, this model was manufactured for several years after its release in 1971.
I hope this helps and you would positively consider.

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1,
Is anyone going to the Blade show in Texas? I really wanna the knife.... So I will be waiting for your message who is kindly help me out!

2,
An era of real size with RC body may become popular!?😆
A famous custom body maker in Japan has released new product!
I hope I want everyone to see the high quality body that made in Japan, but it is the high level of production.

3,
I think this maker is very rare because it sells for only Japan, in which the same maker as 86 I made for you.

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1,
Is anyone going to the Blade show in Texas? I really want the knife.... So I will be waiting for your message who is kindly help me out!

2,
An era of real size with RC body may become popular!?😆
A famous custom body maker in Japan has released new product!
I hope that everyone will see the high quality body made in Japan, but it is the high level of production.

3,
I think this maker is very rare because it sells only inside Japan, in which the same maker as 86 I made for you.

元の翻訳
Currently your item is on the way to you, and we cannot refund for it.
The refunding condition is either you will not accept the item and it comes back to Japan or you can ask for refund after you have received it. As you, I cannot get in tough with the forwarder and I cannot proceed the shipment to stop. Because of your customs or forwarder, it is hard to see it goes as we expect. And so please understand this situation.

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Currently your item is on the way to you, and we cannot refund for it.
The refunding condition is either you will not accept the item and it comes back to Japan or you can ask for refund after you have received it. As you, I cannot get in touch with the forwarder and I cannot proceed the shipment to stop. Because of your customs or forwarder, it is hard to see it goes as we expect. And so please understand this situation.

元の翻訳
Your ur items are unable for the refund because of being in the middle of shipping now.
For a condition towards the refund, if the items return to Japan without your receiving or you claim a refund after you receive them. Same as you, I can't contact the courier company or I can't make the shipping faster or earlier.
Everything doesn't go as you think due to the customs office or courier company of your country.
I hope you could understand the situation.
With regards.

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Your items are being delivered now, so I cannot refund you.
For a condition towards the refund, if the items return to Japan without your receiving or you claim a refund after you receive them. Same as you, I can't contact the courier company or I can't make the shipping faster or earlier.
Everything doesn't go as you think due to the customs office or courier company of your country.
I hope you could understand the situation.
With regards.

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Thank you for sending product.
I just transferred payment to you from Wise just before so please check.
It was good to know ○○' shoulder got better.
I was worried about it much so feel easy now.
We are doing good everyday.
We are running out inventory of AA and BB so would you make them for me ?

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Thank you for sending the product.
I just transferred payment to you from Wise just before so please check.
It was good to know ○○' shoulder got better.
I was worried about it much so I feel better now.
We are doing good everyday.
We are running out inventory of AA and BB so would you make them for me ?

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Thank you for your concern.
I am glad to hear from you about the pictures of the beautiful scenes in Switzerland.
The symptom was horrible because the fever was still high and the cough was continued. But, from yesterday, I started recovering, my fever was down, and feel better. I have a high-risk person, which makes me scared more.

I will be back to my work if my PCR test would be negative next Monday.

How is the situation in Switzerland?
In Tokyo, the number of patients is dramatically decreasing and dozens of people have got positive in each day.

If I am a positive person, I would be think that I am lucky to less have chance to get covid by recovering. lol

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Thank you for your concern.
I am glad to hear from you about the pictures of the beautiful scenes in Switzerland.
The symptom was horrible because the fever was still high and the cough continued. But I started recovering yesterday; my fever was down and I feel better now. I have a chronic disease, which scared me a lot even more.

I will be back to my work next Monday if the result of my PCR test would be negative next Monday.

How is the situation in Switzerland?
In Tokyo, the number of patients has dramatically decreased and dozens of people have been positive in each day.

If I think of the situation more positive, I am lucky to have fewer chances to get Covid-19 once I recover from it.

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Thank you for your paying attention.
I was at easy as I heard that vaccine shot began in united stetes of America.

I thought that I would like to thank all the people who were involved with↵
medicine sacrifying themselves in order to save so many people life such as researchers.

Today, I was in charge of setting the machine that recording the scene of the doctors and↵
the nurses who battle with in the front of emergent medicine as work,
It was so hard tasks that it is so beyond my imagine. They battle with weeping over...

I was ashamed....
The value is depending on people but I thought that the life is the most important.↵
I experienced as such.

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Thank you for your concern.
I felt relieved to know that vaccination against had begun in the US.

I cannot express my thanks too much to all the health care workers and researchers for their dedication to save our lives.

Today I was in charge of setting the machines to shoot the doctors and nurses working in the front line to save the lives of patients.
The task was much harder than I had imagined. was so hard a task that it is so beyond my imagine. They were battling with tears in their eyes.

I was ashamed....
Each one of us has different values and points of view. But this experience taught me that nothing would be more valuable than life.

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I do not resell products in U.S.A.
I do not have a seller's permit in Florida, as I do not need one.
I always send the package to an agent in Florida which forwards shipment internationally.

It would be simple if I could fill in the form and send it back to you, but I can't finish the form as I don't resell products in Florida.

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I do not resell products in the U.S.A.
I do not have a seller's permit in Florida, as I do not need one.
I always send the package to an agent in Florida which forwards shipment internationally.

It would be simple if I could fill in the form and send it back to you, but I can't finish the form as I don't them in Florida.

元の翻訳
金額によりますが、メールアドレスを教えてもらい、見積もりを作ってお伝えすることもできますが、そのつもりはありますか？

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金額にもよりますが、メールアドレスをご連絡いただければ、見積もりを作成後、月曜日にご連絡差し上げる↵
ことも可能ですが、いかがなさいますか？

元の翻訳
Do you mean the "previous package" as the item I ordered first?
As I said before, the item I first ordered has not arrived yet.

I will let you know when it arrives. Isn't it missing?

Though the status shows it has already arrived, It hasn't arrived at my home yet.
I haven't received the item yet. Please check it.

Regards

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Do you mean the "previous package" as the item I ordered first?
↵
As I said before, the item I first ordered has not arrived yet.

I will let you know when it arrives. Isn't it missing?

Though the status shows it has already arrived, it hasn't arrived at my home yet.
I haven't had received the item yet. Please check it.

Regards